Thank you for rating my poem. It is nice to know how people feel about certain writing styles. I will take into consideration on what you have said. Whether it changes my view on my work or not, it doesn't matter. When I write my words as a writer, I stay true to them. They are my belief and my life. No matter what others say. Thank you for your input.
hey there
I was wondering if you would be interested in looking at a new poem I made.
Your analysis of my other poem was good, and I would love to have your opinion.
It seems as if lots of people are mad at you for criticizing their poems.
I on the other hand am very glad about the things you told me *a long time ago*
I thought I should at least help your day a little by saying that I appreciate your comments, and that by all means you should keep up the good work
then lets discuss shall we. my poem sucks becasue it has no feeling. it is immature and stirs nothing in a person. im tired of talking bad about my poem. i'll do it though becasue its what you want.
the first part rhymed horribly (if you can call it a rhyme)
the last part was ended by an old lady running off with sexy penguins. what more can i say about that? obviously that was an epic fail write there. the words used to rhyme with were everyday words that a 3rd grader could use. anybody could do what i did. except everybody could do it better. thats what you were looking for correct?
lets not fight. i hate fighting. it makes me bitchy. haha anyway i felt that writing about david bowie and penguins deserved a poem that was stupid. i agree it was stupid but that not how i write. like i said i wanted it to be because of how i felt about what we had to put in the poem. i can write. i love to write. if you think that i cant write just becasue i was goofing around on ONE poem then you are seriously mistaken.
dude it was a poem about David bowie and penguins. how good do you think it could actually be? im sorry that you didn't like mine. if you want you can have the mother ******** bats. way to be a total sore loser.
and i do actually care about poetry. just i had the opportunity to write something weird and funny so i did. if you dont believe me i will sho you a poem. but i am not going to waste my time if you really believe that i am just a stupid human being who cant write. i write from the hell i have been through. you don't know anything i have been through so do not judge me. writing and music is a major part of my life. its how i vent. so stop worrying about a contest and move on. there are tons of contests you will beat me by far in.
Hi, I'm Saphire_Jewl_Eyes and you had commented on my poem?
I just wanted to say it was based an the anime, not the play.
I'm extreamly sorry but I felt the need to being it to your attention.
Thanks
I have not been writing. I think about things I should write but there is simply no time to do anything of the sort at present moment. How depressing ;(
I've been nothing special, the over-used up and down I guess. How about you? Tell me about what's happening in your life, I want to know what I've been missing of you-- PM me, I want a substantial response.
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