Hey, I've noticed a few things about the way you roleplay and while you say that Shen is a knowledgeable man, you're making him sound like he has a problem with English xD
For example;
Shen
"Excuse me, miss, would you be honored to join me at my table this evening?" he asked with a small bow.
instead of "I would be honored if you joined me at my table blah blah";
and
Shen
"If you will, would you be obliged to join me on a walk?"
--I don't know what you were trying to say here but obliged is definitely the wrong word you're looking for xDD
I don't know whether these slips are like.. intentional or "author's mistake", but if they're the former, you might wanna consider putting a note about his English skills somewhere in the profile?
If they're unintentional (which I sure hope they aren't, that would embarrass me
rofl )... |D;; My bad.
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