fff. ellis is so cute
sometimes. when i
play as infected
i try never to attack him
or nick.
and hah. then if i ever
visit a pharmacist and they
go 'heer ur peelz sur.'
then i will know it's you
and you will know because
i will be like; 'omg, louis?!'
that you?'
nah. he wouldn't have done
anything to jeopardise his
suit. and zombies definitely
do a good job jeopardising it.
lol. also, if he did he got payback
because now he's stuck listening
to ellis all the goddamn time.
lol. then you aren't
doing your job right.
start to protect ur bots plz.
because everytime nick dies
at the end of a finale
i have to go back and play the
whole campaign over again
because i simply will no accept
r.i.p. nick endings.
lol. i can say my aim is
better than that.
though i have been known
to shoot ellis & nick
for the fun of it just to hear
them cuss me out when i'm
playing as someone else.
but usually i play as nick
so i'm the one being shot
because my friends think
he is cutest when he's pissed.
omg. i'd hate you if you
ended up in new orleans
without me. i mean really.
i would be screwed if there
was a zombie apocalypse
anywhere else. i could help
you with the plan to survive
if i lived there, too.
and you definitely want me
on your side when it happens.
otherwise you are also screwed.
just saying. c:
mm. all of those would be
completely amazing.
and who knows i might live
closer depending on where
i decide i want to go. i
really liked seattle. i could
see myself living there.
nope and nope.
haven't watched
any movies at all
lately. i'm usually
only in the mood
during fall and winter
because there's nothing
else to do. but i've been
overwhelmed with school
and travel lately.
lol. it was about two people
in a zombie apocalypse. the
girl leaves the guy behind
and ends up getting herself
killed while they get swarmed
he survives only to find her
dead and tell her corpse (because
he goes a little bit crazy)
that he won't leave her like she
left him. so he stays until all his
bullets are gone and dies.
lol. it was inspired by a dream
i had where my dumbass friend
left me with a bunch of people
turning into zombies - idk what
happened to her but i imagine
she would have gone and got
herself killed realistically.
lolk. i'll do that
just for you. ;D
because actually
i came up with another
(much easier to write)
story. lol. i wrote it all
in about two hours just
sitting there with my writing
hand cramping and s**t. but
******** almighty, it's done.
and i had my two friends in
english class read it. olivia
read it out loud and she
had to stop towards the end
because she was starting to
tear up. lol. +1 for campy sob
stories written by a procrastinating
jackass.
modern - or within the last decade.
i do when them to arrive in chernobyl
mostly so i can describe it all pretty-like.
and because i myself want to go there
and thus know enough about it to
seem realistic.
and i don't think the selling would work
considering it's mostly women trafficking,
thus removing the detached feel i gave towards
the character's identity.
idk. i was thinking maybe making it sad.
just like - you follow the person on a trip
that sounds touristy at first, but you get to
know them as they describe chernobyl
and think back to their home - the people
they know - etc. and when you get to the
point where you know a nice bit about this
person who started out as some lame tourist
they reveal why they traveled to the empty
city (reflecting, perhaps, the character's inner feelings)
by finding a room with a few remains of some
family who had lived there before the disaster
and pulling out a gun - or rope - or whatever
and saying goodbye to the reader. i think
for added effect i would make it end as if you were
reading someone's scribbled notes, or journal,
as you read through the short story. like the
character is confiding in you, essentially the
paper they are writing on.
there's really only one
character. and they don't
even have a name or
distinguished gender. i plan
on keeping that way. sort of
just put the reader in their
shoes and let them decide
who the character is.
really, i haven't written much
beyond the thoughts and history
of the character's plans to leave
home to go on this trip to chernobyl.
and the history of chernobyl to set
the scene. only idk what scene i want.
i would show you what i have written,
but i didn't type it. good old handwritten
rough copy.
so - based off how little i intend to develop
the character's backstory - any ideas?
i personally think that (since it's in first person
perspective) giving the character a name
and s**t would only turn cheesy. i hate
first person when the character has a name.
sure. a link would be good.
SO OK HERE'S SOMETHING
FOR YOU TO THINK ABOUT.
i am writing a story, right,
but i can't ******** figure out
a climactic event for it. like
it just seems to me more like
a 'thought' short story than a
story story. you know? prose.
but idk - maybe you can think
of something.
takes place in ukraine, the main
character is traveling from some
other place against the will of their
friends and family and s**t because
they feel 'drawn' to pripyat/chernobyl.
maybe you see something in that story
that i don't. maybe you could actually
make a story out of that prose.
because right now all it is are the character's
detached thoughts as they make their
way to pripyat by train. any ideas spring
to mind about maybe a story that can be
pulled from that jumble of thoughts?
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