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Kharne Bloodhowler Vice Captain
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 Posted: Tue Oct 10, 2006 2:10 pm
Dante Deus Damn Christophe... you sure you aren't talking about me and Stephanie in this one? Haha, everything sounds SO like us... 'cept her eyes are more green than brown... (they be hazle for all those of you who don't know) Seriously though man, this makes me think of her... so I obviously have a bias which pretty much voids my opinion on this one, but I do like it. I'm going to go look up the guidelines for a sestina now. I'll post them here. mrgreen Haha. I am quite sure, but if you find relevant to your life, then by all means believe it to be that way. Isn't hazel kind of a sandy color? A biased opinion is still an opinion. Your opinion probably has more relevance considering your situation.
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Posted: Tue Oct 10, 2006 2:11 pm
So, that is a sestina. Oh joy. Well, I will probably end up making one before the semester is at an end.
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Kharne Bloodhowler Vice Captain
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Posted: Tue Oct 10, 2006 2:12 pm
I read the ballad...all of it in fact...very...interesting...anywho whole romance thing about sestinas I can't stand so I kinda skipped that one...if that's all you can write with those things-than I ain't tryin'!
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Posted: Tue Oct 10, 2006 3:00 pm
willowbyrd I read the ballad...all of it in fact...very...interesting...anywho whole romance thing about sestinas I can't stand so I kinda skipped that one...if that's all you can write with those things-than I ain't tryin'! eh, the most recent thing I posted wasn't a sestina. I never tried one of those. I will eventually though.
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Kharne Bloodhowler Vice Captain
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Posted: Tue Oct 10, 2006 5:28 pm
A sestina can have any subject. A sonnet has a romantic meaning usually... most all sestinas I've ever read were about nothing romantic. And no, hazle is a mix of blue, green, brown, and grey... and it can be many, many different shades, all depending on the amount of each pigment. Her eyes are so beautiful though... *sigh*
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Posted: Tue Oct 10, 2006 5:33 pm
Dante Deus A sestina can have any subject. A sonnet has a romantic meaning usually... most all sestinas I've ever read were about nothing romantic. And no, hazle is a mix of blue, green, brown, and grey... and it can be many, many different shades, all depending on the amount of each pigment. Her eyes are so beautiful though... *sigh* Hm, I suppose I need to write one that is really depressing. My dad always tried to say I had hazel eyes. I always told him I had sandy eyes. Come on brother, don't go all mushy on me. *snaps fingers* Uhhhh, guys, we're losing him.
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Kharne Bloodhowler Vice Captain
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Posted: Tue Oct 10, 2006 5:37 pm
*Stares dreamily into space*
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Posted: Tue Oct 10, 2006 5:42 pm
To save him from everlasting torment of mushyness... *pulls down goggles, snaps on medical gloves, pulls out a power drill and a screwdriver*... now stay still. This won't hurt....much.
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Kharne Bloodhowler Vice Captain
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Posted: Wed Oct 11, 2006 6:35 am
*Continues to stare into space, but takes his fist and rams it into Christope's balls* Sorry old friend, but I'm dreaming... leave me be...
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Posted: Wed Oct 11, 2006 10:21 am
*listens for loud ring sound* Did you not know? My balls are of steel. Dreams pull one from the real world. Dreams to me, are useless.
Besides, I am in no mood to allow someone else any kind of happiness. Broken heart and all that. Which leads me to say that I will be producing something meaningful soon.
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Kharne Bloodhowler Vice Captain
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Posted: Wed Oct 11, 2006 11:07 am
*Stares at bleeding knuckles then continues to stare into space* I delight in this news Christophe. I've been yearning more and more poetry as of late. Anyhow, please, do leave me to my happiness. It is a feeling I get rarely, and I feel I have deserved it. Should you think otherwise, please, keep it to yourself.
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Posted: Wed Oct 11, 2006 2:09 pm
Of course, you realize that I would rather bite off my own tongue and drown in my blood than to intentionally deny one of my friends' happiness. We all deserve joy.
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Kharne Bloodhowler Vice Captain
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Kharne Bloodhowler Vice Captain
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Posted: Wed Oct 11, 2006 2:41 pm
Oh, do I hear it crack,
And there! It finally shatters.
Oh woe, oh woe,
I must save myself from the ache.
I can no longer feel the warm sun,
All I feel is the cold like before.
I can't hear the birds sing,
I am just going numb.
I find now that,
Words now have more power than actions.
What are words without actions?
People believe without action.
What would I know,
I without a heart?
Never again will I lose myself to any person,
I will never again love so much that it breaks me,
When they are all gone.
It will all be like before.
I curse amour,
The vile, cruel whore!
I curse not those that truly do,
But those who say they do, but do not.
I am just letting out emotion. Just trying to let it out without damaging something.
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Posted: Wed Oct 11, 2006 5:31 pm
*smiles sadly* one must be careful with one's heart...it can only handle so much breakage...lovely poem...
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Kharne Bloodhowler Vice Captain
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Posted: Wed Oct 11, 2006 6:16 pm
chaos_incarnite91 *smiles sadly* one must be careful with one's heart...it can only handle so much breakage...lovely poem... Tell me about it. I feel like hell right now. I'll get over it eventually. I am pretty pathetic right now. Pent up emotions released. Not only do I feel bad, but where ever I go at my school, I am surrounded by everything that is bothering me. Eh, I need to find a new place to sit in the mornings.
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