Welcome to Gaia! ::

i am just going to explaint he basic storyline i had discussed with mystic and thoran so it will make more sense rather than just giving bits and peices.

so the plot line went like this: after Kendra is captured Eulor evebtually finds out that the was kidnapped by cerberes and taken to the castle. once they find out that she is there they formulate a plan where as to they go and rescue the queen from cerberes, the groups would consists of whoever wanted to go and rescue her really. once in the castle my character Alturis would find her and bring her to the others, the king of cerberes or Kendras previous lover would stand in their way and only him, Alturis would step in front of the group and fight him while the others escaped in the process of escaping Aoi and the others would watch as my character was struck down. when i say struck down though i mean badly wounded but from the perspective of the escapees it would seem as if he died, in reality he woul live and whatever the king of cerberes did with him would be his decision.
this was the basic storyline i hd suggested to Kendra and thoran, they had both consented to it and so we moved along until other plots started to get muddled in it, personally i like this plot line becaus eit makes for a more dramatic story, we don't have to have Aoi see Alturis get hit but i would like the plot to go forward because then the queen would have lost a son in law and have to tell her daughter of what happened. as well with this Aoi would be pregnant with her and Alturis' chil and me and thoran both agree this would make for a more emotional plaot line for thoran's character. yet again this is what i had proposed, if you guys want to tweak bits and peices fine by me, however i would like to at the very least have Alturis captured by cerberes and Aoi abd everyone else think he is dead.

well then we hold off on the break out and allow tala to come to Eulor and do whatever it was intended for her to eb there for, then of course the meetnig happens and aoi finds out about her mother. we could have tehe meeting where Aoi happens to listen in and ome in wanting explanations from everyone, after we explain what happened to Kendra we come up with a plan to save the queen. Aoi wishes to go but everyone strongly dissagrees and after a small argument she finally agrees not to go, that way she is able to get away from all the fighting and you can have her go to the cave. then of course the plot would follow where they go save the queen Alturis is captured and everyone else thinks he is dead.

A thought combine Zuli's idea with what is already happening; Alturis will eventually return to Aoi. But a little different. Arakk is playing up to her trying to get her on his side kind of a thing. When Tala comes to visit he could come at the same time for added drama with the announcement of the war and everything. He will be "searching" for Alturis to show that he does have a loving side or something like that. When Alturis returns his memories are muddled by the shadows from Cereberes so that he cannot say what had happened to him while he was there. And like a spore growing inside him Arakk could have some sort of trigger to make him react to his will until it is figured out how to put a stop to this trigger. Alturis when he returns could be sent to Aoi in the caves.



Thats what my little mind worked up after reading the discussion. What do you guys think?

It is an angle to work on Aoi with. His body was never recovered from the fight and to do him proper respects he should be buried, or cremated, or whatnot. Without a body there is no way to do that. He will be searching for it so that he has some sort of hold on Aoi to prove that he is not as cruel hearted and evil as everyone is warning her about. But in reality, he is. He's just trying to weazle his way into Eulor.

Lol, I agree with Adon. If she doesn't want her character to die then he doesn't die. But I do like your ideas Touya, very well thought. Now, we need kind of how everyone is going to react to Arakk's appearance. Such as Tala's, Aoi, Alturis, and such...