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PostPosted: Thu Feb 13, 2014 1:41 pm


((Brought over Yoroko from Elite but made changes to her))

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xxxxName : Yorokobashii Tenshi
xxxxGender : Female
xxxxHeight : Surprisingly tall, Yoroko towers at a height of 5'8 because of her long, lanky legs. Even at this height though, she remains elegant and graceful in posture.
xxxxWeight : Yoroko weighs about 127Ibs.
xxxxxEye Color: Yoroko's eye color ranges from light to dark green depending on the day and the lighting of the room and the time of day.
xxxxxHair Color: Yoroko's hair is a multitude of colors, the main color being a dark green that matches her eyes. Blue and white streaks decorate her long tendrils of hair down the length of her back yet she does not do anything to dye it this color. It is a mystery even to her why her hair is so decorative.
xxxxxBody Type: Thin yet strong, Yoroko is very skinny except for her medium-sized bust and curves. Her middle is very small even without the corsets she wears most of the time as well.
xxxxxUsual Attire: Yoroko's attire is nothing like the normal Shinigami's. She prefers to dress in corsets and elegant gowns with intricate designs and lacing around them. Surprisingly none of her battle skills are weakened by this, including her speed despite being in tight clothing all the time. She says looking her best raises her morale, therefore raising her strength in a way. Whether this is true or not is unknown but it works for her.
xxxxxTattoos / Markings / Piercings: Upon her back are scars in the shape of what appears to be angel wings. These are not natural, however, and are a painful reminder of her past that she does not like to talk about so she keeps the scars hidden under her corsets.
xxxxxEthnicity: Yoroko appears to be a mix of English and Japanese, leaning more to the English side. Her porcelain pale skin, brightly colored eyes, and tall build make this apparent.
xxxxReiatsu Color : Yoroko's reiatsu color is pure white like an engulfing, blinding ray of light.
xxxxReiatsu level : Immense for somebody with a lower position. She's a very peaceful person though and doesn't release her full abilities too often.
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xxxxPersonality : Upon meeting her for the first time, some may dislike Yoroko for the reason she speaks in a very formal manner most of the time and because she also does not have much to say to people she does not know. Despite this, she is also well-liked by some because of these reasons and many more. Most of these reasons though not many people stick around long enough to find out. She is very gentle in nature and can be very sweet on most days. She barely has a temper but on the rare occasion that she does lose it, she's hard to control.


Giving most people the benefit of the doubt and second chances, Yoroko always believes there is some respect to be found yet in the world and is always willing to let somebody redeem themselves. She is very kind even though she does not always seem that way and is hardly seen without a smile on her face when she is around young ones or familiar comrades. Those close to her say she lives up to her name but she turns such compliments down because she believes living up to such a name would take centuries of perfection. Something that she thinks nobody is capable of, no matter how pure or good.

Yoroko is also a great strategist. She always weighs every outcome in every situation to overcome it the best she possibly can. She never just rushes into a battle without a plan unless it is absolutely necessary in order to win.


xxxxBiography : Born in the 3rd Rukongai in the Soul Society, Yoroko was the daughter of a wealthy, lawful family that believed in nobility and morals. She was brought up as a dignified, respectable young lady that always obeyed orders no matter how strict. This life, however, was not as fulfilling or pleasant as one would think. Suffering physical and verbal abuse everyday, every member of her family expected her to be more than what she was after finding out she had a high Reiatsu level. One could say she was blessed with a curse in this family for not one of her ancestors had such powers in centuries. The family decided to use this to their advantage and to show her off like some kind of prized possession that lacked willpower and a voice of her own. Taught to always be silent until she was given permission to speak, she never found such a voice until it was far too late to use it.

By the time Yoroko was in her 20's, she was seen as an object to wealthy and powerful men that worked with her father in the district. He was happy to give her up to them for periods of time for the right amount of coin. Yet she never objected in fear of being abused or worse so she went along with it despite her need to get away. She knew she had the power to but she did not want to dishonor or disrespect her family.

One night she finally had enough. Declaring in front of her siblings and mother that she would no longer be subject to such a life, she gathered what little she was given permission to take by her mother and started for the door to leave. Awaiting her was none other than her father who grabbed the nearest weapon he could find, a branding iron from the fireplace, and struck her across the back several times with it. Yoroko's cries could not have been heard through the thick walls of her home so nobody could come to her rescue. And so it was her time to finally do something. Finding the strength to scream out the name of a Kido she had learned secretly, she used Fushibi and almost burned the man she had once called her father to a crisp. The only thing holding her back from killing him was her sense of mercy even after all that he had done to her.

This being said, her life immediately took a turn for the worse after the incident. She was banished from her home by her father and was forced to find her own way in the districts. This wasn't the least bit easy. That is, until she met a certain boy that would change her life forever. His name was Saruhiko, or Saru for short. The boy had been banished just as she had and happened to be living in the Rukongai as well. The boy was innocent and shy around her but she instantly took a liking to him for some reason. He was just a person of interest to her after hearing of his story. The two both had a strong sense of honor and were different; he being of mixed blood and she coming from a disgraceful family that forced her into things unspoken. Maybe this was why they fell for each other with time.


After meeting Saru, they both left for the Academy to study the Shinigami ways so they could help people in need of their power. Her reason for joining was to help anybody in times of trouble; no matter how wealthy, disrespectful, or otherwise. It was after they graduated that they took a huge step in their lives.... ( I plan on making it more lengthy and less rushed to the point of summarizing when their story starts.)


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xxxxLikes :
xxxx Fruit of all kinds. Though, more preferably, she has a specific taste for strawberries. Not the sour, bitter ones though. They must be ripened to perfection.
xxxx Victorian styles and periods of time as reflected by the way she dresses and speaks.
xxxx History and historical novels in which she reads during her free time. Her favorites all have to do with wars.
xxxx Swordplay. Whether it be kendo or traditional-style, she loves fighting without the heightened penalty of battle.
xxxx Fairy Tales and fantasies. She is a realist for the most part but wishes for the more fantastical side of life.
xxxx Studying
xxxx Wide range of teas and sweets that are her guilty pleasure but she hardly finds the time to indulge on them.
xxxxDislikes :
xxxx Spilling innocent blood.
xxxx Cockiness.
xxxxRelationships :
xxxxSaruhiko Haruka [Husband]
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xxxxRank : [N/A At the moment]
xxxxSquad :[Hopefully 8]
xxxxSquad ability :[N/A]


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xxxxZanpakuto Name :Hanako-Haru (Meaning: Springing Flower Child)
xxxxInner World Appearance :Endless Forestry
xxxxSpirit Appearance :
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Hanako-Haru lives up to his name quite a bit. He appears to be a small, cheerful child that always has a mischievous smile on his face and a twinkle in his little mismatched eyes. His hair almost matches Yoroko's and his eyes are green on the left and yellow on the right. His attire mainly consists of a long red cravat, a long-sleeved tan shirt that seems just a bit too big, and bottoms that match. It's almost like a suit, really. He looks about 10 years of age and acts like it as well. In fact, when others can see his spirit most people think that he is Yoroko's son; something that they both like to hear because of how close they are.
xxxxSealed Appearance :
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Hanako-Haru's sealed form is in the shape of a Wakizashi. It's grip and fuller are golden on it's sheathe and when it is unsheathed the metal appears to be clear as if it were glass. When light hits it the blade acts as a prism and reflects it back, a key component to the Zanpakuto's abilities. If one is careful enough or there is no light in the area the sword is unsheathed, they can see the beauty that is Hanako-Haru. If one is not so lucky and happens to be in a very bright area, the blade is practically transparent and incredibly difficult to see.



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xxxxRelease Type : Progressive
xxxxRelease Phrase : "Watashi no hana o hana to subete o kizetsu sa seru." (Translation: "Blossom my flower and stun all."
xxxxAppearance : The rapier-type blade stays the same besides the pastel colored hues dancing across the metal of the sword. These colors shine around the user like a rainbow-colored aura and spark out at anybody near.
xxxxInstant Effect : Upon release the blade releases an electromagnetic wave that can envelope a 10ft. to 2 mile radius from all sides. Normally an electromagnetic wave wouldn't be so harmful but gamma rays are what is released from the wave which cause incredible amounts of radiation to follow. Any electrical signals can be wiped out with this instant effect if they are within the set range; making communication through electric-powered devices useless as well as any lights nearby.

What can this radiation do to an enemy though?
Well, first off since brain cells do not reproduce, they won't be damaged directly unless the exposure is 5,000 rems or greater. Like the heart, radiation kills nerve cells and small blood vessels, and can cause seizures and immediate death. Also, Intense exposure to radioactive material at 1,000 to 5,000 rems would do immediate damage to small blood vessels and probably cause heart failure and death directly. Considering the enemy may not be human (It probably would not be human), it would not cause death directly in most situations. It all depends on how the enemy reacts and retaliates.

xxxxPassive Ability : The power of this Shikai isn't as powerful as it could be since Yoroko uses it the wrong way. After the incantation is spoken, sparks flicker out from her Zanpakuto and anything they touch can be stunned or electrified depending on if they take a full hit or not. The sparks can travel through objects as well if they are water or certain metals that conduct electricity. This power is especially useful if the enemy is near any water sources or if they have their own power that uses water. Once the Shikai is activated Yoroko simply uses blunt force to try and shock her enemies because she never took the time to perfect her Shikai completely. If she had done so, it would be much more powerful than just shocking enemies senselessly.
However, she did manage to learn how to use electric barriers. These barriers can surround her or somebody she is protecting so they cannot be harmed unless the enemy wishes to get a nasty shock. This also means that Yoroko cannot harm the enemy either, for she can't reach through the barrier.

The weakness to this Shikai is also it's strength, water. If Yoroko were to somehow have water on her person she would suffer the same electric shock that anybody else would get. Though she knows was to prevent such happenings.

xxxxTechniques :
xxxx Kyūin enajī: This ability is used when there is no electrical source near to draw from. It involves using life essence from the body of the user in order to wield it. This, however, is only a last resort technique for this exact reason. Every time it is used the user becomes weakened and years can even be taken of his/her life. This is why Yoroko hardly uses this ability unless somebody is in mortal danger. She would never use it as a last resort for herself though; only for others when they are in trouble. As this is not exactly an offensive ability, some may think it is useless. But if the time comes where Yoroko were to run out of spiritual energy or nearby electrical sources to power her attacks/defenses with, this would come in handy. It is basically like a generator running on the user's life force.

The amount of energy drawn is based on how much life essence is used. For example, enough energy to power the bare necessities of Yoroko's Shikai would only make her weak when she is done. Using enough to do techniques and powers close to Bankai level would probably take years off her lifespan. Thankfully she does not have to use this power much since there is electricity in many places.

xxxx Denki Yari: Yoroko's otherwise short zanpakuto turns into a long electrical spear. The blade does not extend but it appears so because electricity forms a solid as it extends out past the blade's point. The spear is dangerous to the touch and its current flows at about 70milliamperes; 50 more than what could instantly kill any human. It could very well kill any other being as well if it touched them long enough but for the most part causes paralysis in the amount of time 20milliamperes would stop a human's heart.

If a victim is paralyzed, this gives the wielder time to stab the victim with the point of the zanpakuto if they desire too. The reaction time is a bit slow though due to the fact the electrical current can very well be reversed and sent back through the hilt. It may not paralyze the user but it can be very painful if this happens.


How this works (In the form of rolling dice):
No effect: If the user rolls either a 0 or a 7. This results in no effect taking place whether it be paralysis, death, injury, etc.
Slowed speed due to slight paralysis in the limbs: If the user rolls a 1, 3,or a 6, this is the resulting penalty. Shunpo/Sonido is useless now and speed decreases by 50% for the one being attacked. Wielder cannot use this technique again, however, and the zanpakuto is sealed once again.
Complete paralysis: If the user rolls a 2 and only a 2, they will be paralyzed in the legs and arms. This only lasts for 1 thread post(1 minute) though and they can still use any abilities that do not involve the limbs paralyzed. The wielder's abilities are no longer useful at this time as the Zanpakuto is sealed and the wielder's speed is dropped by 70%. If this happens, the Zanpakuto cannot be released again within 24 hours.
Negate: The attack, since not perfected, can be almost easy to block if one is good with defensive techniques. If the user rolls a 5,8,9, or 10, the paralysis can be completely avoided without having to even block. Nothing happens to the wielder other than their attack not working correctly.
Just a hit: If the user rolls a 4, the opponent is hit by the zanpakuto wherever aimed. The amount of damage done is determined by the opponent's roll: 1 being barely a scratch, 10 being heavily damaged.





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PostPosted: Wed Feb 19, 2014 11:57 am


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Hi there, I'm Ultima and I will be your RPC Judge for the day. So, first things first, you'll need to pick a squad, given your characters personality and backstory, I would guess that trust is something that is difficult for her, based on that I think the less aggressive squads would suit her better.

So my suggestions would be Squad 3, maybe Squad 4 depending on how you feel about healing, Squad 6, Squad 7 and then my own Squad 13.

As well, a Sealed Zanpakuto can only be one of four types of Katana, as stated by Rule #6 (Found Here)
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Sealed Zanpakutos

For the G13 members, Zanpakuto's must be in the form of any of the four blades listed below.

Katana The term katana may be applied to the standard-size, moderately curved, Japanese sword with a blade length of greater than 60 cm (23.6 inches). The katana is characterized by its distinctive appearance: a curved, slender, single-edged blade, a circular or squared guard, and a hilt long enough to accommodate two hands.

Wakizashi: A short blade between 30 and 60 cm (12 and 24 inches), with an average of 50 cm (20 inches). It is similar to but shorter than a katana, and usually shorter than the kodachi . The wakizashi was usually worn together with the katana. When worn together, the pair of swords were called daishō, which translates literally as "large and small". The katana was often called the "long sword", and the wakizashi the "companion sword".

Nodachi: The nodachi was more difficult to wield due to its size and weight. The length of the hilt of the nodachi varied between twelve to thirteen inches (30 to 33 centimeters). Due to its weight and size, its cutting capability and range exceeds those of a katana.

Tantō: The tanto is commonly referred to as a knife or dagger. The blade is single or double edged, with a length between 15 and 30 cm (6-12 inches, in Japanese 1 shaku). The tantō was designed primarily as a stabbing weapon, but the edge can be used for slashing as well.

This Rule does not apply for Hueco Mundo, as their passive "Rogue" ability allows their sealed zanpakuto's to be anything, except for projectile weapons.


Moving on, your Zanpakuto's "instant" effect should be just that, instant, it only lasts for the post that you invoke your Shikai. As such, I think your Instant Effect, as it is now, should be your Passive Ability, which is always active while your Shikai is active.

Your techniques need some work honestly.

Kyūin enajī, okay some good details there, but what exactly does it do? What is the point to this technique and what makes it worth draining her own life force?

Denki Yari, under the same rules of RPC's which was linked above, Paralysis Zan's are banned unless you can create a fair, and functional dice system for both you as the wielder, AND your opponent.



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PostPosted: Wed Feb 19, 2014 1:43 pm


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I sincerely apologize for the number of mistakes on my profile. I probably should not have rushed so much on it but I had planned on developing Yoroko's skills with time. I hope I have fixed all of the mistakes and if not, let me know so I can fix them as soon as possible. Thank you for your time, and once again, I apologize for everything wrong with this profile.
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I wouldn't leave "blocking" to a roll of the dice as it seems luck based on whether or not the opponent is allowed to block the technique at all, which I'm fairly certain we can agree would not be a fair thing to do.

As such, my suggestion is that you put in what might happen if the opponent blocks the attack, on their own, and then re-word the "Blocking" effect to "Negated" or along those lines, to make it clearer on what is meant.

That aside, I can't find much else at this current moment.


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PostPosted: Thu Feb 20, 2014 12:04 pm


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Well, I can't find anything else wrong with it.

How bout you Kage?


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PostPosted: Thu Feb 20, 2014 1:51 pm


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Hi, I'll be wrapping up this RPC for Ultima.

Now, we can't fully accept this RPC until the captain of squad 8 accepts you into the squad. I can get on his butt for you if needed.

I also noticed that you omitted the Appearance section at the top. It is a required section even if you have a picture, you need a 2 sentence description in case for some reason the picture disappears. The same goes with all appearances

Your Instant effect is not passable, at all. Gama rays can not be seen, and can not be dodged. It's not only an auto attack, but an auto kill. Not only that, but it has a two mile RADIUS, which means, on all sides in a circle, with her in the center, the radiation goes 4 miles.

Ok, also, in your passive ability, you can not mention that you have shields, that is a Tech. The manipulation of electricity, yet, you have an instant effect in it, along with the making of the shield. I would wait to receive your rank to see how many techs you can have.

For the second Technique, you can not have a second Physical change. These techs are connected to your Shikai passive ability to show basically what you can do.

As far as the dice system that you have proposed for your techs, I have 2 issues with it.

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Slowed speed due to slight paralysis in the limbs: If the user rolls a 1, 3,or a 6, this is the resulting penalty. Shunpo/Sonido is useless now and speed decreases by 50% for the one being attacked. Wielder cannot use this technique again, however, and the zanpakuto is sealed once again.

This needs a cool down on it. It can only last for som many posts.

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Just a hit: If the user rolls a 4, the opponent is hit by the zanpakuto wherever aimed. The amount of damage done is determined by the opponent's roll: 1 being barely a scratch, 10 being heavily damaged.

This is an auto hit, even if it is on a dice roll. I saw this because if you aim for their head, and a 10 is rolled, then that is critical damage to their head, without them being able to dodge it.

One question about the dice rolling system. Do you roll, or do they?

Please make the required changes.






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Are we still wanting to fix this RPC? Soon if this is not posted in a week, it will go to the archives.

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PostPosted: Mon Mar 10, 2014 12:32 pm


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Are we still wanting to fix this RPC? Soon if this is not posted in a week, it will go to the archives.


I still wish to fix it. It's just incredibly hard right now for me to get back to you and think of ways to fix this. My creativity is being put towards a whole other guild and other things so I'm kind of struggling with figuring out how to make this profile work. I'm sorry it's taking so long... I'll figure something out soon I hope after speaking to some people who are better at making profiles.
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Are we still wanting to fix this RPC? Soon if this is not posted in a week, it will go to the archives.


I still wish to fix it. It's just incredibly hard right now for me to get back to you and think of ways to fix this. My creativity is being put towards a whole other guild and other things so I'm kind of struggling with figuring out how to make this profile work. I'm sorry it's taking so long... I'll figure something out soon I hope after speaking to some people who are better at making profiles.


Ok, thank you for answering me so quickly ^.^

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PostPosted: Mon Mar 24, 2014 3:40 pm


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You have until the 30th' to fix what needs to be edited on this RPC before it is archived. Please keep in mind once its archived I can be retrieved.

If you would like help with making the requested Changes please feel free to PM me - and I am more than happy to bounce ideas at you for the requested edits.
PostPosted: Sun Aug 03, 2014 12:13 am


I am archiving this because it has been a while since you have made changes to your RPC. If you would like us to get this back for you, you can post in this thread

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