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henrytownshend4235 Vice Captain
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 Posted: Mon Jan 12, 2009 8:53 pm
This is the site I will be posting the story I am writing about Richard Bennitt, a hitman from the organization Dark Daggers. http://www.fictionpress.com/s/2621199/1/SupremacyPlease leave comments on this forum. Thanks Chapter one coming soon. Only the prologue is finished now.
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Posted: Tue Jan 13, 2009 5:59 am
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Posted: Fri Jan 23, 2009 6:47 pm
It's a bit like Metal Gear Solid's Snake with some attitude! biggrin
The only thing I'll say about this is how Richard could just plant C4's in that last room wihtout Viktor or the bodyguards doing anything about it...
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Posted: Fri Jan 23, 2009 9:17 pm
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Posted: Sat Jan 24, 2009 5:12 am
'Special Delivery from James Bond' *plants C4's* 'have a nice day!'
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Posted: Sat Jan 24, 2009 7:04 am
Bad guys: Huh? a present? *opens it up* Oh sh....! *BOOM!!!!*
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Posted: Sat Jan 24, 2009 4:01 pm
Wolfoverlord342 Bad guys: Huh? a present? *opens it up* Oh sh....! *BOOM!!!!*
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Posted: Sat Jan 24, 2009 8:15 pm
I bet Richard has tons of those. alex, you should join in on the rp. it's fun.
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Posted: Sun Jan 25, 2009 12:44 am
Wolfoverlord342 I bet Richard has tons of those. alex, you should join in on the rp. it's fun. you mean the stories? hmmm... is it OK if I do short stories? starting one now... It's called 'the plot' but's that all I'm saying (type; Thriller burning_eyes )
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Posted: Sun Jan 25, 2009 7:26 am
well, you could create a character and then join in one the ones started or create a new. you could join in in The Twilight Hour. There's still some people starting off
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Posted: Sun Jan 25, 2009 4:10 pm
Wolfoverlord342 well, you could create a character and then join in one the ones started or create a new. you could join in in The Twilight Hour. There's still some people starting off oh, you mean in the RP forum! Duh! Yeah, I'll check it out mrgreen (I'll just stick with 'The Twilight Hour' for now)
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Posted: Sun Jan 25, 2009 7:12 pm
yeah i think you'll fit in just fine there. my character, Alan just ended up in the Otherworld school
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Posted: Mon Jan 26, 2009 12:41 am
I'm at the church... We'll see if our paths meet
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Posted: Mon Jan 26, 2009 5:38 am
who knows? maybe it'll play out like SH1
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henrytownshend4235 Vice Captain
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Posted: Mon Jun 08, 2009 6:22 pm
This story is currently on hold until I can finish another story ive been working on for about 5 years.... For those interested in reading it, I'll be posting it as soon as it's finished... im currently on page 98, almost 99.
Oh, and as for why Richard Bennitt didn't plant C4 in the room was because he needed to find out WHY they had all those hardrives and thumb drives... It would be foolish to kill their only source of information.
He expected the C4 he planted after Viktor went up the elevator to kill Viktor, but when he saw him on the bridge, he tried to kill him then too.
Example... Let's say.... you know something about someone who stole my car.... I know you're in league with whoever did it, so i plan on killing you.... I break into your house.... Sure, i could extract revenge and leave a bunch of bombs without you doing anything about it.... but I need to know more about who stole my car.... So i get the info, and then set the bombs off.
Something to acknowledge is, Richard doesn't know anything about this place... How would he know that the elevator took Viktor to an escape route? As a hitman, he waited until Viktor was out of sight to throw C4 around... Otherwise, Viktor could have had his guards aim their guns at him and shoot him before he set the C4, or kept him there to die in the explosion.
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