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Posted: Fri Nov 19, 2010 8:36 am
xXSilenced EchoesXx No, Alpha asked me to write this for him.
The only reason they all sound similar is because I completely understand the position these people were in, and I can relate, which makes it easier to write these poems. I can't write poems about how happy I am. It just doesn't work that way for me. As it works for me. Well nice job nonetheless.
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Posted: Fri Dec 31, 2010 6:43 am
Well, after reading Icee's poem I feel encouraged to write my own again.
Tears of Joy He's finally the one Who got me out of the rut The one who I know can love me And protect me Everytime I'm with him He makes me smile And makes me feel like I have another chance And yet Something just feels so wrong...
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Posted: Tue Jan 04, 2011 1:19 pm
Broken Hope Covered in tears Soaked to the core I don’t get how You don’t see my blood On the floor
I feel like you’ve Torn be in half And all that blood Is dripping Down my calf
I hate you so much I feel like such a dunce I want you dead But the truth is, I loved you once.
Every time I see you You always look away Why haven’t you noticed That you’re hurting me Every day?
All that blood is dripping Slowly, slowly It hurts so much Knowing you never did Care about me
I hate you so much I feel like such a dunce I want you dead But the truth is, I loved you once.
You used to be my one Love, so true Why has all that love Disappeared From you?
What hurts the most Is that you never told anyone Not even I You just decided to disappear And take out all the fun
I hate you so much I feel like such a dunce I want you dead But the truth is, I loved you once.
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Posted: Tue Jan 04, 2011 1:33 pm
I like your poems they're nice.
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Posted: Tue Jan 04, 2011 1:37 pm
Thanks. I was actually expecting a reaction like, "OMG you're so emo!" Oh well. smile
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