WILDCAT_PRiNCESS
I whan't to be in sky?
name:kri
age:16
element:wind
haer:cerly bland
eyes:blue
She is randum and loves to mess with guys.Her bestfrind is a fifteen year old girl named brittany.She is always getting in trouble and it doesn't bother her.She loves to be around children and she wants to be a preschool teacher when she grows up.She came from a family of six and the reason she loves children is because she helped her mom raise her five other sibilings cause her father walked out on her mother and left her with six kids to raise.She has blue hair and her eyes are baby blue and she loves to wear bandanas in her hair she also loves to hang out at the mall with her girlfriends.
I say this, because it looks like you barely read whatever I wrote last time. If you don't want to read what I wrote, then goodbye. If you are truly interested, you WILL read what I wrote, and you WILL follow the guidelines, and you WILL turn in a much, much, much better bio.
Alright. Your character sounds like a lovely person, and would probably be fine for most other gaia RPs. However, Golem has made it clear that this guild is for those who, well, put a serious effort (or at least try to) into RPing - including the bio.
Before, I was reluctant to agree with this, but it really does look like you spent the lesser part of five minutes preparing your bio. And when you went back to change the bio for the better, it looks like you just copy/pasted it and changed everything starting with her friend. You expanded on her appearance - she wears a bandana - but is that all she wears? Does she wear clothes? You also added a bit more for your history, but please separate it into a different section. It doesn't take that much time to make an excellent bio, but it does require effort.
You also failed to come up with a class, and every member of a clan is required to have a class.
Like I said before, there are
excellent examples of the kind of bios we're looking for in the rules thread. Have you read the rules thread? I've read the rules thread. Please go read it, if you haven't already, and
pay attention to the Bios!Furthermore, if you'd like to apply to the Sky Clan, PM me. I'd like to give you one more chance to get a freaking awesome bio in, and be accepted into the Sky Clan. Some of the other... mods... aren't as forgiving, which is why I'm suggesting PM.
Oh yeah, before I forget - I'd like an RP sample if you PM me with the bio as well. Let me warn you: if I see ANY *walks into bar with a grin* or anything like that (ie: not complete sentances, use of the little star things, whose names I cannot spell) you bio will be outright rejected.
Sorry for being mean, but Please don't waste my time with a bio you spent less than 10 minutes on. It doesn't have to be an epic (though I wouldn't mind that), but it DOES have to be solid. You've got one chance left (for me, at least. I imagine you've already struck out a few others), Princess. I suggest that you use it wisely.
Your forgiven Machina.
sweatdrop blaugh I mean, I don't wanna DISCOURAGE people.... but ^^; Yes, the clan is about fun, as is the RP. But we're still formal and serious, for the most part, through all our fun.
sweatdrop Man, I think I need to learn how to uh... not type as much.
blaugh sweatdrop
