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Exlong L Aligheri Captain
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Posted: Sat Mar 20, 2010 6:43 pm
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Posted: Sat Mar 20, 2010 6:46 pm
"Does it?" A portal appears next to Max and Sara and Max's smile dissapears. "Good bye Exlong." Max and Sara walk into the portal and it closes, but there is a piece of paper lying where they were standing. It says: "You can use the curse mark all you wan't to stop me, but it won't help... I will kill you some day Exlong...and the curse will be gone.Max
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Sounds like Voices Vice Captain
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Exlong L Aligheri Captain
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Posted: Sat Mar 20, 2010 6:50 pm
Exlong laughs as he thinks of a plan.
"Aha!"
He turns into a black blurr and zooms towards Shintokagure.
"If you won't give my eye back, it will cost your dearly!"
Exlong appears inside the village as he has a large black resangan in his palm. This resangan is a compression of hundreds of resangans put together compressed into one whole chakra sphere. Exlong had a smirk on his face as he walks up to the towns' memorial tower. He smashes it down with his resangan as it crumbles into rocks. He then loads up a regular resangan and walks up to the town homes as he gets ready to kill once more on inocent people.
"Im gonna decorate Max's Precious village!"
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Posted: Sat Mar 20, 2010 6:52 pm
2000 clones appeared around Exlong, all wielding a rasengan, and they all said in unity: "Is that so?"
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Sounds like Voices Vice Captain
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Exlong L Aligheri Captain
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Posted: Sat Mar 20, 2010 6:55 pm
"First kill... done"
Exlong smashes his resangan on a towns home as it vorpals around and smashes down. Inside this destroyed home were 3 family members, now dead being crushed by larges metals and stones that broke off the destroyed home. Exlong charges another resangan and turns into a black blurr speeding towards the other part of town.
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Posted: Sat Mar 20, 2010 6:57 pm
Max appears infront of Exlong, smashing a fist into his face. "I've got your eye... right here." Max rips off his eye patch and shows another eternal sharingan, now making both of his eyes eternal. "Arn't you going to take it back?"
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Sounds like Voices Vice Captain
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Exlong L Aligheri Captain
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Posted: Sat Mar 20, 2010 7:00 pm
Exlong jumps onto the ground being surrounded. He doesnt get worryed as he loads up a chakra bomb.
"Uh-Uh-Uh... Hand over the eye and call off the clones or I blow up your precious village to crisp!"
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Posted: Sat Mar 20, 2010 7:06 pm
A portal appears infront of Exlong and Saia steps out. "Here you go!" A shadow appears from Sara's finger and it pulls Exlong into the portal, and it closes. Exlong is inside a large endless void and Max's voice comes out. "I have to kill you Exlong..." Max appears in the void. He unbuttons his jacket to reveal his belly, which doesn't have a curse mark on it. "This is where you die Exlong, and if you somehow revive your self, I'll leave you here."
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Sounds like Voices Vice Captain
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Exlong L Aligheri Captain
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Posted: Sat Mar 20, 2010 7:12 pm
Exlong looks around as he activates his Izanagi sharingan. He sensed that there is no life or organizms within millions of square space. He angrily mumbles:
"Twerp... Always bringing in the annoying little void portal..."
Exlong's Izanagi starts to rip open a space that he is staring at as it starts to rip open and Shintokagure is in vision again.
"The Izanagi is the master of voids, even if you put me in the middle of a void in another demention, I can easily destroy that dimention's structure and end up back where i started."
He jumps of the hole in the void and finishes loading up the forbidden jutsu.
"You had your chance, now your village suffers for those missed chances."
EN GYO NO JUTSU! FORBIDDEN RANGE!!!!!!!!!!!!
A Large blast comes out of Exlong's body as it wipes out everything. Houses, people, towers, everything gets wiped out as Exlong laughs while generating the blast.
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Posted: Sat Mar 20, 2010 7:19 pm
The genjutsu is deactivated. Max is behind Exlong with a katana piercing his shoulder, and shintokagre is no where to be seen, max also has his hand covered around Exlongs eyes, not allowing him to see. "You should have taught me more, than you might have actually been able to avoid my genjutsus." Max pulled out the katana and jabbed it into Exlong again in a different area, close to his heart."I'm sick of you Exlong, and I want to kill you." Pulled out the katna again and it stopped an inch from Exlongs neck. "But I'm not going to...I've never killed anyone who I was close to me... and take that to note... was, close to you..." Max dropped the katana, and pulled his hand away from Exlongs eyes. He turned around, and started walking towards Shintokagure. "If you ever harm my village, I promise you, I will give you the pain and horror of all the people you've ever killed..."
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Sounds like Voices Vice Captain
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Exlong L Aligheri Captain
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Posted: Sat Mar 20, 2010 7:24 pm
Exlong closes his eyes and walks away.
"Oh and by the way, I destroyed the memorial of Shintokagure AND killed 3 people. And no it wasnt genjutsu because my Izanagi would have sensed it by now. And another thing, i still launched the En Gyo No Jutsu which can destroy a village in one blast so even if i was inside genjutsu, the move still went underway and because we were close to Shintokagure, i blew parts of it up."
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