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Tags: Humans, Shinigamis/Soul Reapers, Hollows, Quincys, Bounts,Vizards,Arrancars 

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PostPosted: Tue Jul 06, 2010 12:37 pm


(I have also noticed the extreme lack of participation the longer this chapter went on. This might just be a hint that we need not drag out scenes until they get boring. Also having a multitude of characters in one chapter is extremely confusing seeing as everyone is playing at least two characters and we have I believe six or seven who were role playing in this chapter. I understand having a myriad of characters is a necessity in a Bleach RP but with no way to differentiate and have them stand out is confusing to some. Font colors work somewhat but not when there are only so many colors before someone is using the same one for their character. Might I suggest uniforming the way we post such as adding a 100x100 picture centered above our posts or centering their names above their respected posts? Nothing is worse than having a huge in depth RP and then having everyone confused. I for one have no idea who is playing who and what characters are on what side. Far too much going on if you ask me.)

~Former Squad Zero Member Enkidu Ryuukhan~


A cloaked figure appeared next to him laying a hand on his shoulder. His first instinct was to flip around and slash stab and claw at whoever it was but the aura surrounding this robbed man felt far too frightening even to him. As if the touch somehow administered something Enkidu slowly began to slump in his posture and soon collapsed.

The cloaked man seemed to have put the psychotic Shinigami under a spell for easier transportation as he opened a garganta. A couple small hallow looking creatures came wobbling out attaching binds to Enkidu and picked him up clumsily retreating with him into the doorway. And with that Enkidu left the battlefield.


~Vice-Captain Rina Rubihane~


She knew this man was going to kill her if he wasn't allowed to fight her captain and she could do nothing more to stall him so that battle would not happen, that was until she saw Enkidu rounded up like an animal and taken away from the battle watching as the cloaked men appeared everywhere where there were Akira's followers. A sense of relief came over her but was soon washed over with a wave of failure. Her entire mission was to come here and find Enkidu and now he had been taken away. She felt more fear facing her captain than she did this extremely powerful and frightening foe in front of her.
PostPosted: Tue Jul 06, 2010 4:56 pm


Kishin growled as he stopped his attack in the air. "Guess I have to go. Well... I will just hold onto your wounds for now. I don't want some excuse about how you lose next time we meet from an attack of mine." With that Kishin disappeared, heading back in Akira's fortress.

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PostPosted: Tue Jul 06, 2010 5:36 pm


Kira saw the cloaked men and smiled a bit. "Well Rina, It seems as if Akira is a little upset with me at the moment." Hee laughed a bit and sheathed his Zanpakuto. "Maybe we will meet again. Just bring your captain next time. You'll be a lot happier." He smiled and left with the cloaked men.

Keechi saw Kishin leave with the men. All he could sat was "I hate that kid..."

Shietsu shuppo'd back to the fortress with after mumbling, "Flora..."
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