Here’s the thing, I’m gonna post my idea, feel free to try and help me with the animation concepts. Or if you wish post your own, who knows someone may just do the harder parts for you?...
My ideas:
Lights Out & Hello! (good to be back); Scooter
2 songs combined:
Lights Out- (1:45)
Hello! (Good to be back)- (3:33)
Total play time: (5:17)
Lights Out Script
Start: (0:00) - Looking through a viewfinder onto a forest.
(0:02) - Zooming in to match sound.
- Zooming/ transitioning to moving through forest.
(0:07) - Music starts, see ground moving as if going by quickly.
(0:30) - Show feet as if running.
(0:37) - Show bangs moving over forehead.
(0:44) - Show shoulders and slight arms of body moving in run.
(0:52) - Sow side of face, viewing eye and ear.
(1:00) - View of character: Enter female Fearie running.*
(1:21) - Various views of her running through the forest.
(1:30) - Show of opening in woods head.
- Her running through it from side to frontal view.
(1:44) - See her jump off cliff edge, wings sparkle slightly.
- Enter directly into next song.
Character Appearance:
*Feary:
Body: med-light skin color, brown with blonde highlights in hair, hairstyle is short in front longer to base of neck in back. Pale Purple Eyes, Elf like ears.
Wings: Dragon like, Veins and vertebrae a light wood color, wings span a light purple magic flow like in coloring, to match eyes. Extends a bit before spanning out.
Clothing: Light Sandals, Simple sleeveless short tunic (shirt). Skin tight shorts above knee. Belt up on waist on one side and down hips on other, appears like 2 thick wires. a dagger and pouch on waist side, a half skirt on hip side. Wrist cuffs, short simple. Earrings, one double hoop semi big, the other a connecting earring.
Hello! Script
(0:00) - see feary jump, gunshots sound, look down to see a Ninja* running through a field with men** (5) behind him.
(0:05) - All stop, and men surround ninja. View of ninja's eyes looking about, then zoom out and fight begins.
(0:15) - See Ninja winning as more men enter the Frey.
(0:20) - See man getting overwhelmed as fearie jumps in and kicks an enemy, grabs ninja's sides and takes off just above the field.
(0:30) - See city coming into view and head into it dodging buildings.
(0:45) - Enemy Cruisers hover quickly before them; Fey turns just as quickly down a side alley.
(0:59) - Various attempts at getting them down. She flies higher as hover ships pursue.
(1:10) - Shots finally cause Fey to drop ninja. Both fight as she flies down to catch him.
(1:25) - Fey catches ninja and flies low, two men crashing down as they narrowly hit the ground, and quickly fly off through the alleys.
(1:30) - Enter motorcycles chasing them through alleys and traffic areas. (Few close calls in between).
(2:30) - Fey drops ninja due to a near miss. Ninja begins fighting on ground as others attack Fea in the air.
(3:00) - Fey takes a hit to ground slowly recovering as ninja continues on trying to cover now as well.
(3:10) - Fey recovers and dodges an attack then looks to ninja.
(3:15) - Fey charges to get to one coming up behind the ninja, stopping them.
(3:20) - Then she grabs ninja as he pulls a dust cloud and lifts back to the air out of view straight up.
(3:25) - See men, hovers and cycles about searching the area as smoke screen clears.
Character Appearance:
*Ninja:
Body: Thin build, basic same coloring as the feary, muscular where needed for a ninja/ fighter. Grey (stone) eyes.
Clothing: Purplish- grey ninja like costume. (Think Shinobi old school look). Red long sash on fore head, length after knot down to mid back. Metal bracers and shin guards. Red belt sash along waist with a strand across his chest, for holding of long blade katana. 3 shuricans on left wrist bracer.
** Men:
Appearance: half ninja, half storm trooper in appearance with various colors for different levels and divisions. (3 preferably). Motorcyclists having a slightly lighter armor appearance for easier maneuverability.
~Hovers: Close to looking like the taxi in 5th element, though grayish almost police like colors, darker preferably.
~Kawasaki comes clear in mind for the motorcycles.
~City: also to resemble an advanced civilization, grey splash in coloring, almost like ghost in the shell..
(best references I have to explain image in my mind when hearing the songs.)
Song 2
Song: Take it all away
Artist: Puddle of mud
Time: (5:04)
Script 2
(0:00): See a hospital room, (nurse checking a board and leaving), zoom in on man*.
(0:12): See a girl by water/ Cliff edge holding a small blue stone in hands, wind blowing about, (pan view to show face then fade to hospital.
(0:20): Show from foot of bed to face, see man’s eyes open as singing begins.
~ Beginning 3 times do not have to be exact as long as the beginning image and ending are relatively on time.
(0:27): Man walking through streets of bustling shadow outlined people.
(0:40): Man turns to see the girl from cliff there crying, and looks to her a moment.
(0:47): Reaches hand to her, she looks to him a moment before cracking a smile and taking his hand.
(0:50): See happy times, girl laughing and man looks to her smiling. (Over patio table with food.)
(0:55): Show man step before her, shadow figure in front of them with weapon.
(1:00): Overlay of the side of girl’s face at end of last image, focus to see her tears begin to form.
(1:09): Pan view to ocean and horizon as the sun rise flashes to next image.
(1:13): Begin battle scene and man fighting lady with, (DBZ style almost).
(1:20): See man standing there as another beside him waves hands over face, man’s eyes dull a reddish-brown, facial expression goes blank. Girl in disbelief motions to him, hand outreaches towards him.
(1:36): See girl through man’s eyes walking down the street from before.
(1:45): See girl with the spirit of the man appear behind her, still with eyes overlay.
(1:50): Cut scene to man’s eyes going wide and pan to see the girl with tears and a blade in the man’s chest.
(2:04): Scene with man coming out of mind control to see the blade then her.
(2:12): See man begin to smile as she holds him crying, his hand gently to side of her face.
(2:22): See eyes of man widen once more and close, girl crying over him.
(2:26): Man’s face in hospital, eyes open as if energy is exerted.
(2:30): View of stone in the girls hand, it begins glowing then surges with energy to surround her. It moves before her, the glow getting bigger.
(2:44): Glow begins to take form of the man floating just past the cliff edge.
(2:55): See man glowing holding out a hand. See the girl smile slightly nodding and taking it.
(3:00): See her lift up to him and man hold her close as both begin to glow, energy surrounding them both.
(3:15): See them looking to each other a moment, (various views of each face), then see the girl nod as there’s a flash of light that envelopes them.
(3:27): Light re-appears the two right into an enemy area. They look to each other then pull out weapons and begin to fight side by side.
-Various views on both fighting the enemies.
(3:55): Enter the main villain fight. Both take hard hits and getting knocked down to see villain laughing.
(4:15): Two stand and take each other’s hand. Energy arises and they shoot it to the villain, stopping him.
(4:35): Bright flash see them alone, they look around, smile, then girl jumps to man’s arms, and he holds her up.
(4:43): Man brings her gently down; their lips meeting and their eyes close till end screen fades to white.
(5:00): End screen text: The end.
(0:12): See a girl by water/ Cliff edge holding a small blue stone in hands, wind blowing about, (pan view to show face then fade to hospital.
(0:20): Show from foot of bed to face, see man’s eyes open as singing begins.
~ Beginning 3 times do not have to be exact as long as the beginning image and ending are relatively on time.
(0:27): Man walking through streets of bustling shadow outlined people.
(0:40): Man turns to see the girl from cliff there crying, and looks to her a moment.
(0:47): Reaches hand to her, she looks to him a moment before cracking a smile and taking his hand.
(0:50): See happy times, girl laughing and man looks to her smiling. (Over patio table with food.)
(0:55): Show man step before her, shadow figure in front of them with weapon.
(1:00): Overlay of the side of girl’s face at end of last image, focus to see her tears begin to form.
(1:09): Pan view to ocean and horizon as the sun rise flashes to next image.
(1:13): Begin battle scene and man fighting lady with, (DBZ style almost).
(1:20): See man standing there as another beside him waves hands over face, man’s eyes dull a reddish-brown, facial expression goes blank. Girl in disbelief motions to him, hand outreaches towards him.
(1:36): See girl through man’s eyes walking down the street from before.
(1:45): See girl with the spirit of the man appear behind her, still with eyes overlay.
(1:50): Cut scene to man’s eyes going wide and pan to see the girl with tears and a blade in the man’s chest.
(2:04): Scene with man coming out of mind control to see the blade then her.
(2:12): See man begin to smile as she holds him crying, his hand gently to side of her face.
(2:22): See eyes of man widen once more and close, girl crying over him.
(2:26): Man’s face in hospital, eyes open as if energy is exerted.
(2:30): View of stone in the girls hand, it begins glowing then surges with energy to surround her. It moves before her, the glow getting bigger.
(2:44): Glow begins to take form of the man floating just past the cliff edge.
(2:55): See man glowing holding out a hand. See the girl smile slightly nodding and taking it.
(3:00): See her lift up to him and man hold her close as both begin to glow, energy surrounding them both.
(3:15): See them looking to each other a moment, (various views of each face), then see the girl nod as there’s a flash of light that envelopes them.
(3:27): Light re-appears the two right into an enemy area. They look to each other then pull out weapons and begin to fight side by side.
-Various views on both fighting the enemies.
(3:55): Enter the main villain fight. Both take hard hits and getting knocked down to see villain laughing.
(4:15): Two stand and take each other’s hand. Energy arises and they shoot it to the villain, stopping him.
(4:35): Bright flash see them alone, they look around, smile, then girl jumps to man’s arms, and he holds her up.
(4:43): Man brings her gently down; their lips meeting and their eyes close till end screen fades to white.
(5:00): End screen text: The end.
well for right now those are my only 2 ideas.. who knows they actually get done if i reload my program and get my brother to help.. critisize as well as on the art style.
