jMoof
May I still request a critique on a drawing I'm working on? ^^;
Sure. Was there anything in particular you were looking for?
So far as I can tell, it mostly looks okay so far, but since it's not exactly finished, I'm not entirely sure if there are some areas you plan on detailing or changing eventually. The eyes seem rather slanted, although maybe that was intentional. Or perhaps it looks that way because his left eye is a little bit high.
As for the shading, I'm under the impression that you wanted the light to be coming from behind him on the right side of the image, so you may want to shade the right side of his coat and the fur darker.