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 Posted: Wed Jul 27, 2005 12:04 am
omfg I took so long writing a ******** post on this thing and all of a sudden my internet ******** up on me. why does it always happen when I'm about to offer you suggestions? God damn...
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Posted: Wed Jul 27, 2005 12:05 am
Rooster128 omfg I took so long writing a ******** post on this thing and all of a sudden my internet ******** up on me. why does it always happen when I'm about to offer you suggestions? God damn... well that sucks what did you think though?
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Posted: Wed Jul 27, 2005 12:21 am
If you're asking me to rewrite it all, I'd say you're nuts. Haha.
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Posted: Wed Jul 27, 2005 12:26 am
Basically, its like this:
-Siths' weakness is NOT lack of strength and courage. They flourish on passion. Try 'insanity' or 'blind quest for power'.
-Spelling.
-Sentence structure, that's a must.
-Use lighter colors against a white background.
-Use less colors (things held together by **s don't need a color, black will do.)
-The meeting seemed a tad too short for a meeting. Even if they don't say much, try stretching out the post a bit, describe what they are feeling or something of the sort.
-4 Star Defenders? That's a tad much, 1-2 will do, after all, they're mammoth, right?
-Start thinking more along the lines of actually writing a story. That is what people want to read.
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Posted: Wed Jul 27, 2005 12:29 am
Rooster128 Basically, its like this: -Siths' weakness is NOT lack of strength and courage. They flourish on passion. Try 'insanity' or 'blind quest for power'. -Spelling. -Sentence structure, that's a must. -Use lighter colors against a white background. -Use less colors (things held together by **s don't need a color, black will do.) -The meeting seemed a tad too short for a meeting. Even if they don't say much, try stretching out the post a bit, describe what they are feeling or something of the sort. -4 Star Defenders? That's a tad much, 1-2 will do, after all, they're mammoth, right? -Start thinking more along the lines of actually writing a story. That is what people want to read. and home one would be llike a step below your pulser things star defenders are a 3rd the size of a super star destroyer and can defeat a ssd by itself and i thought i put down only 2 one for me and one for bb62000
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Posted: Wed Jul 27, 2005 12:32 am
Home one?
Anyway, yeh, that's more like it. I thought, through the reading, you meant 4. I'm like WHA? lol...
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Posted: Wed Jul 27, 2005 12:33 am
You know, after we take Kashyyyk and Naboo, it would be funny if we just went into hiding and had you guys keep post until you give up... then we attack. Haha.
So much for asuming things. wink
And mmmmmmmmm I love the taste of my own retainer. Ecspecially in the morning... Yuck!
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Posted: Wed Jul 27, 2005 12:35 am
http://www.theforce.net/swtc/mcc.html#home1
that link gives you info and pics of home 1 the pics have seprerate links below the info if i rember right
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Posted: Wed Jul 27, 2005 12:38 am
Rooster128 Alex must you post in every freakin thread? Let mine show up last, to actually freakin get her attention... lol... of course i do
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Posted: Wed Jul 27, 2005 12:38 am
Hey, look, you're talking to yourself again!
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Posted: Wed Jul 27, 2005 12:39 am
Rooster128 Basically, its like this: -Siths' weakness is NOT lack of strength and courage. They flourish on passion. Try 'insanity' or 'blind quest for power'. -Spelling. -Sentence structure, that's a must. -Use lighter colors against a white background. -Use less colors (things held together by **s don't need a color, black will do.) -The meeting seemed a tad too short for a meeting. Even if they don't say much, try stretching out the post a bit, describe what they are feeling or something of the sort. -4 Star Defenders? That's a tad much, 1-2 will do, after all, they're mammoth, right? -Start thinking more along the lines of actually writing a story. That is what people want to read. every rebal leader when face with overwelming odds always give a speach about spirit ad courage
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Posted: Wed Jul 27, 2005 12:41 am
But to say that's the sith's weakness? Ha. Haha. That's funny.
It's like in LOTR where one of those big Eureki (sp) gets a sword jabbed into his chest by Strider, and just pulls it in more.
We're ruthless killing machines! Rawr!
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Posted: Wed Jul 27, 2005 12:43 am
Rooster128 But to say that's the sith's weakness? Ha. Haha. That's funny. It's like in LOTR where one of those big orki (sp) gets a sword jabbed into his chest by Strider, and just pulls it in more. We're ruthless killing machines! Rawr! i fixed most of you misspelling how about just hope and there familys?
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Posted: Wed Jul 27, 2005 12:51 am
i fixed a bunch of stuff wit my recruitments
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Posted: Wed Jul 27, 2005 1:01 am
Alex Skyhopper Rooster128 But to say that's the sith's weakness? Ha. Haha. That's funny. It's like in LOTR where one of those big orki (sp) gets a sword jabbed into his chest by Strider, and just pulls it in more. We're ruthless killing machines! Rawr! i fixed most of you misspelling how about just hope and there familys? Most of my mispelling? You changed one thing, and I know for certain that is not how you spell it. Haha. I'm pretty certain it starts with an E.
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