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 Posted: Fri May 15, 2009 3:54 pm
Wow everyone here has amazing talents! Im an okay artist, but i can only draw certain things at certain times lmao. And im a s**t photographer. But my mom says im a pretty good writer. Tell me what you think.
Deep down,
inside my skin
You say im a clown,
but i know the truth within.
You say im a sinner,
just cuz your not a winner,
and you say im a fool.
but you know the rule,
don't start none,
wont be none.
but you cant seem to grasp that,
your such a tool.
and a brat,
not to mention a dirty lieing rat.
You wanna ******** with me?
Okay, come on ******** play!
Now, you can feel it smash,
Deep Down,
as you see me slash,
you drown
in a pool of your own blood.
as i drag you though the mud.
You say im violent
and? Who gives a ******** cuz i choose not to be silent,
man you can go suck,
a mutha ******** D**K
dont think your slick,
you nasty little p***k.
Talkin s**t,
behind my back,
but you know what?
im going to pause my attack.
until your so paranoid, that your afraid
i'll come up and smack,
Your face until it bleeds.
damn i feel so played,
betrayed,
i hold the blade,
in my mind against your neck.
I feel it fade,
as i try to keep my sanity in check.
as those voices invade,
my mind once again.
Whispering things i should do to you.
your skin turns pale as i drain,
the blood from your body.
making up lies,
as all your tries,
to get me locked up,
they wont suceed,
I got this going like clockwork.
your skin's paler than pearls.
haha now your all dead
...You fake a** girls...
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Posted: Sat Jun 06, 2009 6:53 pm
I took a picture of the "See You On The Other Side" Album and messed around with it in GIMP KoRn Pop;;  i'll post more photography later or just go to my deviantart. Sharpie : D
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+[Unholy_Rage]+ Vice Captain
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Posted: Mon Jun 15, 2009 4:26 am
Teehee! I added you on DA ^_^. Great to see another fellow photographer/Korn fan on there! Anyone else got DeviantArt? Join us!
Anyway...
--KoRn-Iz-Jashin--, cool poem. Intense, in-your-face and oozes an anger that is both honest and confronting. How long have you been writing for?
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Posted: Wed Jun 17, 2009 6:16 pm
Thank you very much! Um, I've been writing since i was 12, so a while now. Its just the only way to get my anger out(aside from blasting KoRn and other bands in my ears lmao) My mother writes a lot of poetry so she said i should give it a try because we both have a VERY short temper and it doesnt take much to make us snap. So this is a way I can release a lot of tension without getting in trouble hahaha.
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+[Unholy_Rage]+ Vice Captain
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Posted: Fri Jun 19, 2009 7:56 am
I agree, writing poetry is a great way to vent out inner frustrations 3nodding . Keep at it!
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Posted: Fri Jun 19, 2009 5:57 pm
Thank you very much~ I've got a new one for you guys ^^ you know what?!
Im tired of all this bullshit,
You dirty little slut,
Im gonna ******** hit, something.
being your dirty face,
wait, calm down, lets do this at a slow pace.
I dont give a ******** what you say,
Imma walk around burping, slurping, scratchin my a**,
Imma do it every day,
on my way to class.
Imma spit when I talk,
You'll ******** anything that walks.
Imma burn yo face with an eraser,
then staple your boyfriends nuts to a peice of paper!
you wanna ******** with me?
After you do, you'll never be,
the same ever again,
now when they say your name they'll be knockin on wood.
My paitence is growing thin.
This rage has built up within.
And it's about to get release all over your ******** face.
Dont try to run,
you'll never find a place,
to hide,
I love the chase, it's all so very fun.
You really think I care?
then i hope you like dissapointment,
they'res no way for you to prepare,
for the despair your about to receive.
These thoughts in my head I have conceived.
Ah this rush it's better than doing speed.
Ha just kidding, im not a druggie,
like yo broke down a**, lookin like an overweight telly ******** you b***h, suck my d**k,
you and everyone in yo little clique.
And your boyfriends small little p***k.
Im sure your shocked by how
...I just dont give a s**t...
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Posted: Sat Jun 20, 2009 6:37 pm
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Posted: Sat Jun 20, 2009 9:09 pm
Thank you very much!
Holy s**t!
I LOVE your art!
It's very unique!
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Posted: Sat Jun 20, 2009 11:10 pm
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Posted: Mon Jun 22, 2009 11:39 pm
Distorted_Image Since poetry/prose is considered an art form, I'll put in my most recent poem...it's between me and my boyfriend:
Transition
The slight of a kiss,
beaming a stroking failure to contact the last feeling
of your precious lips upon my altar.
You are so hard to resist as I am the temptation.
Chests pressed together, hands locked in firm fists
and the taste of your skin makes my eyes water
with encasing tears as they drip down your body.
This is all I have left.
Would I be so lucky to have you inside,
when I cannot properly shut my own doors
and you cannot open yours when I choose to knock.
What would that be like to just give up?
But I can never go back, and neither can you.
This is all we have left, until Transition makes the more, lessens the few. Really awesome Distorted Image!! I love that, and since we can post poetry. . . I'll post my most recent too. Set Me Free Let me at it Set me loose Cut the strings So my wings can break free. Because its building, A pressure rising If it explodes while I'm confined You're all going down with me. What I want is simple, I can tell you that. My heart to be set racing And my skin set afire. Go ahead and give me your best shot Try to set my blood pumping And make me lose control. My mind is one long track and I want it set on you. I'll promise on a head - yours to be exact That if you set me loose I'll give you a whirl. Just give me the challenge And cut the strings. If you can light the fire I can stoke the flames, Then our wings can break free And the pressure will build to its final peak. So come on and pick up the torch. Give me your best shot While I make good on this promise. All you have to do is set me free.
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Posted: Mon Jun 22, 2009 11:47 pm
Oh hey, I completely forgot about my deviantart!!
Alright here's the link to my page ->http://eklypseperegrin.deviantart.com/
I have poetry, pottery, and art on there. So check it out! One thing though, photography quality not that great, since I borrowed some one else's camera. xd
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Posted: Tue Jun 23, 2009 6:26 am
Eklypse_Peregrin Oh hey, I completely forgot about my deviantart!! Alright here's the link to my page ->http://eklypseperegrin.deviantart.com/ I have poetry, pottery, and art on there. So check it out! One thing though, photography quality not that great, since I borrowed some one else's camera. xd *Follows you* You guys are inspiring me to post more poetry up on DA xD.
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+[Unholy_Rage]+ Vice Captain
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