In the Last class, Roleplaying and the effects of God Modding. Well, you also saw the Newbish way to Roleplay:
*Swings Blade to show the class* "see?"
Well, this is not accepted in very many places anymore, we look at a more apropriate way to Roleplay, which might be Semi-Literate, or just below it.
Raimundo Swings his blade to show the class. "see?"
Some people might think they are doing better then this and might BOLD Their Actions and "COLOR" Their Speech, this doesnt do anything but pretty your work up, doesnt do anything to your skill.
Now I am personally a Semi-Literate Roleplayer, I do it because it gives people what they want without having to spend a long time on typing. Here is an Example.
Raimundo Approaches his class with a grin on his face and draws his Blade, he Examines it quickly before swinging it in an Arc to show the Class sitting before him. "Do you see?" He said, his smile still on his face.
See a difference? there is more description, and people know exactly what your doing. now, if you like to beautify things up and spend more time on your work, you might become literate and do this:
Raimundo approaches the class, his feet hitting the ground with dull thuds. Raimundo breathed evenly and calmly and looked out over the class sitting before him. He shows his teeth in a Ggrin of pure joy. Slowly, he draws his blade, allowing for the slight hiss as it is released from its long, sheath, dull compared to the beautiful metal of the blade. As the blade left the sheath, the air could be heard as he brought it up to his eyes, watching the class through both sides of the blade. He rose his arms as though to strike forwards. In a pure, graceful moment of pure bliss for Raimundo, he swung his blade in an Arc, the blade beautifully slashing the air, so fast that now sound came from it that no air escaped its Beautiful menace. "Do you see now, my class, the beauty of the blade?" He said in a calm and even tone, more soft then hard as he re sheathed his blade and allowed for the slow his to fill the ears of his students as his smile never left his face.
NOW, do you see the difference? Some people might use another form of this and go first person, but It would be best if you did Third Person, so everyone understand what your doing and gets a clear description.
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Read and Understand, then go to your Exam.
Ninja Assassin: Total Demise
Just another Ninja Clan
