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Posted: Tue Jan 03, 2012 3:23 pm
So I've been thinking and I think Sachiko would be the dominate one (though Ren is transgendered, I might do one picture showing her female side since people voted. I can also make Ren genderqueer as it is called, where Ren doesn't really think of him/herself as either but the pronounces zim/zer/zir/ze would just get confusing and would probably forget.
I don't know, maybe I will make a poll.
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Posted: Tue Jan 03, 2012 4:28 pm
Messy work in progress, but here is the reference sheet I have been working on. What do you think- http://fav.me/d4l7qo3
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Posted: Tue Jan 03, 2012 7:40 pm
I was thinking of giving Ren a kekkei genkai/doujutsu where when activate, it can sort of give them night vision or to help see better in the mist. It gives them an advantage during certain situations, but not overpowered. A lot would depend on skills and knowledge. The color might not change much, just might have a soft glow to them.
It would be called yami no me or eye of darkness.
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Posted: Wed Jan 04, 2012 8:10 am
So do you think this is a good and respectable character or does it need more work? I need to know so I can finish it and develop them and their story. sweatdrop
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Posted: Wed Jan 04, 2012 12:22 pm
I was thinking that with the doujutsu, the disadvantage would be the amount of chakra used to keep it activated. They can only use for so long before they have to deactivate it again so they aren't completely drained.
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Posted: Wed Jan 04, 2012 12:50 pm
Once I finish the reference sheet, I guess I will go back and focus on the bio/profile.
To me, to character references and bios are very important, just as important as the plot if not more so as you need characters before you can start the story.
I can't really work on any story for Ren until this is completed.
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Posted: Thu Jan 05, 2012 8:23 am
Aw, come on people. At least vote if you aren't going to post. emo
I've been working and trying hard and try to post on other people's stuff, it's only fair right?
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Posted: Thu Jan 05, 2012 1:42 pm
I thought about giving Ren a scar, most likely on their back. It can add to character and their story, I just need to think of a good story for how they don't it and why.
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Posted: Thu Jan 05, 2012 9:17 pm
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Posted: Fri Jan 06, 2012 10:18 am
Well the bio is done, now to finish the sheet. I hope it is o.k., I just went with what I though was alright and more realistic since I didn't really get much advice.
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Posted: Fri Jan 06, 2012 12:31 pm
I edited the profile to explain some things in more detail and add to the likes and dislikes to add more depth to the character. My works are the focus right now since it takes a lot work and planning.
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Posted: Tue Jan 10, 2012 3:44 pm
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Posted: Wed Jan 11, 2012 10:25 pm
Bored as hell and have no one to talk to or really give me opinions, so I am just working on Ren's profile sheet.
I gave Ren a studded belt and thinking of either coloring in rainbow colors or the colors for transgender pride as that would make sense for him.
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Posted: Thu Jan 12, 2012 2:44 pm
Ugh, this is taking way to long. Hopefully the line art would be done today or tomorrow. Well update- http://fav.me/d4m4vja
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Posted: Fri Jan 13, 2012 1:47 am
Ugh, after about a month or so, I am finally done with the line art for the reference sheet and profile. Just need to color it now. http://fav.me/d4m6kd2This and Karasu's one bio took the longest, Ren taking longer due to trying to make him a respectable and realistic character (as far a Naruto OCs go, but can use Ren outside of Naruto).
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