thnx ^^ most detailed feed back that i recieved, and tell ur sis i said thnx, chololate lackmail.....lol. and ues, it's for a school contest called "reflections" this year's theme is "wow"
hey! tell me wat u think of this poem! give feedback!
Autumn’s Glory
Behold! Behold!
Autumn is here! The air grows cold!
The trees are dressed in red and gold,
Clothing branches in colors untold.
Brilliant colors strike out bight and bold,
In layers, with no pattern, fold after fold.
A flaming torch that stands 20 feet high,
Whispers secrets as breezes pass by.
The wind dances through the trees,
Running feral, untamed, and free.
Racing, tumbling, without a care,
Whipping up gusts of cool autumn air.
Starry leaves are change outfits,
While wind rustles thought the boughs
I sit here thinking, lost in my own world
That Autumn’s glory is just… just… Wow!
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Autumn’s Glory
Behold! Behold!
Autumn is here! The air grows cold!
The trees are dressed in red and gold,
Clothing branches in colors untold.
Brilliant colors strike out bight and bold,
In layers, with no pattern, fold after fold.
A flaming torch that stands 20 feet high,
Whispers secrets as breezes pass by.
The wind dances through the trees,
Running feral, untamed, and free.
Racing, tumbling, without a care,
Whipping up gusts of cool autumn air.
Starry leaves are change outfits,
While wind rustles thought the boughs
I sit here thinking, lost in my own world
That Autumn’s glory is just… just… Wow!