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PostPosted: Sat Feb 08, 2014 7:13 pm


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xxxxName : Takeshi Mibu User Image - Blocked by "Display Image" Settings. Click to show.
xxxxGender : Male
xxxxHeight : 6 ft 2 in
xxxxWeight : 250 ibs
xxxxReiatsu Color : Black with purple sparks and outline
xxxxReiatsu level : Immense
xxxxAppearance :
xxxx has red hairthat looks black at night or in the dark, has pale red eyes that turn blood red when reiatsu is flared, wears normal shinigami garb but different colors, its all black but is trimmed dark red, his captains coat is the same.
xxxxPersonality : Use to be flirtatious and funny but after the time Yuzuki has been gone his more blood thirsty side showed, he loves to fight, His flirtatious side comes out from time to time. He is cold when he fights, showing no mercy, he will kill anything to get the job done, he loves being sent out first into a war, loving to draw first blood.
xxxxBiography : Takeshi was born into a clan of very strong swordsmen, his mother died giving birth to him and his father was clean leader, his father saw potential in Takeshi at a young age and started to train him at the age of Six, by age Eleven the clan began to fear Takeshi and the council ordered for him to be killed, Takeshi fought and killed them all until him and his father was left, with a sword strike to their chests they were both dead. After coming to the soul Society Takeshi became a Shinigami and was put in squad 8, under Yuzuki. He quickly fell for her and worked his way through the ranks to be Lit. Suddenly Yuzuki goes missing and Takeshi thinks shes been kidnapped, he searched for her continously until ordered to end his search, at that point he trained even harder until he became squad 11 captain. In that time he dropped his emotionless mask and mixed with his blood thirsty personality to become a new person. While he was on his search for Yuzuki, who was in japan living a comfortable life, the soul society was being ravaged with no chance of survival. When he heard of this, he gave up his search completely and went to Hueco Mundo to try and stop the hordes of hollows from coming into the world of the living. It was there he grew stronger while the soul society took its time in being rebuilt.


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xxxxReiatsu Shape : a wolf
xxxxLikes : fighting
xxxx • training
xxxx • blood
xxxx • strong people
xxxxDislikes : weak people
xxxx • close minded people
xxxx • ignorant people
xxxx • arrogant people
xxxxRelationships :
xxxx • Ayume Tsukino
xxxx • Yuzuki
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xxxxSquad : Eleven
xxxxSquad ability :
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xxxxZanpakuto Name : Amaterasu
xxxxInner World Appearance : a hell like scenery, with fire everywhere. In the center is a giant gate shaped as a dragon; it looks to be the gates of hell itself. In front of the gate is a throne chair, where his zanpaktou spirit sits.
xxxxSpirit Appearance :
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is a lean bodied male with horns and wings,looks to be very demonic/ hollow like. has blood of his enemies all over his body, his eyes are a golden color and his hair brown with blood in it.
xxxxSealed Appearance :
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xxxxRelease Type : N/A
xxxxRelease Phrase : Burn, Amaterasu
xxxxAppearance : While the fire bursts from him, his zanpakuto is now a blood red color and the hilt itself is on fire to burn anyone that isn't him.
xxxxInstant Effect : fire explodes out from his body in a five foot radius
xxxxPassive Ability : His flames leave a mark on the victim for (3) posts after they are scorched. When they are marked, smoke constantly pours from the burn, not stopping till the three posts are over with. While this mark is activated, the slightest touch of Takeshi's flames become so painful that they give the opponent the feeling of being burned through their entire body.
xxxxTechniques :
xxxx • Blazing column :stabs zanpaktou into ground and under opponents feet a pillar of fire rises from the ground, meaning to engulf them in flames that erupt from beneath the ground, compressed and heated to a temperature of 900C. It forms by sending a large amount of flames through the ground once the blade is stabbed through, then manipulating it and rising it from under the opponent. He can use it once per post for as long as the blade is in the ground, and can fire it up to three times at once as long as he remains holding onto the blade. When the blade is pulled out of the ground, the ability ends. Anyone caught with the pillar of flames but Takeshi will be burnt, and those stepping on the ground when the sword is in can feel the heat.
xxxx • massacring flames.: A large wave of flames leaves the zanpakuto when swung. This ability will build up in power for as long as he doesn't let out his flames. When charging, he can wait up to three posts to let out a strike that is 1100C and has a radius of fifty yards with a width of thirty yards and height of twenty. When it is not charged, it is only 500 C with a 10 yard radius and 7x5 width and height. When charged for two posts, it rises to 800 C with a 20 yard radius and 10x8 width/height.
xxxx • Burning skies: channels a large amount of flames into blade and puts it up into the air which will launch it and make is rain down on enemy in large fire balls. The flames travel thousands of feat into the air, till the sky is reached before breaking up and falling back down, forming large balls of flames as it happens. The fireballs are 50 yards all around and up to 7 can fall at once before the attack must be done again. It takes one post for the flames to reach the sky and come back down, then another two to charge the attack again.

*flaming rush: Covers self and blade in compress flames and rushes enemy in shunpo speed with enough force to knock them away as well as burnt them heavily, if uses sword instead the force of the strike could break through their guard, must dodge to avoid. The flames are 900 C. The opponents are knocked away by the sheer force of rushing into them with a mere shoulder charge, punch or kick. If they decide to try and defend the strikes normally, they can find themselves taking the force of a full momentum strike out of shunpo with the chance to be severely burned and caught in a position where the passive can ravage an enemy.



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xxxxRelease Type : Stand Alone
xxxxRelease Phrase : Ignite, Amaterasu
xxxxAppearance : His armor darkens as dark flames form as pauldrons and all the red heat from before sinks into the eye holes of his helmet. The armor grows bulkier and his sword grows to become more jagged and vicious looking. Black on the outer part with silver on the edge. His chest piece and knee plates are decorated with what looks to be the mask of a demon, the eyes of such also glowing a threatening red. His gauntlets are clawed at the fingers and his greaves have pointed ends to further the damage of kicks from the toe out.
xxxxInstant Effect : Black flames erupt from his body in a ten foot radius before swirling at the end of the ten feet to prevent enemies from getting close while his armor changes.
xxxxPassive Ability : Curse of the sun goddess - When the flames scorch an opponent, rather than smoke, the flames remain stuck through the reiatsu in the fire melding with the reiatsu in another being. Unless the enemy fully unleashes their reiatsu, an act which can alert mostly anyone who can sense such a thing, the flames will continue to burn for three posts.
xxxxTechniqued : A Battlefield Ashed Away (Burning Skies V2) - Takeshi lifts his blade and lets his fire rise thousands of feet till it reaches the clouds, where it spreads wildly, possibly darkening the entire area except for small areas for the sun to poke through. Ten fireballs with a 75 ft weight and height crash down onto one area (100 meter diameter) at whatever time Takeshi pleases. As long as he uses no other abilities, he can keep his concentration enough to send them down one at a time while restoring whatever he lost after every three posts. If he uses another ability, concentration is broken and the flames all drop down at once (However many are left) and a five post cooldown must be waited before the ability can be used again. The fireballs are at 1500C each.
xxxx • Will of The Goddess (Massacring Flames V2) - A strike with immense power, Takeshi can send out a blazing wave of black flames towards an enemy at 1700C once charged for two posts. After that there is a three post cooldown. The flames are able to travel for 75 yards before fading out. The heightxwidth is 50x30 yards. When he does not charge the ability, his blade is instead coated in black flames, and releases a small, 700C wave of flames at 5x3 height and width. They only travel out thirty feet before fading out. He is able to use these without the need for a cooldown.
xxxx • Flash Fire: The ultimate attack of Amaterasu, which can be released from both the hilt and blade of the zanpakuto. A fire that rushes at sub-shunpo speed towards an opponent at a fatal 1800C. Takeshi unleashes gold flames that resemble a bright light at incredible speeds. It can travel 300 meters and has a widthxlength of 75 meters. His attack is quick and can snipe off opponents, however requires a five post cooldown. (captain only)


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PostPosted: Sun Feb 09, 2014 11:22 am


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Hello, my name is Youroka Kage and I will be your judge today.

First off, I noticed a lot of your appearances only have pictures. We need about 2 sentences per picture in case your pictures ever become broken.

Also, your personality needs to be about 4 sentences minimum. I understand not knowing the character a little, but you can get so little said about a person in 4 sentences.

Ok, I need to know how hot your body burns with fire. Like what is your Maximum?

How big is the circle that streams out from under your opponents feet? How does the fire find the person. How big is your shock wave for tech number 2?

Also, in Bankai, you only get 2 techs, please pick out which ones you would like.






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PostPosted: Sun Mar 16, 2014 11:01 am


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Hello, my name is Youroka Kage and I will be your judge today.

First off, I noticed a lot of your appearances only have pictures. We need about 2 sentences per picture in case your pictures ever become broken.

Also, your personality needs to be about 4 sentences minimum. I understand not knowing the character a little, but you can get so little said about a person in 4 sentences.

Ok, I need to know how hot your body burns with fire. Like what is your Maximum?

How big is the circle that streams out from under your opponents feet? How does the fire find the person. How big is your shock wave for tech number 2?

Also, in Bankai, you only get 2 techs, please pick out which ones you would like.






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there you go.
PostPosted: Sun Mar 16, 2014 7:24 pm


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Since Kage wanted the day off but your RPC needs to be done, She asked me to take over.

So. First off: The rules changed on your bankai since we did this. You're a captain so you can have three techniques if you want. If you dont want to change it again, its optional.

Second: Release types: It would be Stand alone for your shikai, and progressive for your bankai. Not "fire".

Third: In your appearance the fact that your zanpakuto is on fire and is able to produce fire needs to be in your passive ability.

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is able to produce fire for him to use. his fire burns up to 700 degrees and stays at a 400 degree minimum.


That is the part of the sentence I am referring too.



Blazing ....Column ? I think that's the word you mean, if not let me know. Ok. So what does this fire do in the ten foot radius? Does it shoot upwards? Or does it say as this awesome fire circle under their feet? How does it get there - is it a mind thing where its just anyone he considers his enemy? Obviously it burns but how hot is it? How often can he use it? post cool down amount?

Massacring Flames ... how big is this shock wave? How far does it go? Obviously it burns but how hot is it? How often can he use it? post cool down amount? Did you really think saying "like Ichigo's main characteritis bullshit zanpakuto attack" was really going satiate an rpc judge? - Not being rude, I'm just being mahself. you know this.

Burning skies How far does it go (radius of area of effect)? Could this potentially burn any allies within the area? Or is it even an area or a person specific target? Obviously it burns but how hot is it? How often can he use it? post cool down amount?

Flaming Rush Obviously it burns but how hot is it? How often can he use it? post cool down amount? If the sword is not used how else is he knocking the opponents away? Just ramming into them?

Bankai

Appearance - once again, you need to put the temperature of the flames he's putting in your passive ability.

ALSO. That's sneaky. I just noticed you're using Celcius for bankai. But all it says is Degrees in shikai. Please. Please. 1700C is 3092.0ºF. You know this? Which granted - its below an hydrooxygen temperature so I mean its NOT that ridiculius however. Imma need you to specify if its C or F in your shikai now, or if you actually meant to use C. Make it match please.

• Instant Effect : same as shinkai but now a 10 foot radius.

So lazy. But thinking about it now, how hot are these flames in both instant effects?

Burning Skies How far does it go (radius of area of effect)? Could this potentially burn any allies within the area? Or is it even an area or a person specific target? How often can he use it? post cool down amount? How much hotter? how much faster?

Masscaring flames Oh hey you answered one of my questions for your shikai version here. -.- PUT THAT INFO IN YOUR SHIKAI TECH. And again most of the same questions apply. how big is this shock wave? How far does it go? How often can he use it? post cool down amount?

Flash Fire: How far does it go (radius of area of effect)? Could this potentially burn any allies within the area? Or is it even an area or a person specific target? How often can he use it? post cool down amount? How hot is it? Also. Incinerate = insta-kill. Lets take that out please because insta-kills are no no. How badly would it burn though? Be a bit more specific and more detail.

Anything else?
Equipment? Remember your character can't have have it unless its in his equipment list. That means you can't randomly pull out a knife on someone that isn't listed.

Where the hell is all your punctuation and capitalization and spellcheck? - tries to suffocate my angry grammar Nazi with a pillow- ^_^;

Uhm. Also. I would love you FOREVER if you spoilered your images. Its not required but it makes my read through THAT much nicer to do when I have go over this again. So you don't have too, but it would make it easier on me to re-evaluate this rpc when you make the changes.







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PostPosted: Fri Apr 11, 2014 7:25 am


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Set told me last night on skype that Takashi has made the required changes.
PostPosted: Wed Apr 30, 2014 10:43 pm


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okay all of this is MUCH MUCH better. I'm just reminding you for your final attack in your bankai: remember to be careful bout god mod situations and auto hits. People still have a chance to dodge or block it .

Thank you. I now approve this RPC.







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