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Dream of Fire
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Dream of Light...

...Everyday you fake a smile as he walks past
Your best friend with his new lover in her arms
Jealousy swells up inside as they smile and laugh
But you back down and only wish them the best
You dream of his arms wrapped around you in a loving embrace
But instead you get to hear how much he loves her
And how happy they are together

You look up at him with pleading eyes, hoping he'll see the truth
He tells you you're his best friend and always will be
But you whisper in his ear, "I love you and always will
I hope for your happiness and maybe someday you'll see
That you should be with me"

A teardrop slowly falls as you walk away
He calls out your name but you can't stop
You keep walking until you feel his hand spin you around
He looks deep into your eyes
And without a word wraps his arms around you
As he lets go you wipe the tears from your eyes
And thank him for seeing past your lies


I'm sorry about the no grammer thing, I'm not very good at grammer lol. But if someone wants to help me out with that I would so love them forever....

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Wow, thats a really good poem. I mean super ooper good.
Dream of Fire
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Dream of Light...

...Thank you very much, I wrote it to make my friend see how I really felt. But I have yet to actually tell him... sweatdrop ...

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It flowed very nicely. I like how the end ties up with the title. I thought the concept was too over done, however. sweatdrop
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...Yeah, well alot of things are over done lol. It's not like I wrote it to publish. I think even if the concept is over done, if its good it doesn't matter....

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Blind Love
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Here's some poetry I've posted
See past my lies
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