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 Posted: Wed Aug 27, 2008 1:11 pm
Sorry for the late post...
Oh how i long to be in the arms of the woman that shall never be mine... She is the one i adore, the flesh on my body, the blood in my veins. Every time i look at her my heart sets fire again, but then it freezes over knowing she has a boyfriend. My eyes stare at the cold hard floor. Oh why are you not mine i ask myself to many times... Why do you hug that other guy and not me? My heart it breaks in 100 pieces. My dreams turn in to nightmares... My life, empty and unfulfilling... For Ever, lost in the passion for her love... For ever dieing for my love... For the love i want, the love of caitlin...
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Posted: Wed Aug 27, 2008 1:26 pm
Not the most original work, and you do need to mind your lay-out, but the last sentences were well written.
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