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 Posted: Sat Feb 24, 2007 4:47 pm
Hey, since no one else has posted anything creative or odd here, figured I'd make a small thread for anything odd/unlisted (so far), like fan art and poetry/drabbles.
Guess I'll make the first post, ne? ^_~
//Atekius: Moved to Creativity subforum and re-named.//
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Posted: Sat Feb 24, 2007 4:48 pm
This is sort of based off of a prompt I read on a random, um, prompt generator. It said write something using the lines "I didn't think it would ever stop raining" (or something to that effect...).
Well, anyway, I wrote this in response to that, and NO this is not supposed to be Toby Macguire. lol. (It's supposed to be like a poem fan-fic of Tobias and Rachel of the Animorphs. lol.)
Enjoy. ^_~
PS--- if it sucks it's like 5:00 am here and I did it kind of fast. lol.
Edit: it's about Tobias (for some reason or another) hiding somehting from his gf, and all she cares about is him being there for her and she can't see through his (not lies, just inability to tell the truth) words.
(For the, um, slower people to not understand its meaning. lol.).
Happy with a Lie
He didn’t think it would ever stop raining.
It kept on falling.
Harder.
Stained his jacket, and it made
her tears look that much prettier.
She looked at him,
she told him
“Tobias, I think I know your secret.”
“What, I’m Spiderman??”
I joked.
Anything to brush off what she might just….
The rain fell harder still
she stared me dead
on in the eye.
She said—
She whispered in my ear,
“I know why it rains here”
I said, “Why?”
She said,
“Cause if you stop the
crying
where else do those tears go?”
I told her, “I don’t know.”
She said I stop the rain.
I froze, then—
colder than the rain bullets,
happier than the farthest shooting star.
She didn’t know my secret but
she knew the good things that I’d
done she said that’s all
that mattered, right?
“I stop the rain, huh?”
And she pulled me closer.
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Posted: Tue Mar 06, 2007 4:28 pm
I think this is sweet... 3nodding
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Posted: Wed Mar 21, 2007 2:52 pm
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Posted: Sat Apr 07, 2007 12:53 pm
I like it. The idea is really nice. ^^~ And.. I'm not too good at commenting on poetry, so I will just stop here <.<'
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Posted: Sat Jul 07, 2007 8:51 pm
It's..uh...interesting....*stares at unfinished fanfic chapter*.......I'll finish that so I can put a link here eventually.....
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