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 Posted: Mon Apr 09, 2007 7:47 am
The Glass
By Emily
The Glass, which separates us
Which divides
Which makes us different
The glass that is clear
Yet so bold
The glass that is shattering
Yet almost whole
People try to break the glass
But the glass is unbreakable
People try to move the glass
But it is unmovable
The glass can hold many things in
But can it keep things from coming out?
The glass is wonderful
But is it bad?
It causes pain
It cause grief
Is it real?
Or just in our imagination
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Posted: Mon Apr 09, 2007 5:35 pm
I liked it, but I think you can do better. It flows and everything I've just read really really good poems from you. sweatdrop 3nodding
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