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 Posted: Sat Jul 26, 2008 5:25 pm
Username: the_filling_void
Name:Nahawayun Evii
Age: 17
Gender: female
Race: Human
Rank: Genin
Village:Village hidden in the Snow
Clan: none
Weapons: Iron Geta fans, morning star
Bio:Her memory is a little Fuzzy but remembered waking up in the Snow village hospital and the doctors talking about some kind of accident and was then informed that up to this moment that she lived a pretty normal life grew up in the snow village graduated from their academy then as her parents got to old to take care of her she left the snow village in search of new friends and new experiences and came upon the Gaioh ninja Clan and that is here her a new chapter in her life started she writes to her parents every now and then and lives up in the coldest part of the Gaioh village since it has the chilling feeling of home but in private the really wonders why she left the village it seemed to be of a will not her own her parents cried in an odd way and she felt not that she was sent away from some reason and wasn't sent to the gaioh ninja not for new things but as sort of a death wish or some hidden reason by her village unknown to her and in the depths of her arm heart a freeze has begun to take over her mind sending chills down her spine and through out her body
Personality:fun and peppy at times but other times she is mean and cruel i have bi-polar
Appearance: (Having one drawn) but looks exactly like my AVI
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Posted: Sat Jul 26, 2008 10:16 pm
I'll approve of it, but do you think you could add more detail?
It's a bit short.
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Posted: Mon Jul 28, 2008 5:27 pm
Player: GravityLost Name: Nova Ariko Age: 12 Gender: Female Race: Human Rank: Genin Village: Hidden village of the moon Clan: Seisatsu Weapons: weighted silks, wires, bo shuriken, war fans Bio: Once upon a time… (no just kidding) To prevent any early misconceptions I will say now that the village of the moon is not in fact on the moon but in the high mountains where the air is thin enough that even the faintest of moon or star light can illuminate the entire valley as if in daylight. It is a very peaceful place, lacking the usual warlike attributes of the other ninja clans. Instead the Shinobi of moon focus on dreams and perception of reality as a balance of truth and lies. They value life above all else but are equally respectful of death and the mystery of endless slumber. In this way they are very spiritual and in turn uphold their shamans and wise women above all others in the village.. These women are gifted with the sight, an ability that when mastered can read people and dreams like others read a book… some of the more talented are even thought to be able to predict the future. Still their history fades quickly into obscurity, and the village seems oddly young, founded by a nearly blind shinobi and his followers barely a generation ago… It was in this young village of mystery that nova was raised. She, being the granddaughter of the high shaman spent her days in study and play. Her life was ideal, peaceful and full of laughter as well as secrets. So content was she that it never occurred to her to consider the future as more that topic of lecture. She read, wrote and sparred as the other children, running wild in the mountains by day and coming home to attend he grandmother in the evenings. Her mother and father were caring and attentive but she hadn’t lived with them sense she was discovered to have the sight at age seven and now saw them only for visits when she found time… but really they only lived a block away, so it was easy to make time. In such on enviroment of kindness and tranquility it was no wonder Nova became such a gentle soul and so when she reached her 12th birthday and word of a mysterious new clan within the Gaioh village to the south reached them she was in for a rude awakening. This clan‘s, the Seisatsu’s, bloodline sounded so similar to their own spiritual leaders that questions, first as whispers, and than as open discussion began to arise. It was than decided that Nova, they’re current prodigy would be sent to Gaioh for further training in hopes of uncovering what ever ties the two clans had that had been buried through time and distance. Personality: Nova is friendly if not a bit shy at first and prefers to avoid conflict at all costs. She will stand up for a cause she believes in, doing what she can to avoid injuring others in the process even when under personal attack. Cleverness and agility replace brute force in her fights so as to escape or suppress other without doing harm. Her love of all life goes so far as to make her a strict vegetarian but not so far as to hold other’s habits against them. Appearance:  Nova is small, birdlike in build with mousey grey-brown hair cut jaggedly short and oddly pupiless lavender eyes that seem deeper than normal… making peering into her eyes slightly akin to gazing into an endless well of crystalline liquid. Her skin is soft and ivory hued with a almost constant pink flush to her cheeks that creates a perfect picture of youthful innocence.
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Posted: Mon Jul 28, 2008 5:27 pm
Sakonudon Username: Sakonudon Name: Sakon Character age: about Gender: male Rank: Jinin Village: Peacock Summon: Giant Panda Weapons: everything medical but not limited to also uses body altering jutsus as well as surgically implanted weapons Specialties: Chakra projection medical justus/techniques Jutsu's: Bakuretsu Kage Bunshin no Jutsu(exploding shadow clone technique) Biransei no Jutsu (Poison Gas Technique) Chakra Enjintou (Chakra Scalpel) Chiyute no Jutsu (Healing Hands Technique) Chuusuusei Biribiri (Central Nervous System Electrical Shock) Futagogakure no Jutsu (Hidden Twin Technique) Fuuja Houin (Evil Sealing Method) Harichakra (Chakra Needles) Haridoku (Poison Chakra Needles) Henge no Jutsu (Transformation Technique) Houshou (Crushing Fist) Hoshi Myoho no Jutsu (Star Peacock Technique) Isshi Resshin (One-fingered Earthquake) Jouro no Hoshi (Meteor Shower) Jouro Senbon (Raining Needles) Kanashibari no Jutsu (Body Freeze Technique) Kawarimi no Jutsu (Body Switch Technique) Kyuushuu no Chakra (Chakra Absorption) Myoho no jutsu (Peacock Special Style Technique) Nemuri (Sleep) Nemurihane (Feather Sleep) Gaioh Bunshin no Jutsu (Air Clone Technique) Renbodou (Body Attachment) Sabaki no Genki (Energy Drain) Saisei no Saibou (Cell Regeneration) Satsugaite no Jutsu (Killing Hands Technique) Shihou Hapou Shuriken no Maki (Cyclone of Shuriken from Every Direction) Shikon no Jutsu (Dead Soul Technique) Shishienjin (Four Man Purple Flame Wall) Shougekishou (Rising Impact Palm) Shoushitsu (Knee Strike) Shuushuku (Constriction) Souseki Fuuin (Genesis Seal) Souzousaisei (Genesis Rebirth) Togeyomi (Underworld Spines) Tokken (Tackle Charge) Touton no Jutsu (Transparent Escape Technique) Youjitsuba (Spitting Toothpick) Bio: as a kid his father experimented with the powers of curse seals as well as the mythical meteor that founded the peacock but when he could no longer able experiment on himself he turned to his son who at first was very willing to help his father but as time moved on the experiments got out of hand they began having odd effects on him so as he began his ninja training he was able to produce a large amount of the peacock's chakra and its healing form but this had a tool on Sakon's body it began to rapidly age not only in appearance his father realizing this took parts of the meteor and fled to the village of the hidden sound to sell its power to the highest bidder. As Sakon realized what potential he had untapped he began to fear himself and vowed to undo what his father had done to him and as time went on he had made progress finding out weaknesses to curse seals and possibly how to remove them and after decades of research and training he had found out that he could appear normal somewhat to the other ninja in his village he had discovered how to reverse his aging process to some degree now appearing in his late 20's is actually in his 40's. now as he continues his training and research in gaioh village he hopes to cure himself of his fathers bidding and retrieve what parts of the peacock meteor that he hasn't already.(more to come Later) Appearence: 6'2" muscular long white hair eyes grey and always wears scrubs and goggles or a monks robe to hide all of the tricks he stores up his sleeve
The bits in it are copy/pastes within the direct Naruto universe (I.e. Peacock meteor= Star village, Tsunade techniques, WAY many chakura absorptions), as well as the methods of attacks and all being 1, too many, and 2, not described at all, leading to the fact someone can make up anything at any point and time...
The character is WAY over powered, and therefor until changes are made, disapproved...
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Posted: Tue Jul 29, 2008 10:51 am
Nekage I'm actually gonna out a stop to this now, and interrupt Azure's approval on Sakonudon's profile...
The bits in it are copy/pastes within the direct Naruto universe (I.e. Peacock meteor= Star village, Tsunade techniques, WAY many chakura absorptions), as well as the methods of attacks and all being 1, too many, and 2, not described at all, leading to the fact someone can make up anything at any point and time...
The character is WAY over powered, and therefor until changes are made, disapproved... I conversed with him on the subject... and I said that the approval comes with the stipulation that you would have to change things if deemed necessary. He has his background as being from the Star village, and he has used such jutsus in the past... however I told him that I didn't like using anything from the actual Naruto universe in this guild, minus the standard jutsus. So if you can, remake his profile for him.
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Posted: Thu Jul 31, 2008 12:05 pm
Username: Catastrophic Caucasian
Name: Euria S. Sundayne.
Nickname: "Sad Sunday"
Age: 18
Gender: Male
Race: Human
Rank: Genin
Village: Now has a residence in Gaioh.
Clan: None
Weapons:
Bio: Euria became an orphan since early age. His father was a notorious Alchemist, and his mother a well-known engineer. Both pioneers in the field of fusing magic rituals & steam technology. They both died in an accident while trying to perfect their inventions.
By age 4 he had already demonstrated an innate talent in the study of genjutsu or as he liked to call it "magic". Excelling most in the fields of phantasms.
For years Euria studied his magics, never leaving the room that his uncle so graciously put him in due to his parents death. In his mourning, intensive studies, and an acquired craziness from his uncle...Euria spawned forth a schizophrenic like extra personality known as Rouen. To Euria, Rouen was the only person who understood him, the only person whom could ever be a "real" figure in his life. Euria's life from this point on was formed on the whim's of Rouen.
Far from your traditional image of an ''evil person'' Rouen's main motivation is sheer ambition. Hunger for knowledge, the kind that allows you to defy even the most basic rules of nature, even if it means opening doors that shouldn't be opened, including the severe study of the prohibited arts. But aside from the controversy that arises everywhere he is mentioned he is still a very well respected authority...too bad he really doesn't exist.
Euria interacts with Rouen as if hes not only real, but as if he was his superior. Every strange order that Rouen has given Euria throughout the years has been followed, even one that forced Euria to coop himself up in a dingy room for more than half a year.
It is now, that in an order from Rouen to find a suitable village to live in, that Euria stumbles across a village riddled with shinobi and their foreign magics.
Personality: Euria is NOT a cool kid. He's insane, creepy, and above all a DRAMA QUEEN. He has devoted himself to Rouen's cause and has no sense of self. Whatever Rouen's command is, he obeys. For he is very afraid of disappointing the only person that ever showed some interest in his odd persona. (This of course is all inside his crazy head) He dislikes physical labor most of all, and if he can't do it with genjutsu, even more so...though he probably won't...because he's got no interest in anything. at all. really. Also, he mourns a lot, over the most stupid of things. He likes capes and fancy hats.
Appearance: Starting from the top down it is clearly visible how strange Euria is. With a head full of sea monster green hair and turquoise eyes Euria is more than slightly noticeable in a crowd. Wearing clothes that would seem fitting in the Victorian age, he shows his affinity for the darker side of things. Wearing a white button down undershirt with a high collar and a sleeveless right-sided button up coat tailed jacket, Euria dressed a little fancier than the average man. With a pair of velvet slacks and white knee length boots you have to wonder where Euria gets all his money. Strutting his affinity for capes and hats Euria sports a knee length cape with a nose high button up collar and a satin collapsible top hat which fits snugly in a pocket in the aforementioned cape.
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Posted: Thu Jul 31, 2008 12:25 pm
Catastrophic Caucasian: Approved.
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Posted: Thu Jul 31, 2008 12:43 pm
azureink Catastrophic Caucasian: Approved. I thank you dearly my good sir.
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Posted: Thu Jul 31, 2008 10:44 pm
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Posted: Fri Aug 01, 2008 8:11 am
azureink Nekage I'm actually gonna out a stop to this now, and interrupt Azure's approval on Sakonudon's profile...
The bits in it are copy/pastes within the direct Naruto universe (I.e. Peacock meteor= Star village, Tsunade techniques, WAY many chakura absorptions), as well as the methods of attacks and all being 1, too many, and 2, not described at all, leading to the fact someone can make up anything at any point and time...
The character is WAY over powered, and therefor until changes are made, disapproved... I conversed with him on the subject... and I said that the approval comes with the stipulation that you would have to change things if deemed necessary. He has his background as being from the Star village, and he has used such jutsus in the past... however I told him that I didn't like using anything from the actual Naruto universe in this guild, minus the standard jutsus. So if you can, remake his profile for him.
As for [Akio]'s profile, I'm going to be the one that says a no on approval right now since it builds on itself of him being "God of ninja arts". Not to mention, the description of the background makes me EXTREMELY uneasy...And not for like "Oh man, its a scary character" or stuff like that...It's for the fact that profiles like this scream to me "Yeah, I'm going to become a god modder and totally be a emo sasuke rip off in every sense. I mean, come on, I killed my ******** family! that makes me stronger then any of you."...
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Posted: Fri Aug 01, 2008 12:01 pm
Sakonudon is now not approved until massive revision is done.
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Posted: Sun Aug 03, 2008 6:57 am
I edited the profile, if it still needs to be changed then I'll re-do the whole thing. It wasn't meant to come out like a God character or w/e. But yeah, it's edited.
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Posted: Sun Aug 03, 2008 9:46 am
You still have "In secret he trained himself and was somewhat of a god at the ninja arts" not to mention you need to pick one chakra characteristic, either earth OR fire... also the whole "Practically invincable" thing is just plain off...
I recommend a whole new character
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Posted: Mon Aug 04, 2008 7:18 am
azureink Sakonudon is now not approved until massive revision is done. you might want to PM him, I doubt many people check back after they have been given the green light
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