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Tasogare Genjitsu

PostPosted: Fri Feb 17, 2006 2:29 am


Dreamers


To close these eyes an fall to sleep
So it seems to me
That nothing is as it seems to be
So what is Fake
And what is Real
Show me this world
Show me these emotions
The way they seem to torment me
So break the glass
Break free of this bloody past
And show me everything which you seem to be
Everything that’s Real
Everything that’s Fake
Show me a world where things are meant to be
Show me love
Show me pain
Just don’t break my heart like you did that day
So who are you
An who am I
When this is nothing more than just a dream
Your standing there
But I know its all a lie
So why do I still cry
When I see your eyes
And that wonderful smile
 
PostPosted: Fri Feb 17, 2006 2:40 am


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PostPosted: Sun Feb 19, 2006 3:50 am


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PostPosted: Tue Feb 21, 2006 12:39 am


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Tasogare Genjitsu


Kohako_Shadow
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PostPosted: Fri Mar 03, 2006 6:40 am


Since no one has posted here uet, besides you that is, I'd post one.
Reading your poems was an adventure. Your words swept me away into my memories.
I love the imagery in each and everyone of them.
PostPosted: Fri Mar 03, 2006 10:14 am


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Tasogare Genjitsu

PostPosted: Mon Nov 20, 2006 10:50 pm


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Haha I haven't posted in a long time >.>; Any who new poem posted.
PostPosted: Thu Dec 14, 2006 8:52 pm


I just wanted to say I love your poems... more particularly your topics and imagery. Amazing.

Here are two of mine... Sorry that they're kind of depressing:

Hope and Desolation
Hope and Desolation
snuggled by burning
trash, beneath a starry night.
In the brewed mornings of
hysteria, a door
peeped open. She
gazed upon the quivering
orphans of benumbed society.
Moved, she
embraced them in, and a
heart was born. Her
flat that once glowed
dim, shone with lustrous
fervor; and the
trash that burned for
Hope and Desolation,
burned away into
numbing nights. The
world around a
blur of flights.

Scheme of Life
The scheme of Life
never knew darkness,
true darkness, until the
Vulgar left it
gathering dust in a
pawn shop down
Dreary Lane. The Muffin Man
sobbed hearing such
woe; and the
gingerbread men once
created in ardor
died in existence,
died in essence. Fading,
cracking, peeling -
never again to remain; forfeit,
gone the days of
strokes and molds.
Life: further fading
black Void.

kemikally_unbalansed


kemikally_unbalansed

PostPosted: Wed Dec 20, 2006 10:17 pm


Quote:
Winter Dream


Silent snow
Soft and sweet
Falls and falls upon the street
To drape this world in angel�s wings
Slowly stepping to the beat

So old so new
Just locked within your head for eternity
Each breath so cold
You begin to freeze
Lungs constricting
Heart slowly beating
Silent arms
Warm and gentle
Slip closer
Pulling you tightly once more
Though shadows reflection
Shows you nothing but your self
Though the warmth lets you know someones there
As the soft breeze is nipping at you
You just want to know
Who keeping you warm


I love the bolded part. The rest is good, but could use some work. You definitely have great talent. You just need to tweak it some.
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