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PostPosted: Tue Nov 17, 2009 2:46 pm


"So far his technique is to try and confuse sensei with his flashy flips and fast footwork. But sensei is able to focus on his moves and at the last possible moment, she dodges it and attacks back when Rashir leasts expect it. Wow Kenji, are all you guys like that?" Akuma said with a big smile on his face, he was happy to fight first. He also wants to be just like his sensei.
PostPosted: Tue Nov 17, 2009 2:49 pm


Haruko was impressed that Rashir reacted as quick as he did even after taking her elbow hit. 'Not bad.' Haruko felt herself get thrown across the dojo and smile, 'Guess it's time to stop playing around.' Once she was close enough to the wall, Haruko use it as a stopper. Her feet connected with the wall and she pushed off the wall back onto the ground.

"Not bad Rashir-san, but try to remember that not all of your enemies will give you so much excess time that you can use to discard items. Now then, enought with games, how about you come at me with everything you got. No restrictions. Feel free to use ninjutsu, kinjutsu, or whatever else you perfer." Haruko then walked back to the middle of the dojo and waited for Rashir to make the first move.

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PostPosted: Tue Nov 17, 2009 2:53 pm


"We all have our advantages and disadvantages in a fight, but in general, special jutsus and bloodline traits aside, anyone who has been training longer or has exposed themselves to more aggressive training will be better in a fight then the other person. The only difference between you and your Sensei's is experience and practice. After enough practice, you'll see things like we do, but keep in mind, we still don't see everything. Death-sensei could waste us in a second with the skills he has obtained, but that is the way of things in a ninja's world. There is always someone else stronger then you, it's simply a matter of how much work you put into your own abilities which determines how you grow. There are of course such things as natural talent and combat geniuses, but in general, especially with taijutsu, experience and practice dictates your ability."

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((My apologizes, but I can't really continue to comment at the moment, I have some work I need to finish. When I get back, I can comment, but I need to focus on my work right now. See you all later!))
PostPosted: Tue Nov 17, 2009 4:57 pm


White Water Lilly
Haruko was impressed that Rashir reacted as quick as he did even after taking her elbow hit. 'Not bad.' Haruko felt herself get thrown across the dojo and smile, 'Guess it's time to stop playing around.' Once she was close enough to the wall, Haruko use it as a stopper. Her feet connected with the wall and she pushed off the wall back onto the ground.

"Not bad Rashir-san, but try to remember that not all of your enemies will give you so much excess time that you can use to discard items. Now then, enought with games, how about you come at me with everything you got. No restrictions. Feel free to use ninjutsu, kinjutsu, or whatever else you perfer." Haruko then walked back to the middle of the dojo and waited for Rashir to make the first move.


Rashir felt relevied that he could finaly use ninjutsu, "It's about time, now i can really let loose." He noticed that there was still some water left in the dojo from the previous fight, just enought to do something. He uses a few handsigns and the water everywhere in the dojo starts forming a ball around him. He then yells, "Water style, Water Dragon jutsu!" The water around Rashir forms into a giant dragon above him and flies straight at Haruko. He again puts the smirk back on his face as he watches the dragon flying towards her.

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PostPosted: Tue Nov 17, 2009 6:35 pm


Haruko shakes her head at Rashir's decision to not follow up with his attack but watch as it comes at her. "You know Rashir-san, its best to follow up on your moves so that it doesn't give your opponants an opening..." Haruko swiftly formed the handsigns for the teleportation jutsu and teleported behind Rashir, "to do attacks such as this," Haruko quickly reached for her kusarigama and whipped it horizontally across from her 3 times. Each time sending out a blade of wind at Rashir.
PostPosted: Tue Nov 17, 2009 6:46 pm


Rashir looked back at the wind flying towards him. He quickly turned and did more handsgins and yelled, "Earth style: Mud Wall!" the floor from the dojo flew up to the ceiling and made a giant wall protecting him from the blasts of wind. Once the wind hit the wall, Rashir jumped and kicked the top half of the wall at Haruko and then the bottom half.

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PostPosted: Tue Nov 17, 2009 6:55 pm


Haruko stared as the pieces of earth came flying at her and smile, "Talk about Deja vu, I remember Kyoma-chan doing something similar," Adding chakra to her kusarigama, she surrounded it in a thin layer of chakra causing it to become really sharp. Haruko spun her kusarigama in a circle three times before releasing it at the first earth wall. Thanks to the thin blades of chakra that surrounds her kusarigama, she was able to penatrate throught the wall at ease, smiling, she began to whip her kusarigam around in a cross motion breaking up the wall, once the top part was done she did the same for the bottom. Retracting her kusarigama, Haruko realized she made a slight mistake with her attack. 's**t, I broke it down into too many pieces, I just made it harder to avoid. Should have made them smaller.' Sighing, Haruko waited for a few pieces of the wall to fall and create a cloud of dust before she teleported about 5 feet behind Rashir. "That was a pretty cool attact but you'll have to do better than that if you wish to injure me."
PostPosted: Tue Nov 17, 2009 7:21 pm


"Alright thats how it is," Rashir says to his sensei. He squeezes a fist in his right hand and his white chakra forms around it. He then turns around and takes a step. As he steps he jumps into another flash jump to right behind Haruko and throws his fist at her.

Rashir Fenrick


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PostPosted: Tue Nov 17, 2009 7:26 pm


'He really is quick, I just might not be able to match his speed.' Sensing him appear behind her, Haruko quickly ducks and using her arms as a support, she lifts up her right leg and aims a kick to Rashir's stomach.
PostPosted: Wed Nov 18, 2009 3:19 am


Hiro sitting in the corner had gave up his attempt and mediataition and was instead whatching the battle saying to himself "Well it seems that Rashir's best quality and the thing that wins him battles is speed...while Haruko seems to be able to perseive and react to situations that speed is the problem as well as see almost any opening..." Hiro smiled saying "I am learning more as i whatch now lets see if Rashir will try what i think he will." before getting up and disappearing only to reappear next to Kenji with no smile as his face but instead saying "It seems like they have come a long way wouldnt you say so..." Hiro then thought to himself ""Yet i am unable to show my abilities...No matter they will see when the time comes.""

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PostPosted: Wed Nov 18, 2009 9:06 am


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((So, this technique you just used to disappear and reappear ...is it a 'Flash Jump' as Rashir is using? ))
PostPosted: Wed Nov 18, 2009 12:37 pm


((Actually thats just me using my speed to not be in the way of the battle in truth my drakengan which i explained in my profile is always on because it takes the form of my feral wolf like eyes is what gives me this speed and trying to seal the ability would take to much power and likly consume your chakra trying to hold the ancient power of the Drakengan.))

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PostPosted: Wed Nov 18, 2009 1:02 pm



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((Alright, well first off, your profile says nothing about your 'Drakengan' giving you enhanced speed.

Secondly, your profile needs to be worded more carefully, some of the sentences don't make any sense, though they are still possible to understand if analyzed and read over a few times.

Third, so, basically, you have a Kekkai Genkai on all the time, which makes you 10x more powerful...than what? If it's always on, that's just your base strength. On a similar note, that's too powerful, unless you are unnaturally weak and feeble without your Drakengan, which would make no sense, since apparently its on all the time anyways, and it would kill you to shut it off. You might want to go with a less crazy number then 10 ...maybe 2 , or 3. (Keep in mind, you've got a Jinchuriki too...I would argue you could do without ANY boost the strength and suffer no ill effects to your character's concept of power...whereas adding them together just kind of makes you uber-powerful.)

I'm just gonna go with the notion that your Drakengan is too strong. Your basically saying that you are permanently able to be Some x amount stronger then normal (whatever that is) and can see things in slow motion, or rather, see ahead in time...PERMANENTLY, with no drawback of having it, and an extreme draw back of suppressing it, which you'd never want to do anyways.

I like the IDEA of your Drakengan, it sounds cool, but it needs the details to be hammered out.))
PostPosted: Wed Nov 18, 2009 1:04 pm


(ok hold on)

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Rashir Fenrick

PostPosted: Wed Nov 18, 2009 5:28 pm


White Water Lilly
'He really is quick, I just might not be able to match his speed.' Sensing him appear behind her, Haruko quickly ducks and using her arms as a support, she lifts up her right leg and aims a kick to Rashir's stomach.


As Rashir was hit by her kick, he was turned to water. As soon as he did his flash jump, he formed a water clone to pop up behind Haruko and he went to the side of her. The real Rashir came runnig from the side, doing handsgins while dashing at Haruko. Again, water formed around him and again he yelled, "Water style: Water Dragon Jutsu!" As he got about 6 feet away, the dragon was shot out, with even faster speed because Rashir was running at her.
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