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 Posted: Tue Oct 26, 2004 2:13 pm
O.o the list shows we are full ? ::runs to check::
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Posted: Tue Oct 26, 2004 3:01 pm
Dragoon Zero I had this all filled out when my comp went wacky and I lost it before I could sent it in... NOOOOOOOOOO!!!! Ah well, here we go typing! Name: Quentyn Varco Gender: Male Clan: Death Class: Ninja Element: Poison Personality: Quentyn tends to look at the bright side of any situation, even the deadly ones. He believes that Death isn't the end, but simply a transition into another state. A better one even. So he tends to think of funerals as happy occasions. Not one to leave ideas home alone, he takes his beliefs onto the battlefield. His fighting style is brash, daring, and sometimes outright suicidal. Many have thought that he would've been a better Dark Knight, but he just doesn't have the right build to lug around that heavy platemail. History: Quentyn was kidnapped at a young age to be sold into slavery. The slavers, however, couldn't break his spirit nor make him respect anyone. After weeks of 'training' they finnally decided to sell him anyways and see what they could get. At the Slave Market, Quentyn was bought by a passing Dark Knight who promised him his freedom if he could show that he was worthy of it. After years of training with the Death Clan he has finally become a Level 1 Ninja with the poison element. Appearance: A word that describes Quentyn well is average. He has an average hieght, not short but not tall at 5'10". He has an average build, not bulky but not slim wieghing 190lbs. Quentyn has a nicely athletic body shaped from the hours practising the acrobatic techniques of the ninja. Similar to a distance runner or marathon swimmer. His clothing consists of simple dark or black clothing that makes it harder for him to be seen during the night hours. Under this clothing you might glimse his light blue hair or shocking white eyes. He doesn't have an iris, no black center, just plain white eyes... Weapons: Two steel katana's, borrowed from the Death Clan's armorery. Plenty of shuriken and kunai for those annoying distant targets. Other sad (No, his eyes don't glow in the dark!)) ((If someone wants to be that Dark Knight we'll work something out, PM me!)) Just a word, the HQ has only been in existance for about two or three years. The main bulk of the Clan didn't arrive until...I'd say about a year ago. Although you could have been there at the very beginning...I may even decide to add that little thing into my history...I could be that Dark Knight, considering I was looking for recruits...and DeMarkcus has a sense that tells him who has the potential of magic..ok, that would work.
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Posted: Tue Oct 26, 2004 5:50 pm
up dated on the post.. -_-;; and yes we are still 'hunting" ::holding a poster:: Quote: EARTH CLAN HAVE ONE OPENING, PLEASE PM YOUR RP SAMPLE TO ME (CIPHERALEX) IF INTRESTED!!
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Posted: Tue Oct 26, 2004 6:02 pm
cipheralex stare what's soo good about death clan anyhow.. sad
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Posted: Tue Oct 26, 2004 6:09 pm
Alrighty, let's get down to buisness.
Wildcat Princess, first off (and foremost) please please please please use a spell checker, like the ones in most Word typing programs. I completely understand if English isn't your first language, but for Clan Wars, we need to be able to look at your posts and understand what you're trying to say. I think I speak for most (if not all) of the Clan Leaders, when saying please get someone to proof-read or edit or spell-check or whatever your posts. If you can't find anyone/anything else to edit them, PM me and I'll check it for you.
Next off, your bio. If you want to be in Sky, which class would you like to have? You've fufilled the first tasks, picking a name and an element, but you need a class as well (to defend yourself and so on). You also need a better appearance description, because I'm afraid just "Blue eyes and curly blonde hair" isn't enough. If you need advice on what to have, ask, and we would be happy to help you out. Or, you can look at the Rules thread, where all the accepted bios (from all the clans) are up. That format is basically what we're looking for.
We would also appreciate it if you "fleshed out" or expanded on your
personality. Show us that you've thought about your character for more than a few setances - show us that there's depth (or a certain shallowness) to her. You say that Kri is random, and loves to mess with guys - that her best friend is an imaginary chicken named Bob, and she is always in trouble. Is she a nice person? Does she have mood swings? Is she hyper? ^^ The personality section is where you can tell us about your character, her likes and dislikes, how she normally acts, etc...
Last part, I promise. sweatdrop But you also need a History section, however brief it may be - though, we are looking for at least a paragraph, and if you give less... we're expecting you to send us more later (because I'm still fleshing out my history section as well...). Again, if you need references on what we want, look at the bio thread, at some of the longer ones. xd opaj, Fenrir, Euphoric Ghost... pretty much anyone in life has excellent bio patterns to follow. xd
And if you follow the guidelines, and provide a stellar bio, you'll have no problem getting in. 3nodding Good luck, and if you have any questions... just ask. whee
EDIT: xd @ Cipher and Zely
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Posted: Tue Oct 26, 2004 6:24 pm
*Grumbles to herself about her bio.* stare
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Posted: Tue Oct 26, 2004 6:31 pm
oO; What was wrong about your bio?
>.> YOu don't think I was being too mean, do you? sweatdrop
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Posted: Tue Oct 26, 2004 6:54 pm
Yeah, Wildcat Princess... That's definately not the kind of stuff we want here. This guild is based on good RPers who dedicate lots of time to the guild to make it the best place it can be. Forgive me if I'm wrong, but I'd be surprised if that bio took you more than all of 5 seconds. Please try to fix it up and improve your spelling.
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Posted: Tue Oct 26, 2004 6:55 pm
No, it doesn't have anything to do with you. stressed
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Posted: Tue Oct 26, 2004 7:16 pm
Zelyhon cipheralex stare what's soo good about death clan anyhow.. sad
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Posted: Tue Oct 26, 2004 7:20 pm
Kujasan Zelyhon cipheralex stare what's soo good about death clan anyhow.. sad
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Posted: Tue Oct 26, 2004 9:23 pm
Kujasan Just a word, the HQ has only been in existance for about two or three years. The main bulk of the Clan didn't arrive until...I'd say about a year ago. Although you could have been there at the very beginning...I may even decide to add that little thing into my history...I could be that Dark Knight, considering I was looking for recruits...and DeMarkcus has a sense that tells him who has the potential of magic..ok, that would work. You'll notice that I wrote that Quentyn stayed with the Death Clan, not the Headquarters. But I could make a few changes so that he was picked up about 5 or so years ago, if you want.
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Posted: Wed Oct 27, 2004 4:06 am
Dragoon Zero Kujasan Just a word, the HQ has only been in existance for about two or three years. The main bulk of the Clan didn't arrive until...I'd say about a year ago. Although you could have been there at the very beginning...I may even decide to add that little thing into my history...I could be that Dark Knight, considering I was looking for recruits...and DeMarkcus has a sense that tells him who has the potential of magic..ok, that would work. You'll notice that I wrote that Quentyn stayed with the Death Clan, not the Headquarters. But I could make a few changes so that he was picked up about 5 or so years ago, if you want. Thing is, the HQ was made when the Death Clan was started again. (read my history in my bio for more info.) Because the previous one had been destroyed and dismembered. So...again, that could be a problem. Five years is too long a time. Although...I was thinking I could be that Dark Knight that bought you off of the Market...it seems like it would have been good for both my character's and your character's development if I were to have done that...(Well, actually, I'm a Death Knight, not a Dark Knight, but I suppose that wouldn't make much difference.)
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Posted: Wed Oct 27, 2004 4:35 am
cipheralex Kujasan Zelyhon cipheralex stare what's soo good about death clan anyhow.. sad I tried to copy-paste that like 10 times to see the small text before I realized there wasn't any. @_@;;;
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Posted: Wed Oct 27, 2004 5:49 am
Yeah... I actually told Wildcat Princess to come here. I thought she had worked on her spelling... oops! I was wrong! Forgive me!
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