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I've only read one story. Post post post!!!


Girly girl girl. Ideazzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I told you about GIM >(

@o@ Oh my gosh, giving me images of a friend, that is not cool.

No I didn't.

You should do something like this.....





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It'd been hours since she last encountered that vile woman. She wasn't sure what to do next but she couldn't stay where she was. She looked down at the locks on her arms. She wasn't sure how to get them off.
Just then she remembered the bobby pin in her hair. She shook her head until it fell into her hand. She wasn't sure how to do it herself, but she'd seen others do it before so she was willing to try.
She stuck the bobby pin in the key hole, stretched it until it met both ends of the lock, and attempted to Jimmy the lock. She fiddled with the pin until, after tense minutes of waiting, she heard a click, and the locks opened, then fell to the ground. She got up and shook her hands and legs.
Suddenly she heard footsteps from outside the door and immediately sat down again, holding the chain in her hands.
The woman and two other guards. carrying M4s walked in.
"You two won't be necessary." said the woman as she waved away the guards. They left the room immediately, obviously showing the woman had a lot of command. "It's almost time for your purification." the woman said menacingly. She looked around a little, until her eyes fell upon the locks on the floor. "What the---", she looked up to find a chain flying in her face.
The girl walked over the woman and took her M9 pistol and two extra clips. She stuffed them in her pockets. She'd learned how to shoot a gun, but she'd never shot anything living before, let alone killed them. She looked at the door to see a little crack where she could see two sets of feet on the other side.
She pulled out the pistol and cracked the door a little, then swung her foot heavily making it fly open.



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How did I miss that? gonk

Yup, yup, military writer xD
My character is supposed to be a blithering idiot and a wimp. She's twelve I think.

Well she could be an idiot but it sounds likes some kind of oppressor is taking over and she lives in some kind of rebellion or group that is hiding on the outskirts of the world. Also she should have paid attention to other people around her and should use skills she's picked up off others around her and use them to escape some giant complex and uncover some kind of immense secret leading to an awesome sequel.

Plus you should do the steps to story lining before you start writing, mainly starting on character development. That means, pick her name, her pros (skills), cons (fears, etc.) and how she re-acts to certain situations like, if she was in danger, around strangers, with friends, finding something important, or seeing someone they love getting killed or found dead or something like that. Also make the other characters, like the woman and where she may re-show up later, or if she plays a key role in the book, also come up with other important characters like her mom and dad, and somewhere in the book reference them if they don't actually appear so if you do a sequel you can make them appear. Also come up with maybe someone to help her like a guard with a conscience.
Then usually figure out the setting like where they are, if it is post-apocalyptic, or in some-kind of doom-filled oppressed world or an under-ground shelter, etc.
Then do some plot creation, like where it start, which you have down already, where it's going to go, and where its going to end off, then start writing by filling in from the beginning to the middle, then finish off to the end. Also if you figure out the end before you really start, you can foreshadow future events that can take place, or towards some big secret.
A lot of very successful authors use these steps.

Can't wait to read your story either. I can try to help, I guess. Physical discription... Hm... *thinks hard*