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Posted: Sun Sep 03, 2006 7:17 pm
Jared Bartholomew Vehit
Height: 7'1
Weight: 247
Hair color: Brown, medium-long, pony-tailed hair
Eye color: Gold
Age: ???
Weapon: Kaiser Knuckle (5-hit combo, special attacks include a straight punch and an uppercut.)
Sub weapons: Cross, Holy Book, Bibuti, (sacred ashes) and his favorite, Sacred Fist (can perform the item crashes with them. the Sacred Fist crash is the Fist combined with the Summon book making Asura)
Magic: White Magic. (to take care of the cleric position) spells include Heal (+100), Heal Plus (+250), Heal All, Serum (cures poison), Uncurse, Hammer Fist (cures petrification), Remedy (heals any bad status effect except Dead), Life (revives dead members, duh) and Magic Seal (seals souls so that the vassel cannot be resurrected, used after every boss fight with certain exceptions)
Strength and Weakness: he, basically, is NOT your average healer. he's more of a bullet sponge, taking hits for the team while healing them with his magic as they stay behind recuperating. he's still able to be as evasive as others, putting up a good fight dodging enemies attacks and breaking them with a straight punch to the chest, being able to take down most lesser enemies in only a few blows, but not while healing. that and his only other problem is he isn't able to defend as well against magical enemies as against enemies with melee attacking.
Bio: A wandering, muscular-built monk of the modern age, wearing a trenchcoat, fadora, white shirt, black pants, and right-mechanical arm. He travels to the land where the dark lord's castle rose again on the request of his friend, a fellow priest of the newly started Hibuka Temple, to make sure that nothing could stand in the way of their teachings, but Jared seems to have his own intentions on going which are unknown to everyone but him and one significant other who is said to dwell in the newly risen castle...
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Posted: Mon Sep 04, 2006 10:02 am
There are several things I noticed which need to be taken care of. You have a lot of subweapons. Then theres a problem with spells. First of all, we are not using numbers; everything is being roleplayed rather than go on a stats system. Certain things won't work the same way they do in the game.
Then there is this thing about combining a fighter with magic user. You must decide whether you are stronger with physical combat, or with magic usage. If you decide to balance both, they both will be average and hardly powerful.
I also gotta ask. Why does he have a mechanical arm. And I don't think such thing is viable in the era the story takes place in.
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Posted: Mon Sep 04, 2006 10:34 am
1. then i'll just have the Sacred Fist (if i'm the monk) or the Cross (if i'm a priest) 2. ah i see. i didn't know if you were using stats or not cause most people go back and forth so i guessed. 3. if you still don't have a healer then i'll just be a fistfighter with simple lower-grade healing spells. if not then i'll be a priest who uses "the staff" that's been passed down to Sypha and Yoko. 4. (if i'm still the monk) it's not really mechanical that i meant, i meant that he has a mechanical gauntlet on his arm that's hard to remove without removing the whole arm. more importantly, the others can have guns in this age in the rp but i can't have a different arm?
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Posted: Mon Sep 04, 2006 2:27 pm
I was thinking more on the lines of Full Metal Alchemist or Scryed. A gauntlet that you cannot remove for some reason is more feasible. If this is the case, you should explain more about this gauntlet and why is it stuck to your arm.
In the case of a priest, we have minor healing, but not at a high level. We do have a priest, though; but he is missing in action. However, you would need to explain how and why you obtained that particular staff.
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Posted: Tue Sep 05, 2006 4:45 am
that's the point. the main reason my character goes there has to do with the gauntlet, and in the story (if you'll allow it), more about what it can do and why it's on me and about his past would be explained...though Scryed and FMA wasn't exactly what i was going for to a certain extent. so lesee...with those things in mind and i don't have to worry about being a healer anymore, here's my new profile! (new?!) by the way, if you like, i can send you a pm telling about the gauntlet and my characters past ahead of time.
Jared Bartholomew Vehit
Height: 7'1
Weight: 247
Hair color: Brown, medium-long, pony-tailed hair
Eye color: Gold
Age: ???
Weapon: Gauntlet of J (not to be confused with "that" J [which i still don't know who exactly that is! AND DON'T SAY JULIUS!!!] special attack is a five hit combo, three attacks being jabs with the left arm, a straight punch with the right, and an uppercut with the left again.)
Sub weapons: Cross and Sacred Fist (Sacred Fist more prefered) (also can perform the item crashes with them. the Sacred Fist crash is the Fist combined with the Summon book making Asura)
Magic: (more of being skills actually, the skills are used with the gauntlet, but they still use MP.) -Mach Punch- repeatitly punches with the right arm at great speed (looks like Alucard's special with certain punch weapons in SOTN) -Sword of Pride- a wave of energy is created and thrown at the enemies (meant to be a projectial weapon, so it does less damage than his regular attacks if the target or targets are far away) -?????- ????? (yet to be discovered) -?????- ????? (yet to be discovered)
Strength and Weakness: basically, he falls under the fighting class but boasts in being strong and evasive instead of being strong and defensive. without having so much weight as armored warriors, he puts up quite a fight, dodging enemies attacks and then breaking them with a straight punch to the chest or wherever their weakspot, being able to take down most lesser enemies in only a few blows. his only real problem is he isn't able to defend as well against magical enemies as against enemies with melee attacking.
Bio: A wandering monk of the modern age, wearing a trenchcoat, fadora, white shirt, black pants, and a strange unremovable gauntlet on his right arm, which was rumored to be made from dark arts. He travels to the land where the dark lord's castle rose again on the request of his friend, a priest of the newly started Hibuka Temple, to make sure that nothing could stand in the way of their teachings, but Jared seems to have his own intentions on going, which are unknown to everyone but him and one significant other who is said to dwell in the newly risen castle...
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Posted: Tue Sep 05, 2006 3:53 pm
If you feel the rest of the details about your character should be private, you can send them through pm. I also wish to know about this significant other dwelling inside the castle, since the castle is currently sealed from any outsider entry.
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Posted: Tue Sep 05, 2006 6:34 pm
Lair Argyra If you feel the rest of the details about your character should be private, you can send them through pm. I also wish to know about this significant other dwelling inside the castle, since the castle is currently sealed from any outsider entry. other info i shall give you through the pm's (if you don't mind, it might take awhile to get it together cause i haven't actually typed it yet sweatdrop
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Posted: Tue Sep 05, 2006 7:41 pm
BTW, I wasn't going to say Julius. I was gonna say Gauntlet of Jinzouki.
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Posted: Wed Sep 06, 2006 12:03 am
Lair Argyra BTW, I wasn't going to say Julius. I was gonna say Gauntlet of Jinzouki. Jinzouki? who's that?
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Posted: Wed Sep 06, 2006 12:07 am
J-PiPe Lair Argyra BTW, I wasn't going to say Julius. I was gonna say Gauntlet of Jinzouki. Jinzouki? who's that? one of the members in the guild?
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Posted: Wed Sep 06, 2006 5:22 pm
Its actually me, the founder/leader of the guild....me ninja
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Posted: Wed Sep 06, 2006 8:11 pm
Jinzouki Its actually me, the founder/leader of the guild....me ninja oh...hi! but with the J i meant short for Jared, you know?
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Posted: Thu Sep 07, 2006 11:17 am
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Posted: Thu Sep 07, 2006 2:04 pm
Hmm, sounds interesting... I wonder if we're gonna see this character in the RP. My character can heal but, he's not very adept with his spell (beacuse of an accident in his youth) so he may induce damage rather than healing.
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Posted: Thu Sep 07, 2006 4:07 pm
That's something you didnt tell me about your character, Hypno.
Anyway, your character has been approved. You may start at the restaurant where the rest of the characters are right now.
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