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Winko pushes his leg aside and punches Jayla dead center in the nose. While Jayla cries and tries to wipe his tears away Winko pushes Jayla to the ground, onto his belly. Winko has one hand on his punched area, and his foot on the back of Jayla’s neck and his other foot on his right hand. Winko plans to hold him down till the big thug comes back. Everyone in the hall just stands in circle around the two.
“What’s there to see? I’m just doin’ what any of us in here should of done. I see that since I’m the only one who actually did anything, that the bunch of yous’ here back boneless. This ain’t nothin’ special, get on and continue your business.” Winko Yells To the Surrounding crowd, but while Winko was talking, he forgot about Jayla’s free left hand. Jayla Reached for his knife on his left leg. Jayla then picks up his right arm with knife in hand, and cuts Winko’s left leg, the one that was standing on his neck. Winko steps off and right away tries to put pressure on his wound. Now Jayla is back up on his feet.
“ Oh boy, you’re getting it now!” Jayla says
“Whatever.” Winko replies.
Jayla lunges at Winko, and Winko doges his strike, one after another. Jayla then catches Winko’s arm and cuts it, but Jayla got in close for that attack and Winko grabs Jayla’s head from behind and bashes it into his knee. Then he takes his knife and throws it randomly. Winko then runs to a wall planning to bash Jayla’s head into the wall. His plan failed as the thug caught Winko by the shoulder.
“I’ll take it from here. Thanks kid, take this. See yah” the big thug then takes Jayla by the arms, drops him on the ground, and drags him though the hallway. You can hear Jayla moan from the headache has thanks to Winko’s knee. Winko takes his head cloth, or headband and makes a tourniquet for his leg. Winko just tried to apply pressure to his arm so that the bleeding would stop.
“What the Enden are you all looking at? I told you, I shouldn’t have been the only one trying to practice good business. That waste of food tried cheating that other thug, I was just trying to set thing straight.” Winko yelled to the crowd as he looked at them while he walked through.

any suggestions for change?

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just go get a deathnote

i found a solid black composotion book and i wrote in siler deathnote on it