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 Posted: Mon Jul 24, 2006 11:52 am
Souyu no Phoenix Lemme submit my new application for review before I actually post it. Anybody who wants to can comment on it.
Just to let you know, what I had in mind was a sort of "Zatoichi with guns" kind of character. If you don't know who Zatoichi is, check wikipedia.
Don't worry, she isn't Daredevil by any stretch of the imagination. The titanium rod that's listed as her melee weapon is actually a walking stick that she relies on rather heavily.
[ Application ]
Also, you sure you're going to be able to handle three characters?
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Posted: Mon Jul 24, 2006 12:08 pm
Like I mentioned, I'm planning on starting to phase one of my older characters out (right now I'm leaning toward Ehren) of active RPing.
As to waiting, I don't mind.
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Posted: Mon Jul 24, 2006 4:52 pm
I'm sorry I haven't been on so long!! But I need to make note that I'm going to be out of town for the next few weeks... I'll see everyone when I get back!
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Posted: Mon Jul 24, 2006 7:40 pm
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Posted: Mon Jul 24, 2006 9:48 pm
Well, our new app is up cool
Wanna tell us how we did? xd
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Posted: Mon Jul 24, 2006 10:19 pm
Everything looked pretty good. (Maybe a little more information on training? Eh.) You're supposed to put it in the Database thread, though.
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Posted: Tue Jul 25, 2006 12:27 am
I have a suggestion for updating the Training Stats profile to match the new application. I more or less crafted this to match the kind of information in the old training stats profile with the format of the new application, and got rid of a couple of (what seemed to me) redundant fields (like eye and hair color--a training stats page wouldn't seem to need that information), and adding/reorganizing liberally. The "TRAINING" field is supposed to simply be one's hand-to-hand combat style(s), and isn't meant to contain the same degree of information as the "TRAINING" field in the application, but I couldn't think of anything better to call it that fit within the 9 character limit. The "NOTEWORTHY" field is meant to contain any information that might affect how the subject would perform in combat (physical advantages/disadvantages, etc.).
Let's see... everything else should be fairly self-explanatory. If you want to reorganize some things, or rename some of the fields, then by all means be my guest. I've been doing this for two hours now, and my brain's not in the greatest condition due to fatigue, so the names/organization system I came up with may not be the most suitable. However, I hope this should provide an acceptable basic framework for a new training profile that is both more organized, more accessible, and more relevant.
As an example, I have crafted my newest character's full training profile in this format. I hope that it and the profile are satisfactory.
And yes, I did steal the names of Cowboy Bebop Sessions for her limit breaks, though it's more tribute than theft. A number of the guns that my characters use are also used in CB, though they're all available in the real world, as well.
EDIT: I don't know why the ******** I'm typing so formally. I think it's because I'm tired, but I'm too tired to be sure. @_@
EDIT AGAIN: I forgot to include a weight field. That's what I get for staying up until 3:30 working on something like this. ><
&COMMAND&__personnel combat report<
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!CLASSIFIED!
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PASSWORD: ***
&COMMAND&__"MP" --> Samael, Sophia]
____________________________________________
[BEGIN CODE --- 9718703]
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[COMBAT STATISTICS]
Sophia "Sophie" Samael ...
AGE: 21 ...
SEX: Female ...
HEIGHT: 5'2" | 158cm ...
WEIGHT: 98lbs | 44kg ...
BUILD: Light ...
DEXTERITY: Ambidextrous ...
TRAINING: [Combat]: Southern School Shaolinquan ...
NOTEWRTHY: [Disability]: Blind ...
[EQUIPMENT]
WPN>>RNGD: Military Police Issue HK MP-5N Submachine Gun ...
WPN>>RNGD: Military Police Issue KG-9 Assault Pistol ...
WPN>>RNGD: Korth Combat Revolver, .357 Magnum [PRIMARY] ...
WPN>>RNGD: Korth Combat Revolver, .357 Magnum [PRIMARY] ...
WPN>>MLEE: Titanium Light Rod ...
BODY ARMR: Save the Queen: A woman's bracer said to be able to stop any sword. Nullifies [Sadness] ...
ACCESSORY: Burnt Feather: A small, ornate pendant of obsidian in the shape of a feather. The image of an open book is carved into one side. Nullifies [Holy] attacks and raises Spirit by 75 ...
[LINKING SYSTEM]
WEAPON: HK MP-5N ...
LINK: O=O (Poison=Elemental) ...
GROWTH: Normal ...
WEAPON: KG-9 ...
LINK: No slots ...
GROWTH: Normal ...
WEAPON: Korth Combat Revolver ...
LINK: O (Deathblow) ...
GROWTH: x2 ...
WEAPON: Korth Combat Revolver ...
LINK: O (Throw) ...
GROWTH: x2 ...
WEAPON: Titanium Light Rod ...
LINK: O (Steal) ...
GROWTH: Normal ...
ARMOR: Save the Queen ...
LINK: O O=O (Gravity, Destruct=Final Attack) ...
GROWTH: Normal ...
[MATERIA]
MAGIC: [Poison]: Level Two; [Destruct]: Level Two; [Gravity]: Level One ...
COMMAND: [Throw]: Master; [Deathblow]: Master; [Steal]: Level Two ...
SUPPORT: [Final Attack]: Level Four; [Elemental]: Level Three ...
[COMMAND]
Attack
Magic
Deathblow
Item
Mug
Throw/Coin
[MAGIC]
Bio
Bio2
Demi
DeBarrier
DeSpell
[STATS]
#KILLS: None ...
#OTGA: None ...
[LIMIT BREAKS]
Level 1A: Waltz for Venus. Sophie begins with a slow, measured pattern of footwork, firing three shots from each of her two Korth revolvers as one every three steps, as she weaves a path of destruction through the enemy's ranks. Light damage per attack. Four attacks against [one target per attack]. Non-elemental.
Level 1B: Cowboy Funk. Sophie lights a Molotov cocktail, lobbing it high into the air as she rushes into the thick of the enemy, laying down fire from one of her revolvers while simultaneously beating them senseless with her titanium rod. Once the six-shooter runs out of ammo, she jumps back and lets the explosive finish the job. Small damage per attack. Multiple attacks against [single target per attack], with final blast attack against [all targets per attack]. Non-elemental.
Level 2A: My Funny Valentine. After blowing a kiss toward the enemy, Sophie tosses six coins into the air while drawing one of her Korth revolvers. For each coin that she hits, damage is increased. After firing all six shots, a large, flat slab of earth falls on the heads of the enemies, causing damage. If none of the coins are hit, the attack fails. No-High damage per attack. Single attack against [all targets per attack]. Non-elemental. Neg. Status: Confuse (60%) (except against Female opponents).
Level 2B; INACTIVE: Asteroid Blues. Taking both of her Korth revolvers, Sophie points them at the sky and, pouring energy into the shot, fires two bolts of light into the stratosphere, piercing a passing asteroid, which starts to fall to the earth. As it begins to reach the ground, she starts unloading her revolvers at it, breaking it into multiple pieces which shower the enemy. Medium damage per attack. Multiple attacks against [single target per attack]. Non-elemental.
Level 3A; INACTIVE: Sympathy For the Devil. Sophie draws both of her revolvers, kissing their barrels, and whispering to them in an unknown language. Shadows begin to coalesce around the barrels as she takes aim, and follow each bullet as she unloads her revolvers at the enemy from afar, infusing them with a dark energy which drains a fifth of the targets life. Gravity damage. Twelve attacks against [single target per attack]. Non-elemental. Neg. Status: Blind (100%).
Level 3B; INACTIVE: Speak Like a Child. Sophie holsters her weapons, closes her eyes, and starts to whisper a very sad, lilting song in a strange language. As the song progresses, a ghostly figure appears, and weaves in and out of the thick of the enemy in time to the music, cutting through the bodies of the enemy like a stiff winter gale, doing more and more damage each time as the song reaches a crescendo, and then disappears at the abrupt end of the melody. Light to Medium damage per attack. Multiple attacks against [single target per attack]. Non-elemental. Neg. Status: Small (25%), Zombie (50%), Sadness (100%).
Level 4, ULTIMATE; INACTIVE: Ballad of Fallen Angels. As in the previous limit, Sophie holsters her weapons and closes her eyes. She speaks but a single word in the strange, indecipherable language, and three pairs of wings begin to appear upon her back, one after another, lifting her higher into the air each time. After all three appear, they begin to molt, countless feathers falling from the wings until they dissolve entirely, and nothing but the falling feathers are left. Sophie's body descends to the ground simultaneously. As each feather hits the ground, it grows black and hardens, each turning into a rifle which, upon Sophie's return to Earth, floats back into the air. The rifles surround the enemy, and as Sophie draws her Korth revolvers and begins to fire, the rifles begin to unload upon the enemy. Light damage per attack. Countless attacks against [single target per attack]. Non-elemental.
--END Report--
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Posted: Tue Jul 25, 2006 5:01 pm
ninja Eh heh..... I haven't been here for awhile..... ninja
*waves meekly* Hi everyone!^^;;
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Posted: Tue Jul 25, 2006 8:56 pm
Holy crap. What's with all these old members spontaneously resurrecting?
IT'S CREEPY.
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Posted: Tue Jul 25, 2006 10:41 pm
xD What, you don't want us back?
BTW: I'll post the application in the Database first. Is it okay? sweatdrop If it's not acceptable, somebody tell me. ^^ App o' dh00m.
[It's not here because it's too fking long. .__.;; Six and a half pages in Microsoft Word. BTW, kindly ignore all n00bish canon related to my character before I temporarily disappeared. Natsumi -is- still on the stairs though.]
Oh, and apologies. I think I've just raped canon.
edit. Nice Training Profile, Souyu. smile
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Posted: Wed Jul 26, 2006 1:40 am
Souyu no Phoenix Holy crap. What's with all these old members spontaneously resurrecting?
IT'S CREEPY.
I'm a necromancer, didn't you know?
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Posted: Wed Jul 26, 2006 1:53 am
eek WTF just happened to my app. -Goes to edit.-
edit. Strange though. Evillusionized's application has nine Word pages. Wydda's got ten or something. Wonder why mine died.
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Posted: Wed Jul 26, 2006 2:02 am
[Tsumi-to-Batsu.] eek WTF just happened to my app. -Goes to edit.-
edit. Strange though. Evillusionized's application has nine Word pages. Wydda's got ten or something. Wonder why mine died.
Yeah, that would be me... Haa... Ugh... I don't know what happened completely, I do know that I wasn't going deleting anything... I was going to add a few ellipsises that you missed and change the "v" to "Nu"... Anyhow, I am truly sorry. I swear this perfectionism thing of mine is going to get me killed some day. sweatdrop
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Posted: Wed Jul 26, 2006 2:04 am
Kazuo Ashura [Tsumi-to-Batsu.] eek WTF just happened to my app. -Goes to edit.-
edit. Strange though. Evillusionized's application has nine Word pages. Wydda's got ten or something. Wonder why mine died.
Yeah, that would be me... Haa... Ugh... I don't know what happened completely, I do know that I wasn't going deleting anything... I was going to add a few ellipsises that you missed and change the "v" to "Nu"... Anyhow, I am truly sorry. I swear this perfectionism thing of mine is going to get me killed some day. sweatdrop o.o xD Nawe, it's okay. Perfectionism's good. Um, maybe I should edit it in Word. What else do you want changed?
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