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 Posted: Tue Sep 15, 2009 10:39 am
Sushi The Mermaid Amazing! All of these stories are so enchanting, even beliveable! I love all of them! I have a idea! OH OH ME ME!!! Yes, my idea is that we take all of these stories, and put them into a little book on our computers! That way, even if we leave the guild or stop playing gaia, we can all remember the times we wrote the stories and read them over again! biggrin Of course we would say who wrote them and not be like "OH YAH! I CREATED THOSE AWESOME STORIES ABOUT MERPEOPLE! -secretly rubs hands- muahahahha!" lol What ya say? I am NEVER going to leave you guys or gaia or this forum! That's a PROMISE!
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Posted: Tue Sep 15, 2009 3:00 pm
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Posted: Sat Sep 19, 2009 1:44 am
iMermaid Nya nya~
Interesting stories,
I hope mine is as amazing as yours. ^_^;
♪In my kingdom below the human's world, where our birds are touchable, our world is colder, our birds don't sing, and most of all, we've two identities. It is no lie that merpeople turn into a human guise upon the touch of land, but meeting a human is where it all happens. Since merpeople are fairly romanticly orientated and beautiful as can be, we never figure out what we find so enchanting about humans. I, too, have fallen victim to a human's charm. So to stop myself from staying above my beloved home's grasp, I blindfolded myself to keep from the eye-candy the human world has to offer. But sure enough I couldn't help myself. I wanted to see this human again so badly! I went back up to the surface world, and began to sing the song he was delighted by. No later than a few seconds of my singing, he was there! He approached me, and I couldn't help but blush. Oh how much joy was filling my heart. But, this is quixotic, I know I can't be with him, he said he didn't care about the distance between us. Just as long as he gets to see my beautiful face he would be satisfied. I was joyous, and embraced him tightly. He gave me a beautiful anenome that was soft and was much more fragile than ours. It was white, and had an exquisite scent. He called it a 'winter rose'. I was elated. I wished to bring him to my home, my kingdom, Atlantis... but as soon as he agreed... how was I to know humans could not breathe underwater? As soon as I realised he needed 'air'...much rather human air, I rushed to the surface in hopes of him recovering...but I was much too late. I sang his song once more, and kissed him trying to get the water out of his human lungs. Try as I may, I couldn't bring him back. I still weep this very day from this murder. How was I to know...he was so different? I return to the human world and pick his winter roses and place them upon his grave that I have embroidered with the finest jewels. And I keep some for myself, except I take the petals and make a rain of it. I remember his gentle touch, like how the petals touch my skin... and I still remember... ♪ Chez, I'm makin' a story reprising yours, I hope you don't mind ;D She never did find my corpse, and it was better that way. The only thing I left for her was a collar made of the finest material, made from the one thing she loved more than anything; the roses. I gave it to her when she first told me she loves me. I can't ever forget her face.
THe way she smiled at me, the way she sang for me, her gentle eyes, her soft lips to mine, she was the only thing I wanted. Being a prince and all wasn't entirely suiting though. I was to be engaged to a woman I do not know. I did not like any of the princesses of any kingdom...above the sea that is. THere was only one princess for me, and I had to have her, and none other. She asked me to come see her kingdom, and I thought, it was deep below the sea, was it not? I told her I would the following day. But in the time I was not ready to see her, I was ondering about if I could join her, be one of her kind. THen I came across a mysterious woman in white. She had told me that if I were to find a black pearl amongst the sandy shores of her beach, then I may keep it and as soon as the touch of a mermaid princess's lips touch mine, I would gradually turn into a merman with the touch of pure sea water. I agreed to do her bidding, anything for her, anthing to be with my true love! I searched and searched, until I was chanting 'cherche! cherche!' over and over aloud. I found it! I found it! I leaped with joy, and hope in my eyes. ANd the woman smiled and walked to me with her hand out toward me chanting some strange enchantment. And I felt a bit strange after words. But never the less, I was eager to see my sweet, my princess, my lover. I couldn't find her until I heard her sweet song I fell in love with. I approached her, hiding the pearl in my cloak's brooch. I kissed her and held her. And we were off to her kingdom. Strange as I was feeling already, I suddenly blacked out. ANd before I know it, I felt her lips on mine and I could hear her cries. I thought to myself, what's going on? What's the matter? I tried to speak or even open my eyes but could not. I wasn't even breathing either! How could this be...? ANd then I heard people in the distance and her splash of impact of the sea shore. I instantly flew up, and my eyes ripped open. How peculiar! Attempting to stand, I felt a terrible pain in my legs. They began to stick together and mush together. I grew a merman's tail! Unbelievable! I could not understand what had happened, and then I remembered the white woman. I was over-joyed and I went into the water to search for my princess. That is when everything came crashing down and into my heart. She must've thought I was dead! Her weeping, her mouth to mine, she must've tried to save me! ...My mortal, human self. I cannot just waltz in on her saying I am alive....not now. I began to weep as heavily as gravity pulls people down. My eyes felt as if they were to bleed, I could not be with her for now. I do not know when I may go back to her, but now is not the time. I do ever wonder if she thinks of me... I resurface to the shore often and pick her belovedly favoured winter roses, and rub the petals to my cheek. I caress it as her gentle and soft hands would my face. I will search for her soon, I will find her, and I will make her mine...
(Sorry for it being long, guys! I just got really into it! ^ 3 ^;;**
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Posted: Sat Sep 19, 2009 9:44 am
iMarthy iMermaid Nya nya~
Interesting stories,
I hope mine is as amazing as yours. ^_^;
♪In my kingdom below the human's world, where our birds are touchable, our world is colder, our birds don't sing, and most of all, we've two identities. It is no lie that merpeople turn into a human guise upon the touch of land, but meeting a human is where it all happens. Since merpeople are fairly romanticly orientated and beautiful as can be, we never figure out what we find so enchanting about humans. I, too, have fallen victim to a human's charm. So to stop myself from staying above my beloved home's grasp, I blindfolded myself to keep from the eye-candy the human world has to offer. But sure enough I couldn't help myself. I wanted to see this human again so badly! I went back up to the surface world, and began to sing the song he was delighted by. No later than a few seconds of my singing, he was there! He approached me, and I couldn't help but blush. Oh how much joy was filling my heart. But, this is quixotic, I know I can't be with him, he said he didn't care about the distance between us. Just as long as he gets to see my beautiful face he would be satisfied. I was joyous, and embraced him tightly. He gave me a beautiful anenome that was soft and was much more fragile than ours. It was white, and had an exquisite scent. He called it a 'winter rose'. I was elated. I wished to bring him to my home, my kingdom, Atlantis... but as soon as he agreed... how was I to know humans could not breathe underwater? As soon as I realised he needed 'air'...much rather human air, I rushed to the surface in hopes of him recovering...but I was much too late. I sang his song once more, and kissed him trying to get the water out of his human lungs. Try as I may, I couldn't bring him back. I still weep this very day from this murder. How was I to know...he was so different? I return to the human world and pick his winter roses and place them upon his grave that I have embroidered with the finest jewels. And I keep some for myself, except I take the petals and make a rain of it. I remember his gentle touch, like how the petals touch my skin... and I still remember... ♪ Chez, I'm makin' a story reprising yours, I hope you don't mind ;D She never did find my corpse, and it was better that way. The only thing I left for her was a collar made of the finest material, made from the one thing she loved more than anything; the roses. I gave it to her when she first told me she loves me. I can't ever forget her face.
THe way she smiled at me, the way she sang for me, her gentle eyes, her soft lips to mine, she was the only thing I wanted. Being a prince and all wasn't entirely suiting though. I was to be engaged to a woman I do not know. I did not like any of the princesses of any kingdom...above the sea that is. THere was only one princess for me, and I had to have her, and none other. She asked me to come see her kingdom, and I thought, it was deep below the sea, was it not? I told her I would the following day. But in the time I was not ready to see her, I was ondering about if I could join her, be one of her kind. THen I came across a mysterious woman in white. She had told me that if I were to find a black pearl amongst the sandy shores of her beach, then I may keep it and as soon as the touch of a mermaid princess's lips touch mine, I would gradually turn into a merman with the touch of pure sea water. I agreed to do her bidding, anything for her, anthing to be with my true love! I searched and searched, until I was chanting 'cherche! cherche!' over and over aloud. I found it! I found it! I leaped with joy, and hope in my eyes. ANd the woman smiled and walked to me with her hand out toward me chanting some strange enchantment. And I felt a bit strange after words. But never the less, I was eager to see my sweet, my princess, my lover. I couldn't find her until I heard her sweet song I fell in love with. I approached her, hiding the pearl in my cloak's brooch. I kissed her and held her. And we were off to her kingdom. Strange as I was feeling already, I suddenly blacked out. ANd before I know it, I felt her lips on mine and I could hear her cries. I thought to myself, what's going on? What's the matter? I tried to speak or even open my eyes but could not. I wasn't even breathing either! How could this be...? ANd then I heard people in the distance and her splash of impact of the sea shore. I instantly flew up, and my eyes ripped open. How peculiar! Attempting to stand, I felt a terrible pain in my legs. They began to stick together and mush together. I grew a merman's tail! Unbelievable! I could not understand what had happened, and then I remembered the white woman. I was over-joyed and I went into the water to search for my princess. That is when everything came crashing down and into my heart. She must've thought I was dead! Her weeping, her mouth to mine, she must've tried to save me! ...My mortal, human self. I cannot just waltz in on her saying I am alive....not now. I began to weep as heavily as gravity pulls people down. My eyes felt as if they were to bleed, I could not be with her for now. I do not know when I may go back to her, but now is not the time. I do ever wonder if she thinks of me... I resurface to the shore often and pick her belovedly favoured winter roses, and rub the petals to my cheek. I caress it as her gentle and soft hands would my face. I will search for her soon, I will find her, and I will make her mine...
(Sorry for it being long, guys! I just got really into it! ^ 3 ^;;** wow he didnt die! YAY!!
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Posted: Sat Sep 19, 2009 12:40 pm
Azareas123 iMarthy iMermaid Nya nya~
Interesting stories,
I hope mine is as amazing as yours. ^_^;
♪In my kingdom below the human's world, where our birds are touchable, our world is colder, our birds don't sing, and most of all, we've two identities. It is no lie that merpeople turn into a human guise upon the touch of land, but meeting a human is where it all happens. Since merpeople are fairly romanticly orientated and beautiful as can be, we never figure out what we find so enchanting about humans. I, too, have fallen victim to a human's charm. So to stop myself from staying above my beloved home's grasp, I blindfolded myself to keep from the eye-candy the human world has to offer. But sure enough I couldn't help myself. I wanted to see this human again so badly! I went back up to the surface world, and began to sing the song he was delighted by. No later than a few seconds of my singing, he was there! He approached me, and I couldn't help but blush. Oh how much joy was filling my heart. But, this is quixotic, I know I can't be with him, he said he didn't care about the distance between us. Just as long as he gets to see my beautiful face he would be satisfied. I was joyous, and embraced him tightly. He gave me a beautiful anenome that was soft and was much more fragile than ours. It was white, and had an exquisite scent. He called it a 'winter rose'. I was elated. I wished to bring him to my home, my kingdom, Atlantis... but as soon as he agreed... how was I to know humans could not breathe underwater? As soon as I realised he needed 'air'...much rather human air, I rushed to the surface in hopes of him recovering...but I was much too late. I sang his song once more, and kissed him trying to get the water out of his human lungs. Try as I may, I couldn't bring him back. I still weep this very day from this murder. How was I to know...he was so different? I return to the human world and pick his winter roses and place them upon his grave that I have embroidered with the finest jewels. And I keep some for myself, except I take the petals and make a rain of it. I remember his gentle touch, like how the petals touch my skin... and I still remember... ♪ Chez, I'm makin' a story reprising yours, I hope you don't mind ;D She never did find my corpse, and it was better that way. The only thing I left for her was a collar made of the finest material, made from the one thing she loved more than anything; the roses. I gave it to her when she first told me she loves me. I can't ever forget her face.
THe way she smiled at me, the way she sang for me, her gentle eyes, her soft lips to mine, she was the only thing I wanted. Being a prince and all wasn't entirely suiting though. I was to be engaged to a woman I do not know. I did not like any of the princesses of any kingdom...above the sea that is. THere was only one princess for me, and I had to have her, and none other. She asked me to come see her kingdom, and I thought, it was deep below the sea, was it not? I told her I would the following day. But in the time I was not ready to see her, I was ondering about if I could join her, be one of her kind. THen I came across a mysterious woman in white. She had told me that if I were to find a black pearl amongst the sandy shores of her beach, then I may keep it and as soon as the touch of a mermaid princess's lips touch mine, I would gradually turn into a merman with the touch of pure sea water. I agreed to do her bidding, anything for her, anthing to be with my true love! I searched and searched, until I was chanting 'cherche! cherche!' over and over aloud. I found it! I found it! I leaped with joy, and hope in my eyes. ANd the woman smiled and walked to me with her hand out toward me chanting some strange enchantment. And I felt a bit strange after words. But never the less, I was eager to see my sweet, my princess, my lover. I couldn't find her until I heard her sweet song I fell in love with. I approached her, hiding the pearl in my cloak's brooch. I kissed her and held her. And we were off to her kingdom. Strange as I was feeling already, I suddenly blacked out. ANd before I know it, I felt her lips on mine and I could hear her cries. I thought to myself, what's going on? What's the matter? I tried to speak or even open my eyes but could not. I wasn't even breathing either! How could this be...? ANd then I heard people in the distance and her splash of impact of the sea shore. I instantly flew up, and my eyes ripped open. How peculiar! Attempting to stand, I felt a terrible pain in my legs. They began to stick together and mush together. I grew a merman's tail! Unbelievable! I could not understand what had happened, and then I remembered the white woman. I was over-joyed and I went into the water to search for my princess. That is when everything came crashing down and into my heart. She must've thought I was dead! Her weeping, her mouth to mine, she must've tried to save me! ...My mortal, human self. I cannot just waltz in on her saying I am alive....not now. I began to weep as heavily as gravity pulls people down. My eyes felt as if they were to bleed, I could not be with her for now. I do not know when I may go back to her, but now is not the time. I do ever wonder if she thinks of me... I resurface to the shore often and pick her belovedly favoured winter roses, and rub the petals to my cheek. I caress it as her gentle and soft hands would my face. I will search for her soon, I will find her, and I will make her mine...
(Sorry for it being long, guys! I just got really into it! ^ 3 ^;;** wow he didnt die! YAY!! Yeah lol.
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Posted: Sat Sep 19, 2009 12:46 pm
iMarthy Azareas123 iMarthy iMermaid Nya nya~
Interesting stories,
I hope mine is as amazing as yours. ^_^;
♪In my kingdom below the human's world, where our birds are touchable, our world is colder, our birds don't sing, and most of all, we've two identities. It is no lie that merpeople turn into a human guise upon the touch of land, but meeting a human is where it all happens. Since merpeople are fairly romanticly orientated and beautiful as can be, we never figure out what we find so enchanting about humans. I, too, have fallen victim to a human's charm. So to stop myself from staying above my beloved home's grasp, I blindfolded myself to keep from the eye-candy the human world has to offer. But sure enough I couldn't help myself. I wanted to see this human again so badly! I went back up to the surface world, and began to sing the song he was delighted by. No later than a few seconds of my singing, he was there! He approached me, and I couldn't help but blush. Oh how much joy was filling my heart. But, this is quixotic, I know I can't be with him, he said he didn't care about the distance between us. Just as long as he gets to see my beautiful face he would be satisfied. I was joyous, and embraced him tightly. He gave me a beautiful anenome that was soft and was much more fragile than ours. It was white, and had an exquisite scent. He called it a 'winter rose'. I was elated. I wished to bring him to my home, my kingdom, Atlantis... but as soon as he agreed... how was I to know humans could not breathe underwater? As soon as I realised he needed 'air'...much rather human air, I rushed to the surface in hopes of him recovering...but I was much too late. I sang his song once more, and kissed him trying to get the water out of his human lungs. Try as I may, I couldn't bring him back. I still weep this very day from this murder. How was I to know...he was so different? I return to the human world and pick his winter roses and place them upon his grave that I have embroidered with the finest jewels. And I keep some for myself, except I take the petals and make a rain of it. I remember his gentle touch, like how the petals touch my skin... and I still remember... ♪ Chez, I'm makin' a story reprising yours, I hope you don't mind ;D She never did find my corpse, and it was better that way. The only thing I left for her was a collar made of the finest material, made from the one thing she loved more than anything; the roses. I gave it to her when she first told me she loves me. I can't ever forget her face.
THe way she smiled at me, the way she sang for me, her gentle eyes, her soft lips to mine, she was the only thing I wanted. Being a prince and all wasn't entirely suiting though. I was to be engaged to a woman I do not know. I did not like any of the princesses of any kingdom...above the sea that is. THere was only one princess for me, and I had to have her, and none other. She asked me to come see her kingdom, and I thought, it was deep below the sea, was it not? I told her I would the following day. But in the time I was not ready to see her, I was ondering about if I could join her, be one of her kind. THen I came across a mysterious woman in white. She had told me that if I were to find a black pearl amongst the sandy shores of her beach, then I may keep it and as soon as the touch of a mermaid princess's lips touch mine, I would gradually turn into a merman with the touch of pure sea water. I agreed to do her bidding, anything for her, anthing to be with my true love! I searched and searched, until I was chanting 'cherche! cherche!' over and over aloud. I found it! I found it! I leaped with joy, and hope in my eyes. ANd the woman smiled and walked to me with her hand out toward me chanting some strange enchantment. And I felt a bit strange after words. But never the less, I was eager to see my sweet, my princess, my lover. I couldn't find her until I heard her sweet song I fell in love with. I approached her, hiding the pearl in my cloak's brooch. I kissed her and held her. And we were off to her kingdom. Strange as I was feeling already, I suddenly blacked out. ANd before I know it, I felt her lips on mine and I could hear her cries. I thought to myself, what's going on? What's the matter? I tried to speak or even open my eyes but could not. I wasn't even breathing either! How could this be...? ANd then I heard people in the distance and her splash of impact of the sea shore. I instantly flew up, and my eyes ripped open. How peculiar! Attempting to stand, I felt a terrible pain in my legs. They began to stick together and mush together. I grew a merman's tail! Unbelievable! I could not understand what had happened, and then I remembered the white woman. I was over-joyed and I went into the water to search for my princess. That is when everything came crashing down and into my heart. She must've thought I was dead! Her weeping, her mouth to mine, she must've tried to save me! ...My mortal, human self. I cannot just waltz in on her saying I am alive....not now. I began to weep as heavily as gravity pulls people down. My eyes felt as if they were to bleed, I could not be with her for now. I do not know when I may go back to her, but now is not the time. I do ever wonder if she thinks of me... I resurface to the shore often and pick her belovedly favoured winter roses, and rub the petals to my cheek. I caress it as her gentle and soft hands would my face. I will search for her soon, I will find her, and I will make her mine...
(Sorry for it being long, guys! I just got really into it! ^ 3 ^;;** wow he didnt die! YAY!! Yeah lol.
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Posted: Sat Sep 26, 2009 4:48 pm
At first it won't sound like a mermaid story, but just keep reading.
It was just another ordinary day. I walked through the towns anxious to reach my beloved's house. The moonlight shined down on the land as if it was lighting my way. I was almost there when I heard a woman call out. My eyes scanned the area. I finally found the elderly woman, she was wearing a hooded cloak and she looked like she was injured. I immediately rushed over to her. "Oh my goodness! Ma'am are you alright?" I said grabbing the woman's are, trying to keep her steady. Her eyes met mine and she started laughing wickedly. I jumped back, startled by this sudden change in her character. "You are the vampire, that took my son's life aren't you?" She said in a raspy voice. My eyes widened as the memories of the night I claimed my first victim flashed in my head. A man about the age of 20 was walking with the old woman on a night as black as coal. I had been turned into a vampire 3 weeks before and everything I tried to eat stung my throat and burned my insides. I was desperate for food when I saw him and I lost control of my body. When my eyes opened again I saw him blood drained corpse laying beside me, and the old woman laying on the ground crying her eyes out. I had always regretted that day, and it will haunt me for the rest of my life.
The woman grabbed my arm and injected my with a potion that numbed my body, taking away my ability to move. "Now, I will have my revenge. You will pay for killing him." She laughed. I sat there trying to call out for my beloved, but no matter how hard I tried, no sound came out. "Don't fret my dear. I'm not going to kill you." She said sweetly but sarcastically. "But what I am going to do is make sure you can never return to the land you love, or see the moon you worship, ever again!" She laughed. My eyes were wide with horror when I say her pull out a vile of some bright blue liquid. She jerked my head back and poured the blue liquid down my throat. Tears ran down my cheeks as the liquid burned my throat and insides. I looked over at his house one last time before everything went black. When i finally came to, I was laying in the bathtub in the house of my Beloved. I heard voices outside the bathroom door and my lover crying out in anger. I sat up and attempted to take a deep breath. The air stung my throat and made my scream. The bathroom door opened just as I fell out of the bathtub. My lover ran over to me as I lay on the floor coughing and flailing my arms. He picked me up and set me down in the bathtub again. Only then did I realize what had happened. Below my waist was the striped tail of a mermaid. I grabbed at my throat again and felt the gills. I lay back in the water and cried. My lover sat on the edge of the bathtub and cried with me. A doctor walked up to us and told me that their was no hope that I would ever get my legs back.
The very next day my lover carried my to the ocean. I wept as he set me down in the water. "I'm sorry I couldn't protect you, and I'm sorry I can't go with you." he said trying to choke back his own tears. My lover was a demon. He was permanently transformed into a demon long before I met him, and like me, their was no hope of returning to normal. He knelt down and stroked my cheek. He leaned forward and gave me, one last kiss. Our love was pure, and our hearts strong, but today, we both wept when the kiss ended. We both turned away from each other, never to see the others face again. I dived deeper into the ocean as far as I could go. I found a small cave at the bottom and laid there crying for my lost lover for days and days on end. After a week I turned my head turned as I heard something approaching. 2 small faces peeked through the mouth of the cave. "Why are you crying lady?" The asked in unison. I smiled at the pair and swam outside the cave. The child mermaids swam around her giggling and smiling. Their laughter made me smile and I thought, "Maybe this, can be a new beginning for me."
The little girls led me to their underwater city, and for the first time, I felt like I was welcome somewhere, for the first time in my life.
~end
Ok so I'm not much of a writer, but I think its ok.....ish.
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Posted: Sun Sep 27, 2009 3:00 am
This is for my love: Sabrina.
He swam through the ocean, hunting for fish. He looked up, and noticed he wasn't far from a small grotto. He swam up to it and didn't realize there was a human present. He broke the surface. She turned around in shock. "Wh-Who are you?" she asked. "Oh! Hello" he bowed his head. She looked at him with a strange face when she noticed his pointed ears. "W-w-what are you?" she asked under her breath. "I'm a merman" he answered. "How did he hear me?" she thought... he smiled at her, she smiled back subconciously. "So what brings you here, miss?" he asked her. "My- I just wanted to come here" she explained. "Oh..." he replied. " She couldn't take her eyes off him. "You're beautiful" she whispered. He looked at her with a glint in his eyes... "Wow" she said. He looked at her with a confused face. She was staring at his Blue tail. "Your tail" she explained. "Yeah. Nice, isn't it?" "Mm hm!" she replied. He climbed out and sat on the edge of the pool. She was dazzled by the sight of him. She couldn't take her eyes off him or blink. He looked at her... "Wow, your eyes are like the ocean..." she said to him. He looked at her eyes and they were a light brown. "Yours are like the sun's rays" he replied. "i suppose so..." she replied. "OhMyGod!" she said quickly. He looked at her with aface of curiousity. "Merpeople exist!" she shouted with excitement. He looked at her with a smile. "What?" she asked. "Nothing..." he whispered. "She's Beautiful" he thought. "Ahh" he got back in the water. "Refreshing!" he put his arms behind his head, tucked his head back, and closed his eyes. She giggled, then he opened one eye. "Hey! Could you come back tomorrow?" she asked with curiousity. "Yes. I suppose". She looked at him, with a subconcious look. He smiled. She leaned in to him, and kissed him. He kissed her back... "I'm sorry" she said. He smiled and nodded. She smiled back, and kissed him. They were there for a while, talking about themselves, and every now and then they'd kiss. They were lovestrucked by each other.
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Posted: Mon Nov 23, 2009 5:11 pm
Enchanting! wonderful! bewitching! etheral! i love all of your stories! also i have a question for you master writers, i write storys in my spare time(which is not much considering all the homework i have and things to do) but will you guys and girls tell me what you think of an idea for another one of mine ive been mulling aroun in my head .....all right its of a woman who is a mermaid but her land figure is basically like mother nature herself in a lesser status but if she stays on land to long shell turn into a tree and not be abe to change form ever again or see her beloved sea
well! tell me what you think! bye! great jobs on your bios!
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Posted: Tue Nov 24, 2009 10:29 am
Hmm...
I reckon (Sorry if you don't like this idea, but it's the most original):
She can form legs when dry, if she doesn't get back in water for say like a week, she'll be forever human.
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Posted: Thu Jul 29, 2010 1:21 am
Lola
Name: Lola
Race: Mermaid. Aquatic
Age: 11
Powers: Bend water, talk to sea creatures
Birth Parents: Died when I was born due to being captured by fishermen. crying
Eyes: Chocolate Brown
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Posted: Thu Jul 29, 2010 2:10 am
LolaGirl28 LolaName: Lola Race: Mermaid. Aquatic Age: 13 Powers: Bend water, talk to sea creatures Birth Parents: Died when I was born due to being captured by fishermen. crying Eyes: Aqua blue ?????
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