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THIS is the story of Richard James Foxx. It is the summary of the events of my main character's life. If you have any comments or questions, please go to the OOC THREAD or PM me. DON'T POST HERE, PLEASE! I want to make it a full run through, posting a little more whenever I can, and being able to read through it without weaving through multiple comments and such...

(edit) I've finished writing it, so I guess you can post here now, if you wish... I would PREFER the discussion thread, but technically it doesn't matter now.



Index

Post 1 - Title, index, my banner, and advertisements
Post 2 - Profiles
post 3 - beginning, puphood and exile
post 4 - raised by wolves (and a monkey)
post 5 - tragedy and escape
post 6 - dancing school? (edited)
post 7 - depression and attempted suicide
post 8 - Rick regains power
post 9 - Rick finds a mate (marriage already?)
post 10 - The hunt, a rematch, a dance, and a pack of wolves
post 11 - first a fight, then a friendship...
post 12 - training with Ravendor
post 13 - Danger outside the forest
post 14 - Battle with zombies (Mekai is kidnapped)
post 15 - sneaking into the dark citadel
post 16 - Drek and the Beast King are defeated. Prophesy?
post 17 - Rick frees slaves and gains a draconic apprentice
post 18 - Peter/Pedro...
post 19 - Rick trains Syris ; Pedro plans escape
post 20 - Pedro readies his escape ((In detail))
post 21 - Pedro attempts escape... bloody rage from a healer? ((in detail))
post 22 - continued the escape... Niccian is tortured. ((in detail... discretion is advised))
post 23 - Pedro finishes his escape ((in detail ))
post 24 - Niccian rescued. A slave made king?
post 25 - Rick goes home to find giant insects
post 26 - Rick consults Magnus, meets Thurgid`Lar, and reunites with Pedro
post 27 - Rick asks for help from Vampyres. Meet Nian!
post 28 - Nian is a friend, not an enemy. Meet Cheese!
post 29 - Thurgid`Lar captures Vixen, and Rick goes on vacation?
post 30 - Niccian returns, and Rick dances with hamsters
post 31 - The rodent/reptile war (WITH A DRAGON!)
post 32 - Mogget (the cat), and Ravendor gets caught up in politics
post 33 - Ravendor pleads for help from the Vampyre army, again...
post 34 - Mogget goes crazy and disappears. Pedro in love?
post 35 - Rick get's Magnus's help to fight Thurgid. Vampyres revolt and help Rick
post 36 - The battle begins
post 37 - Vixen is free, Thurgid`Lar dies, and Rick falls into a portal to another dimention...
post 38 - Rick's trials in the dimentions. Dragons. Jack. Pirates. Races. And so forth... The beginning of RIck's last trial...
post 39 - Kahikite... Rick meets McKaela
post 40 - Rick joins the Xavier legion (somewhat) and meets the villain Locke
post 41 - Rick gets confused on who is the evil one. Depression and anxiety turns to elation? Rick gets drunk. lol
post 42 - Rick finds out nothing from Locke, RIck goes crazy?
post 43 - Locke is killed, and Rick dies?
post 44 - Rick is ressurected and goes home.
post 45 - Rick goes to find Vixen. Steele exiled. Goes to reunite with Ravendor. Messenger brings bad news.
post 46 - Mogget appears and claims Ravendor as her savior. They go to a party. Mogget dies
post 47 - The group of 4 go to Mark's lair. Rick and Rave see something horrible
post 48 - Battle with Mark Masaku, RIck and Rave are beaten. Rhazek`Dul appears
post 49 - Rhazek beats Masaku's butt. Transform back into RIck and Rave. RIck won't fight anymore
post 50 - One year passes. Rick meets tusk who bears bad news of an oncoming evil. Rick refuses to help
post 51 - Rick visited by an old enemy, old enemy dies, Rick has tribe go to sanctuary
post 52 - Bhale finds and Kills Ravendor, Rick is angered, Rick finds out about his past and his father's nemesis
post 53 - Bhale shows up and fights Rick. Bahle kills vixen. Rick kills Bhale, and removes his soul from existence. Rick mourns for his loss. The world is in peace. Life continues. Eventually, a thousand years into the future, RIck leaves through a portal of his making.
THE END?

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Before we begin, I must explain this character. He is an anthropomorphic fox (fox furry) of a genre of my creation. Now, I've studied a lot on these animals and such, so I could keep my characters as realistic to their species as possible. Granted there are some things that you might find are very different and impossible (such as foxes having tribes, because they're solitary animals... I KNOW!!! )

Alright. Next is this world I've created... It's a post apocalyptic world after the use of some huge biological weapon that nearly destroyed the earth. After such destruction, some of the species on earth began evolving at a high rate, to the point of sentience. Avatars, or minor dieties from other worlds came to see what was taking place and watch over all the new sentient species until they were intelligent enough to have Avatars chosen from their kind. The first of which was a sea turtle named Ata'un, but that's another story.
Now, not only did these species evolve sentience, but special abilities as well. Each of these beings was born with some gift pertaining to their ancestors' previous lifestyles... Such as raccoons being fairly proficient in stealth, wolves gaining abilities for offensive strikes and coordination of attack, snakes and other reptiles being rather venomous and powerful. Avians (birds) would have a form of telepathy between their own kind. Some species had powers around the whole spectrum, such as foxes, most felines, and so forth...
So, what happened to the humans? Us? Well, most humans went into hiding for a while. We survived pretty well until the surface was habitable again. When we emerged, most of us were the same for the most part... but other subspecies of our culture that had been in hiding as well emerged. Vampires were the most prominent. But, that's another story as well.
Humans don't have the "magic" ability that the new sentient animals do. However, they have a much more keen mind for technology and research. Well... more than MOST animals. When they reemerged, they began searching through ruins and so forth attempting to recover some of the technologies of their past. Mostly what they've found was electrical power, some random blueprints of various objects of unknown origin or use, and musical tools, such as speakers, microphones, and musical instruments. Apparently, the world was filled with music when it imploded.
So, that's the basic gist of it. If you've got any questions, just ask.

So, here's a list of the profiles of most of my characters so you can follow along. Unfortunately, I haven't done much on the characters of Rick's childhood. sweatdrop

Also, it is not necessary to read all of the character profiles before you begin reading the story, SO CHILL OUT! This list is just here in case you get stuck and forget who one of them is. If someone isn't on here, just PM me and I can help you out. 3nodding My PMs are always open.

Good reading!

Good Guys

Name: Rick James Foxx
Sex: Male
Height: 5'2" ? (I'm not sure... he's up to my chest, and I'm 5"10)
Weight: 90 lb
Fur color: Dark orange. White tip on tail. White chest and chin. Black hands and feet up to just above the ankles and wrists, and black tips on ears.
Eyes: Full pale yellow with large round pupils. They sometimes glow white when he's harnessing a strong power or emotion. (normally foxes have cat-eye pupils, but this isn't an ordinary fox)
Race: Anthropomorphic Fox
Age: 325 years, though he appears to be in his late twenties.
Power(s)/weapon(s): Has a small ethereal sphere that he uses to transfer energy for bolt/flame attacks, and he can morph it into other weapons, or use it to create a powerful shield around his body then reflects anything that comes in contact with it. He also has a rare (and rarely used) ability to drain the energy from his enemies to use their own abilities and powers against them...
Short Bio: As a pup, he was exiled from his tribe after losing his power in an accident. He roamed the earth for 300 years gaining new abilities and strengths. But, after the 300 years nearly passed, he was fed up with life and went to a small village to sacrifice himself. He was caught by a 1000 year old hero of legend (named Ravendor) who had just awoken from a long sleep, and renewed Rick's powers. Rick was grateful beyond words, so he showed it through a psychic bond (which is a great honor and shows deep respect). He then went on to join a new tribe, came upon a female (named Vixen... no pun intended) , fought another foxx with the ability to turn into steel, won the female's hand in union, discovered that she was the chief's daughter and he had just won a battle against the champoin, became the champion himself, and so on...
Long time later, he falls into a portal to another dimention to start a quest to become a powerful enough being to defeat some great evil in the future...(There's much more, but it would take many more paragraphs, if not a full page to summarize...)
Appearance: (See links on bottom)
Personality: Cautious, courageous, paranoid, powerful, humble, quiet, assertive, polite

Richard James Foxx
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http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c229/Ravendorfoxx/thingsIjustfound/fox.jpg

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Name: Magnus
Sex: Male
Height: 5"4'
Weight: 100lb
Fur color: Grey with a slight tinge of brown. When reflecting sunlight directly, it seems to have the luster and color of all the crystals.
Eyes: Brown
Species: Wolf
Age: about 20 years older than Rick
Short Description: Magnus is a strong leader of a small wolf pack. He is a wise, but spontaneous wolf. He often makes mistakes in battle, but quickly corrects his errors before any extreme consequences can occur.
Power(s)/weapon(s): He has the power of contolling crystal matter. He places his palm on the ground and lets daimond/ruby/other crystals collect onto it and form into the shape he desires. What's more, this kind of crystal is so refined that it drains the very energy out of its victims, giving the crystal a kind of glowing power of its own.
Personality: Wise, good leader, family/pack oriented, decisive, kind, generous, thoughtful, sometimes concieted.
Appearance: Grey wolf anthro? (I'm working on it) http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c229/Ravendorfoxx/thingsIjustfound/lakota.jpg

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Name: Ravendor Hill

Weight: 210 lb?

Height: 6"2'

Age: 1530+ years (appears to be in early 30s)

Species: Fox Neko/Demon

Gender: Male

Abilities: Transforms into raven, a raven 5X normal size with adamantium feathers and protected glowing gold eyes, and a fox. Is able to create/control flame. Is extremely adept at martial arts and samurai arts, especially swordsmanship.

Bio:Once, in ages past (about 1000 years ago), there were two powerful beings. One fought for good, and the other fought for evil. The one who fought for good was called Ravendor and the one who fought for evil was called Drek. Ravendor had the abilities to create and manipulate fire, and transform into four different forms which were: a fox, a raven, a raven five times larger than normal with adamantium feathers, and his humanoid fox demon form. He also had other abilities that had not been tapped yet. Drek's abilities were not entirely known, but what was known was that he could manipulate water and ice, and he could transform into a wolf and other beings.
Ravendor was a wise man who battled against the forces of darkness in the name of Justice and Mercy. Throughout his life, he saved many villages, and he collected a few treasures. These were a blue sword with a gem imbedded in the blade which could strike the enemy with lightning, a sai that could make the opponent's weapon stick in place, and two rings with black stones that can hold any amount of power put in them.
One fateful day, Ravendor and Drek fought a battle. Fatal blows were struck. What happened to Drek is unknown, but Ravendor was able to escape with his life, just barely. He put most of his power into the rings, and he hid his weapons and the ring with the most of his energies in it in the center peak of some "Rocky Mountains" in the "Promised Land." Then, he flew back to Europe as a raven, and crawled into a hole as a fox and began a deep sleep.
Legend says that one day he will come back and cleanse the world of evil once again with the power regained from his rings and weapons.

Appearance: (Gaian avatar description (Fox items, royal yukata, wooden sandals, and. Hair is red, eyes are fully yellow with black slitted pupils.)) Ravendor

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Name: Vixen
Species: Fox Anthro
Gender: Female
Height: 4"11'
Weight: 76lb
Fur color: Orange.
Eyes: Emerald Green
Age: 276 years (appears to be 20)
Power(s)/Weapon(s): Ability to create any illusion. Especially adept at creating hallucinatory landscapes and encompassing the enemy in a world of randomness...
Bio: Working on it...

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Name: Pedro (used to be Peter Wesley Foxx)
Species: Fox Anthro
Sex: Male
Height: 4"10'
Weight: 80 lb
Appearance: Looks just like Rick, except he doesn't have a glowing sphere, but he DOES have a leather bag with a shoulder strap that he carries with him at all times. Also, he has a patch of white fur going from the right side of his face up around his right eye (like a beagle).
Age: 325
Power(s)/Weapon(s): His powers are to be able to probe the body of anyone he touches telepathically, and see their entire anatomy, as well as to be able to control the all chemistry around him. In essence, he has the potential of either a great assassin, OR a master healer. He is, of course, a healer. He studies anatomies of various species (so he can understand what he's seeing when he looks at your anatomical structure.) His chemical ability is such that he can make ANY substance out of thin air. One of the uses of such is being able to cure cancer almost instantly, or covering his patients in a sanitizing fog while he works...
Bio: Brother of Rick. When Rick was exiled from the tribe, Peter felt guilty and ran away to the North. There, he was taught how to use his healing powers at their full potential, and was taught how to diagnose any ailment. Over the years of training, he picked up a hispanic accent, and changed his name to Pedro. When his training was finished, he left his mentor to go help the world. But, apparently, he left too early, because he came upon some beings that he didn't know how to heal properly, because he didn't know their anatomy.
Eventually, he was captured by an evil beast king, and was forced to do the king's bidding. He eventually was able to escape that king, and is now running away constantly from the Beast King's forces.

((Also ask about his alter ego, Petros.))

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Name: Nian
Race: Pacific Flying Fox (bat)

Age: N/A
Height: 5'2"
Weight: 70+ lb
Scars/ Physical traits: His wings come apart, so he can put on sharp gauntlets on his long fingers... And, he has burn scar spots in various places on his wings.
Image: This is a commission that's the closest, but not quite perfect. Nian is hard to describe...
Collab with Zarja_Mar
Best Nian pic
This is pretty dang good... But, it's not also not quite perfect...
http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c229/Ravendorfoxx/thingsIjustfound/battree.jpg (He's actually black, though )


Occupation: Wizard (uses elemental magic, mostly...) Does miscellaneous jobs... for the right price...
Skills: Powerful in Elemental magic. Especially adept with fire and ice. Often created little bat minions to do his bidding (which are normally just little tasks, like collecting fruit...) He is quite capable of melee combat as well, being able to use his staff or long sword-like gauntlets that make him look like he's holding 5 swords in each hand...
Personal Background: Originally, he was just a mercenary bat who came upon a dead elemental mage's library. He became interested and studied until he was fairly good at the magic himself. He learned to mix potions to make minions, etc...
Later in his life, an old bat, named Niccian, took him in as an apprentice and taught him much more in the area of magic, while Nian taught Niccian some things about hand-to-hand combat.
Eventually, he made his way to the big city to look for some way to earn some money. He decided to do random work for those needing his particular skills. (Like a mercenary, or a messenger, or deconstruction agent, or whatever...)
Gear: Wooden magic staff with a crystal ball embedded in the top and the sword-like finger gauntlets. In his home, he has a cauldron and miscellaneous potions/herbs/ingredients/etc...


Notes of Interest: He has a certain minion that was created by accident when he spilled fruit juice into a potion. It's a pink bat, named Cheese. It has an unabated hunger for cheese, and it often clings to strangers until they agree to be its friend. Nian keeps him around for company, until he is needed for a certain (and often suicidal) task, and it always succeeds.
Nian is a bit... eccentric. Some believe that he has half vampire bat blood in him. He often finds himself craving blood, but then he'll remember he's a fruit bat, and it'll all go away. He acts a tad psychotic at times... And, he has a very good sense of humor (hence, the pink bat being still alive, instead of destroyed the moment it was created).
Appearance of Cheese:
CHEESE!
Cheese

Name: Flora
Age N/A
Gender: Female
Species Numbat
height: 5"4'
weight: 100? lb.
Abilities/powers She's a great dancer. She can fight with knives almost like they're being juggled... Otherwise, she has no real special abilities... But, she's a master dancer, and teaches Rick.
Bio: She lived with her brother who worked for the Evil King Haaroc. At some point, her brother got injured, or concocted some sort of disease, so she pleaded for the help from a nearby master healer named Pedro. He was a fox. When he tried to help them, he said he didn't know their anatomy well, because they weren't a common species, and he ended up crippling her brother instead. He disappeared, and Haaroc killed Flora's brother after deciding he was worthless. Flora vowed to find Pedro and cripple him as well, if not kill him.
She never found him, but found a dancing school where she became a teacher...
Appearance: She's a anthropomorphic numbat anthro with a fairly provocative form. Very beautiful... Flora
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Name: Mogget
Age: 1000+
Species shadow cat siren?
Gender Female
Height 5"5'
Weight 100?
Abilities/powers: She's a siren, so by singing, she can attract anyone of the opposite gender (even of a different species). Now, this only works when she sings, so she can talk to anyone just fine. She still has those feminine qualities that make her fairly attractive, but the voice can still help...
Being a shadow cat, she has the ability to travel through shadow, and even control it to a certain extent.
Bio: When she was a young cat, she was saved by a fox demon. She got a good look at his face, but she never saw him again.
When she was rescued, she was taken to an old blind woman who was able to train her in the art of shadow. Eventually, the woman died, and Mogget went off in search of the fox that had rescued her. She felt it was her purpose...
Appearance She basically looks like an anthropomorphic black house cat with green foot and handpaws just 4 inches from elbow and knee. She keeps a white cloth tied close to the tip of her black tail, and she wears ... something purple... I'm not sure...

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Name: Rhazek`Dul
Age: N/A
Species: Kitsune avatar
Gender:Male
Height: 6'4"
Weight: 213 lb.
Powers/Abilities: He's an avatar. He's pretty powerful. He's the combination of Rick and Ravendor, basically, and then magnified ten fold from that. So, he's super fast, extremely powerful. His huge sword glows with an ethereal essence surrounding it. He just plain kicks butt, dog.
Bio: Very uncertain. Actually, I think he was first created when Rick and Ravendor first combined. So, you'll have to read the story, and you'll pretty much know everything about him.
Appearance: Um... the best I can come up with? Think of a cross between Sesshomaru (from Inuyasha) and Sensei GOlden-Tail (from Magic the gathering) Something like that. No, I don't have any pics yet.

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Bad guys

Name: Jack William Foxx
Gender: Male
Eyes: Yellow with slitted pupils.
Height: 5'4"
Weight: 99 lb.
Age: 200+
Species: Fox
Occupation: Shunned Foxx Tribe Chief (Don't tell me that foxes don't have tribes... I KNOW! It's MY characters, k? )

Personality: Mysterious, dark, dangerous, sly, villainous, vengeful, insensitive, emotionless (almost)

Bio: (I'll try to keep it short) Long ago when he was a pup, he was chosen to be the next chief of the Litsi`gnor tribe. But, his parents had more pups, and the younger one had a special gift that immediately made him the chosen one. Jack didn't want to give up his future throne, so he thought of a way to get rid of this special younger brother. He meant to kill him, but in the end was only able to deplete his special ability, thus exiling his brother from the tribe.
Then, Jack killed the current chief (without anyone knowing it was him), and became the chief himself. But, the tribe slowly fell apart from disheartenment from the loss of a great leader and the chosen one. All the other foxes of the tribe left. Jack left and swore to find his brother and destroy him, but was somehow sent to an alternate dimention to save Rick. Now, he's trying to either find a way back to complete his revenge, or get Rick to come to him... (This wont happen in this RP... )

Appearance:
Jack William Fox

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Name:Thurgid`Lar
Age: about 1-3 years
Gender: APPEARS male
Height: 6"5'
Weight: somewhere around 200 lb.
Eyes: They change as he evolves... the latest was solid red armorlike eyes with slitted black pupils
Powers/abilities: Not much is known. He keeps evolving, and therefore increasing his powers. What is certain though is that he can create armies of giant insects of various species, he has wings so he can fly, he has various fighting skills ingrained in his unconscious mind when he was created... the last power he used before he was destroyed was a dark energy that was like a countertype to Rick's ethereal energy.
Bio: Thurgid`Lar was created by Drek`Thar and ordered to go nourish himself and return when he gained some strength. When he returned, the citadel was destroyed, and he was never able to gain the knowledge he needed to know his purpose. He found evidence that it was Ravendor and Rick that had destroyed his master(s?), and decided to seek revenge on them. He created a host of giant insects and scattered them all over the countryside, terrorizing anything that lived until they found Rick and/or Ravendor...
Appearance: Insectile... Honestly, I don't really know what my brain is telling me about this guy. More often than not though, I see a mix between Cell (from DBZ) and an Orukai (from Lord of the Rings)... something like that... I'll get a commission eventually, and tell them to improvise...
Here's an image I made of one of his stages... it was a while ago, so bear with me... http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c229/Ravendorfoxx/ThurgidLar.jpg

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Name:Drek`Thar Hill
Age: 1530+ years
Gender: Male
Height: 6"2' (In humanoid form)
Weight: about 220lb
Eyes Reddish Orange with slitted pupils
Powers/abilities He is pretty much the older and more evil version of Ravendor. They're brothers, only Drek controls darkness instead of flame. He also has the ability to change forms, though not much is known of the forms he takes. What IS known is silver (black) fox, and phoenix.
Bio: Drek`Thar is the older brother of Ravendor. When they were ounger, Drek killed their master so Ravendor couldn't progress to his level. Later, Drek conquered villages and amassed armies to take over the country, and then the world to rule it in darkness. But, Ravendor fought against him and gathered his own army. In the last battle, they both fought and dealt fatal blows to each other. Drek hid away somewhere unknown and awoke after only 700 years and began to rebuild his empire under the nose of the Beast King...
Appearance Think of Ravendor, only darker and more sinister... here's some links...
Drek1
Drek2
Drek3
(I like #2 better)

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Name: The Beast King?
Age: N/A
Gender: Male
Height 6"8'
Weight 500+ lb.
Species: Minotaur
eyes Brown
Abilities/powers: Now, this is very uncertain. He's a king of evil, and has great holding, yet nothing is really known about what he can do. Towards the end, he becomes a giant, but still... He isn't seen much, and what IS seen is kinda pathetic...
Bio: Not much to tell. He somehow got Drek`Thar under his thumb when he came back, and ruled as the king of the armies of berzerkers. It was his braun and Drek's brains that defeated and enslaved the Vampyres...
Appearance: He looks like a minotaur with extraordinarily curled horns and black fur. Sort of like the link below, but I'll need to get it commissioned for it to look proper...
http://www.atomicmpc.com.au/titan-quest/images/creatures/minotaur.gif

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Name: King Haaroc
Age: N/A
Gender Male
Species I'm not sure, but I'm gonna go with Hila Monster
Height 7"0'
Weight: 600 lb?
Abilities/powers: He's very strong, and has trained well in various martial arts. His reptile species helps with that and speed as well. Also, his claws have some sort of degenerative quality to make anything organic rot when it touches. It's a very potent poison and will kill after days of excruciating pain. (Haaroc likes to torture... )
Bio: Again, nothing is known. He began taking over the north, and it fell into a constant state of winter. None opposed him because he would capture them and torture them for days with unthought of methods.
When he captured Pedro, he was already amassing an army of Chimeras. (if you don't know what chimeras are, look it up. I don't want to explain it.)

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Name: Bing
Age N/A
Species: Weasel
Gender: Male
Height: 5"4'
Weight: 120 lb?
Powers/abilities Not sure yet... working on it...
Bio: Also unsure, though he is one of a trio of mustelids that plunders and attacks helpless villages, and also the dancing school that Rick shows up at. They're Bhal's cronies, also...
Appearance: Generic weasel anthro wearing dark assassin clothes... (I don't have an image, yet)

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Name: Bang
Age: N/A
Species: Badger
Gender: Male
Height: 5"5'
Weight: 130 lb?
Powers/abilities: Also, not much is known. He wields a broadsword, and has great strength, though still not anywhere near as powerful as Bhal.
Bio: Also unsure, though he is one of a trio of mustelids that plunders and attacks helpless villages, and also the dancing school that Rick shows up at. They're Bhal's cronies, also...
Appearance: Generic Badger Anthro wearing assassin or berzerker garb (no pics yet)

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Name: Bong
Age N/A
Species: Blackfoot Ferret
Gender: Male
Height: 5"6'
Weight: 110 lb?
Powers/abilities: Bong is able to create a toxic poison that is uncurable by even the most powerful healers. Bhal uses this poison in his shurikens.
Bio: Also unsure, though he is one of a trio of mustelids that plunders and attacks helpless villages, and also the dancing school that Rick shows up at. They're Bhal's cronies, also...
Appearance: generic blackfoot ferret anthro wearing assassin garb. ((no pic yet))

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Name: Justin Harward
Age: N/A
Species: Red Panda (Asian Raccoon)
Gender:Male
Height: 5'8"
Weight: 165 lb
Powers/Abilities: So far, I don't really know what power to give him. I was thinking duplication of himself, but I'm not sure. I'm working on it. Anyways, he wields a broad sword, so he's pretty strong.
Bio: Very mysterious dude. Quiet. DOesn't say much. Apparently, he was hired by Mark Masaku to help do some dirty work. Before that, his history is unknown. He doesn't sayk much, but he has an air of contemplation. One can never really know what's going through his head. THough, when he's on your side, he's very loyal.
Appearance: He's a red panda. A big guy. Broad shoulders. Looks like he used to be a blacksmith. He likes to wear Cowboy attire, with his cowboy hat covering one eye. He can be fairly menacing looking if you get on his bad side. ANyways, mostly light brown leather with a light blue slightly bleached looking shirt. And a braodsword strapped to his back instead of a shotgun, or something. (No pics yet)

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Name: Xanthius
Age: N/A
Species: Racoon
Gender: Male
Height: 5'8"
Weight: 100 lb.
Powers/Abilities None, so far. He's Basically just like his brother Mark Masaku, only less so. He has speed, agility, and uses two daggers like his brother, but just not near as good.
Bio: He's the brother of Mark Masaku. Younger by I don't know how long. He tries to gain the favor of his older brother, but isn't able to often. Mark can be very demanding.
Appearance: Looks just like his brother Mark Masaku, only less so. Except, he wears a black ninja outfit without the hood and mask. Doesn't need one. (No pics, yet)

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Name: Marcus Masaku
Age: N/A
Species: Raccoon
Gender: Male
Height: 5'8"
Weight: 120
Powers/Abilities: He's extremely fast. I mean, really really really quick. No mortal and many immortal beings can match his speed and agility. He wields two wicked looking daggers for his main weapons, and uses them quite well. Seriously, don't try a speed contest with this guy.
Bio: As a child, he was spurned by his father who was a prophet for the raccoon avatar. His father just had no time for him, and the avatar saw him as a useless runt. His brother even more so. He felt abandoned and shamed.
He trained himself, and eventually killed his father, vowing to destroy every prophet. He practiced, and his brother faithfully followed. He went insane, and got kicks out of the pain of others, and himself sometimes. He gained speed and agility through years of training and focus. His brother followed, but wasn't able to grasp as well.
Eventually, Masaku gained status. He killed his superiors and took over the operation, renaming it the ARC NAR, the Anti-Religious Cult of Ninja Assassin Raccoons. (I didn't say he was original.)
He made his base in an abandoned sanitarium, and from there started his schemes against the prophets and the gods themselves.
Appearance: He's a raccoon. Has some training scars all over him. He wears blue Assassin pants, and a golden belt around his waist with his daggers sheathed on it. THe belt also goes across his chest, mostly for decoration. He wears no shirt, cause it gets in the way.
Marcus X. Masaku

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Name: Bhale
Age: N/A
Species: Wolverine
Gender: Male
Height: 6'0"
Weight: 180 lb.
Powers/Abilities: He basically just all around really dang powerful. Super Strength, and so forth. Because of his sword, he's also invulnerable. He sold his soul to an evil avatar for this sword. When it slices, it seals the wound, so it can't ever be healed. EVER. There is no blood from such a wound either. Whatever is cut or cut off is cleanly cut. You never had it...
OKAY! Where was I? Also, when he kills a victim, this sword sucks their soul right out of em, and gives Bhale strength, and somewhat lesser abilities of whom he stole the soul from, temporarily. It's like a rechargable battery that needs souls. With that, he's invulnerable. Mostly, he just likes to fight with his claws, though. He IS already super strong.
Oh, and the sword is huge and glows green. Creepy, actually.
Bio: Long ago, he was killed by RIck's father to save his tribe from his evil might. Bhale wasn't going to go down that easily. He had a very VERY strong sense of revenge. He promised his soul to an evil Avatar for his life back to kill Rick's father and his family and his tribe. The avatar granted him the above said sword. With that he would be invincible.
Bhale accepted and vowed to return when his vengeance was complete. He killed RIck's father, but the tribe got away. They hid away, and Bhale went in search of them... all of them... Killing any who got in his way.
Appearance: He's a big burly bearlike wolverine dude. His body is covered in scars, and even one eye is grey from being cut. He wears dark warrior attire, and carries a cloak that keeps his aura hidden when worn. Mostly, he wears dark leather straps across his chest that strap his sword to his back and black tattered assassin pants. He has a larch pack/pouch next to the sword where he keeps his other possessions, such as the cloak. (No pics yet. He's kinda difficult.)

I might add more later...
The story begins as Rick is born. His father is dead, killed in battle. But, because of Rick's father, the Foxx tribe was able to escape.

Rick was born between two brothers. Jack and Pedro. After the birth of the pups, Jack was chosen to be the future tribe chief. However, it was discovered that Rick had a rare gift. A VERY rare gift. .
Rick had an ethereal sphere that followed him everywhere. This ethereal sphere was the source of almost infinite power, if it could be tapped into properly.
Rick was chosen to be the next tribe chief. Jack was furious. Jack deviated a plan to destroy Rick so he could regain his place as the future tribe chief.
Soon, his plan was brought forth, and Pedro was tripped by Jack, and accidentally knocked Rick into the raging river down below. By some unknown force, Rick's life was saved. Unfortunately, his ethereal sphere was completely drained and made powerless.
By the laws of the tribes of foxes, and through some records sifting by Jack, and by a declaration of a powerful diety who's advice is always followed, Rick was exiled from the Foxx tribe, and from all fox tribes, never to return unless his power could be restored. No other fox has ever regained their power after losing it...
Very soon after Rick was exiled, he was set upon by a hungry pack of wolves. He slipped and fell down a steep embankment, hit his head on a log, and fell unconscious. Luckily for him, the pack decided to capture and take him in instead of devour him on sight.
They, by some act of an unknown avatar, made him one of their own, but he just didn't quite fit in. He wasn't as aggressive as the others, but he managed to fend for himself with wit and cunning.
Eventually, he felt that he just wasn't making it in the wolf pack, so he left to find a martial arts dojo in the mountains to begin some training. He felt that if he could at least defend himself properly, he might be able to fit in somewhere, and be able to win a mate through the mating rituals, or battles, that his species went through to choose a lifetime mate.

When he arrived, he met a brown spider monkey who was the master of the dojo. He was a grand master at using the bow staff. He has five dexterous limbs to wield it with. There he learned of a great purpose for those training in the dojo. They were training for the day a great warrior named Ravendor would return to the earth to save it from their dark times. An evil force had been slowly taking over the earth, capturing and enslaving the vampires and other races for it's use. The strategist and warrior leading this evil force was a being known as Drek`Thar, Ravendor's nemesis. Almost 1000 years ago, they had struck each other down in a mighty battle and then cheated death by transforming and sleeping for a millenium. However, Drek`Thar was revived 300 years early by the evil beast king to do his bidding.
It has nearly been 1000 years since that day, so those who would train at this dojo are training for the day Ravendor returns so they can pledge their loyalty to him and serve him in battle against this evil force.
Rick learned many of the martial arts he believed he needed for success. He also learned much of the history of his planet, especially observing a large mural that sat above the main training hall of the dojo showing that great battle between Ravendor and Drek`Thar and the huge armies they both led. For 50 years he trained there.
One day after about 50 years of training and learning, Rick noticed smoke coming from where his old wolf pack had made their permanent home and stomping grounds. Rick went against his master's advice and headed straight down the mountain to investigate. All he found was carnage, death, and destruction. The perpetrator was nowhere in sight. Many of the wolves he had known, including his foster mother and the pack leader were killed. He figured that anyone that he didn't see dead there had either escaped, or they had not yet returned from a hunt.
Magnus, one of Rick's former pack brothers, showed up just then to see Rick standing in the center of all the wreckage, and blamed him for it. Rick quickly took care of him, then ran back up the mountain path only to find the dojo in a heaping ruin, his master and allies killed or escaped. Rick then made the decision to escape and disappear as well. He ran off into the woods, leaving no trace of his existence to hide for as long as it took for him to feel safe again.
After disappearing from there, he found and took refuge in a dance and music school, where he figured noone would look for him. There, he met a numbat named Flora. She was one of the teachers there, and she seemed to take a lot of interest in Rick.
Rick was reluctant to learn dance and music at first, but Flora was able to convince him to try. He was actually quite adept at it, and the previous martial arts training was a big help as well. Rick soon fell in love with the numbat, and apparently she for him as well.
But, one day, she betrayed him, and locked him in the detention room of the school, because there wasn't a dungeon, where he could rot and sulk. Apparently, she was a spy who believed he was the fox that crippled her brother years ago, who was then killed by the king for being useless, leaving her alone with nothing. (PM me if you want to know the details)
But, through Rick's songs he wrote, and her having fallen in love with him as well, she felt she couldn't bear to keep him there. Her hatred for the fox that killed her brother, and her love for this one who she believed to be the same one, was tearing her in two.
She later discovered that it wasn't Rick but his brother Pedro that had done the damage. She tried to figure out a way for the school council to let him go, but once he was there, there was nothing they could do.
Soon, a trio of bad guys showed up to do their annual pillaging of the school. A weasel named Bing, a badger named Bang, and a ferret named Bong. The school was "sick and tired" of these thugs harming the school, and eventually they decided to let Rick go if he would get rid of them, permanently. Rick still felt like a coward after running away from the dojo, and didn't think he could defeat them, but the prospect of freedom was a great one.
So, Rick used his wits and killed Bing. Bang but Bong were angered by this and took their revenge on Rick by slaughtering Flora in front of him. Out of anger and spite, Rick managed to find a nearby rod and use that to defeat Bang, and then his katana to fight Bong. In the process of the battle, the school was set ablaze by an electrical fire. At the end of their battle, it was unknown if Bong was actually killed. Rick threw his katana like a javelin through a jet of flame where Bong attempted escape. (Again, for details, PM ME! )
Rick stayed behind for a short while to help rebuild the school. Afterwards, he left to find his own path and see if he was of any use elsewhere.
After being turned down by multiple possible mates, Rick was ready to give up. He was unable to take a mate because he didn't have his "gift" anymore. He was depressed, feeling useless and unable to find purpose in life anymore. Most of his life he had been running and trying to fit in somewhere, to no avail. Plus, his special ability that had been drained was like a curse and a bad memory that followed him everywhere he went. His drained and dull red ethereal sphere seemed to be mocking him as it followed.
Rick discovered a human hunting party with a cart full of furs. He stepped out from the foliage and howled, attempting suicide, letting the hunters know he was ready to die. But, before they could, A strange being appeared to stop them. This being looked just like the evil Drek`Thar from the mural he had admired so much. For some reason, Rick feared for his life again and fled into the forest behind him. This being followed, attempting to catch him.
The stranger followed Rick, until Rick tripped and rolled into a log just at the edge of a clearing. The stranger appeared, taking off his rice hat, and Rick realized that this was the legendary hero Ravendor, not Drek`Thar.
Ravendor offered solace and help. Rick was about to kneel and offer servitude when suddenly his memories were transferred to Ravendor's consciousness, apparently without provocation. Ravendor was shocked. When he saw the pain that this being had gone through so far, he nearly wept.
Ravendor used the excess power that he had stored in his sword and ring, and he completely restored Rick's power to life again. Rick was ecstatic with joy from his restored abilities. He vowed servitude which Ravendor refused outright. Instead he offered friendship. From then on, Rick and Ravendor shared an unbreakable bond to the point of a psychic link.


Now at this point, one must come to understand how Ravendor got here. He had awoken only a fwe days prior to this event. When he awoke, he came to a village where he met a vampiress named Mekai. He learned of the evil that had awoken and cursed the land. Mekai was in hiding from the evil Drek`Thar who had kidnapped her younger sister long ago. Mekai and her sister apparently had some important event that was going to happen in the not too distant future that had to do with the blood moon. She and her sister would be infused with an enormous amount of power for a short period of time. She hoped to be able to use this power to defeat the Beast King and Drek`Thar. THEY had other plans however to gain this power for themselves.
Through the help of a few avians, Ravendor and Mekai were able to find Ravendor's ring and sword that he had hidden away before his ghastly demise. He stored his powers into them so that they wouldn't burn off during his thousand year sleep. When he recovered them, he attempted to completely infuse himself with his power again. Unfortunately, his body and his mind were not capable of holding so much power yet, and Ravendor went into a mad rage. Before he killed himself and those around him, he had enough conscious strength to shove some of his power back into his sword and ring. Mekai took him to an inn to recover.
Ravendor decided that either he would have to slowly regain his power bit by bit rather than taking it all at once. When he met Rick however, he knew that he could regain his power over time through rigorous training and meditation, but Rick could not. So, his used his extra stored energies to restore Rick's power.
Afterwords, he returned to the Village to meditate on what he had learned so far.
Rick disappeared into the woods, leaving Ravendor behind, and went to test his reborn power. He had that chance sooner than he thought he would when a large beast of some sort caught him off guard, but Rick shocked it's life force out of it with his ethereal sphere.
Rick made a commitment and vow from then on to be careful with his powers and to use it only for that which was good, never for evil or selfish gain.
He then proceeded to find a mate. He came upon a vixen, named Vixen whom he decided would be his mate. But, he first had to fight another male in order to win her hand/paw. He faced off against a large fox, about the size of an average wolf, whose ability was to completely turn into metal. His name was Steele. Rick defeated him, and won Vixen's hand/paw.
Rick soon discovered that Steele was the champion of the tribe and Vixen was the daughter of Chief "Firelicker" Kitshringra. Rick was wedded to Vixen and he became the new champion of the Kitshringra tribe.
Rick was then told that he had to go hunt for a caribou and bring it back to the camp for the ceremony to be completed. So, he did. He wasn't allowed to use his powers to obtain the beast, though. Luckily, Rick was more experienced without it, than with it, so obtaining the caribou was fairly easy.
When Rick returned, Steele was wreaking havoc on the camp calling for a rematch with Rick.
Rick complied and defeated him again. Steele was demoted to Champion's apprentice, which is given only when a champion is defeated without being executed. Rick would not kill a fellow fox.
Rick then asked for one of his favorite songs from the band that was reassembling, and he danced with Vixen like a master. I think it was foxtrot, no pun intended. (PM me for details. It's rather romantic, really.) She immediately fell in love with him, and vice versa, and they left the camp to... well, can't go into detail there. Darn TOS. ^^
Anyways, it didn't last long, and a starving wolf pack showed up.
The leader of the wolf pack demanded that Rick give them his cache of the rest of the caribou that the fresh blood scent that was on him came from. Rick denied that he didn't have any of it left, which was true, nut the wolf didn't believe him and demanded it again, or he would be forced to kill him and his mate for food. Rick refused and told Vixen to climb the tree to safety.
So, the wolf pack pack attacked. Rick defended hisself from them, until they backed off, deciding he was far too powerful for the norm. Then, the wolf pack leader attacked him. Rick accidentally created something like ethereal gauntlets from his sphere, and knocked the wolf back with a bit more force than usual.
The wolf leader, a little dazed, decided to use his own cool ability, and he punched a hole in the ground, keeping his fist there. Moments later, he pulled it back up and a gauntlet of blue daimond covered his fist, wrist, and up to his elbow. Rick attacked again, but the crystal gauntlet seemed to just absorb all of Rick's attacks from his ethereal weapon. The crystal gauntlets glowed with the power drained from Rick's, and the wolf was able to get in one powerful blow, knocking Rick into a tree and almost unconscious.
Rick then decided not to use his weapon, but rather just use speed and skills that he had mastered. Thus, the wolf was beaten because he had a big chunk of crystal like dead weight he was carrying that he couldn't disperse immediately.
When the wolf awoke, from one of his pack members using healing pine cones, he decided it was no use fighting a fox with that kind of skill.

Rick felt sorry for them, and decided to try and help them. After coaxing the wolf leader to let him help, he showed them the way to the caribou herd where he got his first one. The wolf revealed that his name was Magnus and then gave an orange crystal to Rick. Rick remembered the name and another small argument ensued between the two before Rick could explain what had happened on that fateful day. Magnus was wise and took the information as it was. A friendship was kindled between them. He told Rick that if he should ever need a favor, all he needed to do was howl and the pack would be there to help. Rick accepted the gifts before he returned to Vixen to pick up where they left off.
The next morning, Rick left the tribe to go practice with his renewed powers. He went to the village that Ravendor was staying at and called him out telepathically, because he didn't feel comfortable entering a human village
When Ravendor apeared, he explained HIS story so far (go back a few posts), and invited Rick for some dummy training. Apparently, some scientists/technologists wanted to test out their new "droid" thing that they had been working on from some blueprints they had obtained from an old ruin on the other side of the world. Rick agreed and they met with the scientists in a meadow very close to the woods. The grass was cut low, and racks held padded practice swords. Near the middle of the field was something large under a black cloth.
Eventually, the cloth was removed to reveal Drek`Thar. Actually, it was a droid that was an exact replica designed to "fight" just like him, as well as learn from experience. Many lives had been lost obtaining the information on Drek`Thar. Apparently, they hoped to build something that could defeat that evil force.
Anyways, a battle ensued between Ravendor and the droid and Ravendor was beaten. Then Rick and the droid. Rick was also defeated. As he was hit, he accidentally shocked the driod with ethereal energies. The droid went haywire and Rick and Ravendor had to fight it together. They ended up destroying it. Unfortunately, that was the prototype. The scientists/technologists decided something like that was too dangerous to mess with, so the information was locked away. A "droid" was never to be attempted again.
Rick returned to the tribe and scouted for the tribe, which is one of the duties of the champion. At the edge of the forest, on the other side from the village where Ravendor and Mekai were staying at, a man with dark hair and tail changed into a black phoenix and soared over a small host of undead soldiers, headed directly through the forest towards Ravendor's village.
Rick, warned his tribe of the oncoming danger, then proceeded to warn Ravendor telepathically of the demon headed his way.
When Rick arrived, Ravendor was already fighting with the demon, and Mekai and others were fighting the zombie hordes. Rick joined in, fighting the zombies as well.
But, soon the demon that looked just like Ravendor, except with dark hair and tail, kidnapped an unconscious Mekai and fled. Ravendor cried out after him, cursing him and his evil deeds.
The zombies disappeared, and Rick and Ravendor set out to save Mekai from Drek`Thar and the Beast King.
(This part is a bit hazy, so bear with me.)

Rick and Ravendor set off through the forest after Drek. Rick had them stop so he could warn the tribe that he might not come back, and to introduce them to Ravendor.
Then, they set off again for the dark citadel where Drek would have taken her.
Eventually, they were able to sneak in using a passing caravan into the city. Then, they sneaked through back streets, avoiding goblins, orcs, trolls, and all those sorts of things that lived in the messed up city, all the way to the castle.
They just had to walk through the front doors of the castle after disposing of some balors. Inside the castle, they split up to search for Mekai and her sister.

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