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 Posted: Tue Apr 05, 2011 2:10 am
We step out of the car and into the street
You can hear it hit softly, like the patter of little feet
It’s such a magical time, like sunset on the ocean
We’re caught in its spell, and we move in slow motion
I move in close, with my hands on her waist
I take it slow, no rush, no haste
The rain slowly falls and the full moon shines
She slides her arms around my neck, and says “your mine”
The rain picks up and it soaks our hair
But our eyes are focused, we have no cares
I whisper in her ear, “I love you my dear
“You will always be smiling, you have no use for tears”
“I will love you forever, is my vow to you”
“You are my heavenly dove, may it always be true”
She smiles at me, with joy and bliss
My lips meet hers, and in the rain we kiss
The rain itself, dances all around
As I kiss my sweetheart, without a sound
The rain glides through the air and I hold her tight
It’s like the angels are crying, such a beautiful sight
Her tongue touches mine and its ecstasy
A kiss in the rain sets my emotions free
She pulls my lower lip and it takes its toll
My whole body tingles, like I’ve lost control
As the rain falls down I just can’t believe
That I need her to move, to think, to breathe
I take a step back and I look in her eyes
She tells me she loves me and my heart just flies
If you believe perfection simply isn’t real
Kiss your love in the rain, and I promise you’ll feel
Many things in this world can wash away pain
But none of them compare, to kiss in the rain
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Posted: Tue Apr 05, 2011 12:39 pm
smile Nice, i like it. I could imagine the poem come to life before me.
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Posted: Tue Apr 05, 2011 12:41 pm
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Posted: Sun Jul 24, 2011 12:11 pm
that was really good it almost made me cry im a hopeless romantic
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Posted: Sun Jul 24, 2011 12:18 pm
Sweet onyx123 that was really good it almost made me cry im a hopeless romantic I'm a no hope possible romantic. xD D: I like reading it but am not too good at writing it....
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Posted: Sun Jul 24, 2011 12:20 pm
i try but im never ever that good
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Posted: Mon Jul 25, 2011 12:46 am
Madame_Raine Sweet onyx123 that was really good it almost made me cry im a hopeless romantic I'm a no hope possible romantic. xD D: I like reading it but am not too good at writing it.... it just takes time and practice
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