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cutereader86
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PostPosted: Sun Apr 01, 2012 7:43 pm


20 percent improvement.

By the way, I did explain to you your faults, but I don't think you get some of what I said...

You did not need to shorten your attack names. What I wanted were the descriptions.


Also:

see this website:http://www.otakusenshi.com/

and this:http://www.gaiaonline.com/forum/barton-ooc/barton-ooc-roleplaying-guides-resources/t.44682935/
PostPosted: Mon Apr 02, 2012 10:39 pm


Name: Amaterasu Hoshino
Name Meaning: Amaterasu= Japanese myth name of a sun goddess who ruled the heavens meaning "shining over heaven." Hoshino= of the stars.
Nickname: sunny
Age: 22
Birthday: january 21 1990

Eyes: blue
Hair: blonde
Skin: fair
Height: 5'9
Weight: 230
Build: medium build
Distinguishing Marks or Traits: a white skirt and white tank top blonde hair up in two pony tails blue eyes and pink ballet flats a time traveling key is around her neck

Blood Type: AB
Sun Sign: Aquarius
Gemstone: garnet
Likes: reading novels writing stories and shopping for clothes and throwing parties
Dislikes: bad clothes and bad attitudes
Strongest Subject: history
Weakest Subject: math
Strong Points: very strong in opinions a good friend
Has Trouble With: math and concentrating
Dream: to be a nurse

Personality: upbeat and easygoing very helpful and likes telling stories and swimming and tanning and has sloppy hand writing.

Personal History: I am Chibiusa's daughter. Usagi is my grandmother. I look up to my mom. she my hero i am sailor scout like she is. i cant wait to make my mom proud and protect the world. what we believe in peace. Ive just ended up here looking around hoping i am in the right time to help and serve. The kingdom i come from i believe i can do anything if i believe in myself.i was sent here from the future cause the past is yet again in danger. and I am here to train more as a sailor scout and to be more understanding of our world.

About the Senshi
Sailor Name: sailor moon star
Realm of Influence: light and purity

Transformation Phrase: moon star make up
Transformation Item: a star brooch with a heart around it
Transformation Sequence: grab brooch yell moon star makeup i put it on my chest and start to tranform into my scout form Colors:red and pink Outfit: sailor outfit tranformed i look alot like my moms sailor outfit

Symbol: moon
Colors: red and pink
Outfit: sailor outfit wit pink heels and a red bow behind my pigtails wit the round things in my hair like my moms gloves too and tiara wit red dot in it a moon and heart dangling earrings and heart and star choker
Weapons: tiara and moon star wand
Items: time key

Fighting Style: close combat

First Attack Name: moon star super kick (Offensive/Defensive)
First Attack Apperance: i flat out go to kick them in the body to knock them down
First Attack Effect/Damage: doesnt do much damage but confuses them
First Attack Accuracy: depending on the range of how high i kick

Second Attack Name: moon star butterfly kiss ignited (Offensive)
Second Attack Apperance: i hold up the moon star wand and yell moon star butterfly kiss ignited a light spreads out towards the opponet and u can see the moon when attack is being used
Second Attack Effect/Damage: destroying or weakening the opponent
Second Attack Accuracy: depending on the level of power being used






Sailor History: Human with lunarian blood. I was sent to the future to protect my grandma in this time. this evil is trying destroy the future i come from so I come back to this time to protect my moms future. And of us ever existing. i was sent here and realized it was different I do remember waking up in the forest wondering how i got here. thinking i might of came to the wrong time till i sense the power of the moon filling the space of this forest. so i ended up walking up to the mansion looking u at in supprise its so big. wow its pretty. Ive just ended up here looking around hoping i am in the right time to help and serve. The kingdom i come from i believe i can do anything if i believe in myself.i was sent here from the future cause the past is yet again in danger. and I am here to train more as a sailor scout and to be more understanding of our world.

Mission: to protect the kingdom of the white moon


-sample- One minute I was saying goodbye to my mother next minute I was in the middle of the forest in front of a mansion. holding my bag and time key completly confused.

chibiusabunny09


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PostPosted: Mon Apr 02, 2012 11:35 pm


hmm... OK... I shall highlight the areas i think you need to improve. Also: note capitalization, grammar, commas and need of full stops.

The words with lines through them are unnecessary.

ravensweet Longarms
Name: Amaterasu Hoshino
Name Meaning: Amaterasu= Japanese myth name of a sun goddess who ruled the heavens meaning "shining over heaven." Hoshino= of the stars.
Nickname: sunny( needs to be more japanese)
Age: 22
Birthday: january 21 1990

Eyes: blue
Hair: blonde
Skin: fair
Height: 5'9
Weight: 230
Build: medium build
Distinguishing Marks or Traits: a white skirt and white tank top blonde hair up in two pony tails blue eyes and pink ballet flats a time traveling key is around her neck

Blood Type: AB
Sun Sign: Aquarius
Gemstone: garnet
Likes: reading novels writing stories and shopping for clothes and throwing parties
Dislikes: bad clothes and bad attitudes
Strongest Subject: history
Weakest Subject: math
Strong Points: very strong in opinions a good friend
Has Trouble With: math and concentrating
Dream: to be a nurse

Personality: upbeat and easygoing very helpful and likes telling stories and swimming and tanning and has sloppy hand writing.

Personal History: I am Chibiusa's daughter. Usagi is my grandmother. I look up to my mom. she my hero i am sailor scout like she is. i cant wait to make my mom proud and protect the world. what we believe in peace. Ive just ended up here looking around hoping i am in the right time to help and serve. The kingdom i come from i believe i can do anything if i believe in myself.i was sent here from the future cause the past is yet again in danger. and I am here to train more as a sailor scout and to be more understanding of our world.

About the Senshi
Sailor Name: sailor moon star
Realm of Influence: light and purity

Transformation Phrase: moon star make up
Transformation Item: a star brooch with a heart around it
Transformation Sequence: grab brooch yell moon star makeup i put it on my chest and start to tranform into my scout form Colors:red and pink Outfit: sailor outfit tranformed i look alot like my moms sailor outfit


Symbol: moon
Colors: red and pink
Outfit: sailor outfit wit pink heels and a red bow behind my pigtails wit the round things in my hair like my moms gloves too and tiara wit red dot in it a moon and heart dangling earrings and heart and star choker
Weapons: tiara and moon star wand
Items: time key

Fighting Style: close combat

First Attack Name: moon star super kick (Offensive/Defensive)
First Attack Apperance: i flat out go to kick them in the body to knock them down
First Attack Effect/Damage: doesnt do much damage but confuses them
First Attack Accuracy: depending on the range of how high i kick

Second Attack Name: moon star butterfly kiss ignited (Offensive)
Second Attack Apperance: i hold up the moon star wand and yell moon star butterfly kiss ignited a light spreads out towards the opponet and u can see the moon when attack is being used
Second Attack Effect/Damage: destroying or weakening the opponent
Second Attack Accuracy: depending on the level of power being used






Sailor History: Human with lunarian blood. I was sent to the future to protect my grandma in this time. this evil is trying destroy the future i come from so I come back to this time to protect my moms future. And of us ever existing. i was sent here and realized it was different I do remember waking up in the forest wondering how i got here. thinking i might of came to the wrong time till i sense the power of the moon filling the space of this forest. so i ended up walking up to the mansion looking u at in supprise its so big. wow its pretty. Ive just ended up here looking around hoping i am in the right time to help and serve. The kingdom i come from i believe i can do anything if i believe in myself.i was sent here from the future cause the past is yet again in danger. and I am here to train more as a sailor scout and to be more understanding of our world.( break this into 2 or 3 paragraphs please.)

Mission: to protect the kingdom of the white moon Gokoa: add.... "My mission is" in front of to protect...etc.( without the " " marks!)


-sample- One minute I was saying goodbye to my mother next minute I was in the middle of the forest in front of a mansion. holding my bag and time key completly confused.


Sample: spell correctly. Also: use shorter sentences and also try to be more literate.

Also: use my profile skeleton. I think you used the website's profile thing.
PostPosted: Tue Apr 03, 2012 10:30 am


ok ill fix it again and break it up and i did use the website profile
Gokoa
hmm... OK... I shall highlight the areas i think you need to improve. Also: note capitalization, grammar, commas and need of full stops.

The words with lines through them are unnecessary.

ravensweet Longarms
Name: Amaterasu Hoshino
Name Meaning: Amaterasu= Japanese myth name of a sun goddess who ruled the heavens meaning "shining over heaven." Hoshino= of the stars.
Nickname: sunny( needs to be more japanese)
Age: 22
Birthday: january 21 1990

Eyes: blue
Hair: blonde
Skin: fair
Height: 5'9
Weight: 230
Build: medium build
Distinguishing Marks or Traits: a white skirt and white tank top blonde hair up in two pony tails blue eyes and pink ballet flats a time traveling key is around her neck

Blood Type: AB
Sun Sign: Aquarius
Gemstone: garnet
Likes: reading novels writing stories and shopping for clothes and throwing parties
Dislikes: bad clothes and bad attitudes
Strongest Subject: history
Weakest Subject: math
Strong Points: very strong in opinions a good friend
Has Trouble With: math and concentrating
Dream: to be a nurse

Personality: upbeat and easygoing very helpful and likes telling stories and swimming and tanning and has sloppy hand writing.

Personal History: I am Chibiusa's daughter. Usagi is my grandmother. I look up to my mom. she my hero i am sailor scout like she is. i cant wait to make my mom proud and protect the world. what we believe in peace. Ive just ended up here looking around hoping i am in the right time to help and serve. The kingdom i come from i believe i can do anything if i believe in myself.i was sent here from the future cause the past is yet again in danger. and I am here to train more as a sailor scout and to be more understanding of our world.

About the Senshi
Sailor Name: sailor moon star
Realm of Influence: light and purity

Transformation Phrase: moon star make up
Transformation Item: a star brooch with a heart around it
Transformation Sequence: grab brooch yell moon star makeup i put it on my chest and start to tranform into my scout form Colors:red and pink Outfit: sailor outfit tranformed i look alot like my moms sailor outfit


Symbol: moon
Colors: red and pink
Outfit: sailor outfit wit pink heels and a red bow behind my pigtails wit the round things in my hair like my moms gloves too and tiara wit red dot in it a moon and heart dangling earrings and heart and star choker
Weapons: tiara and moon star wand
Items: time key

Fighting Style: close combat

First Attack Name: moon star super kick (Offensive/Defensive)
First Attack Apperance: i flat out go to kick them in the body to knock them down
First Attack Effect/Damage: doesnt do much damage but confuses them
First Attack Accuracy: depending on the range of how high i kick

Second Attack Name: moon star butterfly kiss ignited (Offensive)
Second Attack Apperance: i hold up the moon star wand and yell moon star butterfly kiss ignited a light spreads out towards the opponet and u can see the moon when attack is being used
Second Attack Effect/Damage: destroying or weakening the opponent
Second Attack Accuracy: depending on the level of power being used






Sailor History: Human with lunarian blood. I was sent to the future to protect my grandma in this time. this evil is trying destroy the future i come from so I come back to this time to protect my moms future. And of us ever existing. i was sent here and realized it was different I do remember waking up in the forest wondering how i got here. thinking i might of came to the wrong time till i sense the power of the moon filling the space of this forest. so i ended up walking up to the mansion looking u at in supprise its so big. wow its pretty. Ive just ended up here looking around hoping i am in the right time to help and serve. The kingdom i come from i believe i can do anything if i believe in myself.i was sent here from the future cause the past is yet again in danger. and I am here to train more as a sailor scout and to be more understanding of our world.( break this into 2 or 3 paragraphs please.)

Mission: to protect the kingdom of the white moon Gokoa: add.... "My mission is" in front of to protect...etc.( without the " " marks!)


-sample- One minute I was saying goodbye to my mother next minute I was in the middle of the forest in front of a mansion. holding my bag and time key completly confused.


Sample: spell correctly. Also: use shorter sentences and also try to be more literate.

Also: use my profile skeleton. I think you used the website's profile thing.

chibiusabunny09


cutereader86
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PostPosted: Tue Apr 03, 2012 11:02 am


If you used the website profile, do not. Please... stick to my profile instead.

ravensweet Longarms
ok ill fix it again and break it up and i did use the website profile
Gokoa
hmm... OK... I shall highlight the areas i think you need to improve. Also: note capitalization, grammar, commas and need of full stops.

The words with lines through them are unnecessary.

ravensweet Longarms
Name: Amaterasu Hoshino
Name Meaning: Amaterasu= Japanese myth name of a sun goddess who ruled the heavens meaning "shining over heaven." Hoshino= of the stars.
Nickname: sunny( needs to be more japanese)
Age: 22
Birthday: january 21 1990

Eyes: blue
Hair: blonde
Skin: fair
Height: 5'9
Weight: 230
Build: medium build
Distinguishing Marks or Traits: a white skirt and white tank top blonde hair up in two pony tails blue eyes and pink ballet flats a time traveling key is around her neck

Blood Type: AB
Sun Sign: Aquarius
Gemstone: garnet
Likes: reading novels writing stories and shopping for clothes and throwing parties
Dislikes: bad clothes and bad attitudes
Strongest Subject: history
Weakest Subject: math
Strong Points: very strong in opinions a good friend
Has Trouble With: math and concentrating
Dream: to be a nurse

Personality: upbeat and easygoing very helpful and likes telling stories and swimming and tanning and has sloppy hand writing.

Personal History: I am Chibiusa's daughter. Usagi is my grandmother. I look up to my mom. she my hero i am sailor scout like she is. i cant wait to make my mom proud and protect the world. what we believe in peace. Ive just ended up here looking around hoping i am in the right time to help and serve. The kingdom i come from i believe i can do anything if i believe in myself.i was sent here from the future cause the past is yet again in danger. and I am here to train more as a sailor scout and to be more understanding of our world.

About the Senshi
Sailor Name: sailor moon star
Realm of Influence: light and purity

Transformation Phrase: moon star make up
Transformation Item: a star brooch with a heart around it
Transformation Sequence: grab brooch yell moon star makeup i put it on my chest and start to tranform into my scout form Colors:red and pink Outfit: sailor outfit tranformed i look alot like my moms sailor outfit


Symbol: moon
Colors: red and pink
Outfit: sailor outfit wit pink heels and a red bow behind my pigtails wit the round things in my hair like my moms gloves too and tiara wit red dot in it a moon and heart dangling earrings and heart and star choker
Weapons: tiara and moon star wand
Items: time key

Fighting Style: close combat

First Attack Name: moon star super kick (Offensive/Defensive)
First Attack Apperance: i flat out go to kick them in the body to knock them down
First Attack Effect/Damage: doesnt do much damage but confuses them
First Attack Accuracy: depending on the range of how high i kick

Second Attack Name: moon star butterfly kiss ignited (Offensive)
Second Attack Apperance: i hold up the moon star wand and yell moon star butterfly kiss ignited a light spreads out towards the opponet and u can see the moon when attack is being used
Second Attack Effect/Damage: destroying or weakening the opponent
Second Attack Accuracy: depending on the level of power being used






Sailor History: Human with lunarian blood. I was sent to the future to protect my grandma in this time. this evil is trying destroy the future i come from so I come back to this time to protect my moms future. And of us ever existing. i was sent here and realized it was different I do remember waking up in the forest wondering how i got here. thinking i might of came to the wrong time till i sense the power of the moon filling the space of this forest. so i ended up walking up to the mansion looking u at in supprise its so big. wow its pretty. Ive just ended up here looking around hoping i am in the right time to help and serve. The kingdom i come from i believe i can do anything if i believe in myself.i was sent here from the future cause the past is yet again in danger. and I am here to train more as a sailor scout and to be more understanding of our world.( break this into 2 or 3 paragraphs please.)

Mission: to protect the kingdom of the white moon Gokoa: add.... "My mission is" in front of to protect...etc.( without the " " marks!)


-sample- One minute I was saying goodbye to my mother next minute I was in the middle of the forest in front of a mansion. holding my bag and time key completly confused.


Sample: spell correctly. Also: use shorter sentences and also try to be more literate.

Also: use my profile skeleton. I think you used the website's profile thing.


please also work on your grammar and capitalization, thanks.
PostPosted: Tue Apr 03, 2012 12:00 pm


whoops... er Ravensweet, sorry I deleted your post by mistake.

But I was quoting it and correcting it.


Here's my reply.

Please ask friends if you have any problems. I am not trying to be harsh, but helpful, OK?


Name: Amaterasu Hoshino
Name Meaning: Amaterasu= Japanese myth name of a sun goddess who ruled the heavens meaning "shining over heaven." Hoshino= of the stars.
Nickname: Sanii means sunny in japanese ( Gokoa: remember, not English-Japanese , but Japanese-Japanese!)
Age: 22
Birthday: January 21 1990

Eyes: blue
Hair: blonde
Skin: fair
Height: 5'9
Weight: 230
Build: medium build
Distinguishing Marks or Traits: blonde hair up in two pony tails, blue eyes ears pierced

Blood Type: AB
Sun Sign: Aquarius
Gemstone: garnet
Likes: reading novels writing stories and shopping for clothes and throwing parties
Dislikes: bad clothes and bad attitudes
Strongest Subject: history
Weakest Subject: math
Strong Points: very strong in opinions on what she believes in, and a good listener, a good friend helps everyone when she is needed.

Has Trouble With: math and concentrating
Dream: to be a nurse

Personality: upbeat and easygoing gets along with everyone.
very helpful and likes telling stories and swimming and tanning and has sloppy hand writing.

Personal History: I am Chibiusa's daughter. Usagi is my grandmother.
I look up to my mom.She is my hero i am sailor scout like she is.

i cant wait to make my mom proud and protect the world.
what we believe in peace.
Ive just ended up here looking around hoping I am in the right time to help and serve my grandmother. The kingdom i come from we believe can do anything i fwe believe in ourselves.
I was sent here from the future cause the past is yet again in danger.

I am here to train more as a sailor scout and to be more understanding of our world.
I am a only child rite now as far as i know currently right now I love my mother so much I would do anything for her and I know she loves me so much.


About the Senshi
Sailor Name: sailor moon star
Realm of Influence: light and purity

Transformation Phrase: moon star make up
Transformation Item: a star brooch with a heart around it

Symbol: moon
Colors: red and pink and lighter pink
Outfit: sailor outfit

Weapons: tiara and moon star wand
Items: time key, tranformation brooch pinned to my tank top

Fighting Style: close combat

First Attack Name: moon star super kick (Offensive/Defensive)
First Attack Apperance: kick the body to knock them down
First Attack Effect/Damage: doesnt do much damage but confuses them
First Attack Accuracy: depending on the range of how high i kick

Second Attack Name: moon star butterfly kiss ignited (Offensive)
Second Attack Effect/Damage: destroying or weakening the opponent
Second Attack Accuracy: depending on the level of power being used
Sailor History:
I was sent to the future to protect my grandma in this time.This evil is trying destroy the future i come from.
So I come back to this time to protect my moms future
And of us ever existing.
I was sent here and realized it was different I do remember waking up in the forest wondering how i got here.
Thinking i might of came to the wrong time till I sense the power of the moon filling the space of this forest.
so i ended up walking up to the mansion looking at it supprise,' its so big.

Ive just ended up here looking around hoping i am in the right time to help and serve.

The kingdom I come from i believe i can do anything if I believe in myself.
I was sent here from the future cause the past is yet again in danger.


I am here to train more as a sailor scout and to be more understanding of our world.


My Mission is to protect the kingdom of the white moon .

-sample- One minute I was saying goodbye to my mother next minute I was in the middle of the forest in front of a mansion. holding my bag and time key


Also:
in the middle of the forest



Also...

follow my profile skeleton here!

Name:
Name Meaning:
Birthday:
Appearance:
Likes:
Dislikes:
Strong Points:
Has Trouble With:
Dream:
Personality:
Personal History:

About the Senshi
Sailor Name:
Realm of Influence: ( sees people having trouble with this. um, to elaborate: A Realm of Influence is the element that your characters powers come from. Sometimes this is called your character's Element which is another name you could use for this stat. Examples of this stat include Sailor Moon's use of 'light' or 'purity,' Sailor Mars' use of 'fire,' and Sailor Mercury's use 'water,' and 'ice.' OK?)
Transformation:
Colors:
Outfit:

if villain, then replace the word senshi with villain
if civilian, replace the word senshi with civilian.

if you have no powers, realm of influence...etc, put nil.

Weapons:
Items:

[Attacks]

species:
how did you come to be in the forest?

-----

That website was to help you. You were not supposed to follow it to the T.


Higlighted= errors.

Please take note of my bold and underlined words!

cutereader86
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PostPosted: Tue Apr 03, 2012 12:06 pm


NEWS!!! Edited profile skeleton! Check with main thread to edit the profiles!
PostPosted: Tue Apr 03, 2012 9:52 pm


i really dont got anybody to ask
Gokoa
whoops... er Ravensweet, sorry I deleted your post by mistake.

But I was quoting it and correcting it.


Here's my reply.

Please ask friends if you have any problems. I am not trying to be harsh, but helpful, OK?


Name: Amaterasu Hoshino
Name Meaning: Amaterasu= Japanese myth name of a sun goddess who ruled the heavens meaning "shining over heaven." Hoshino= of the stars.
Nickname: Sanii means sunny in japanese ( Gokoa: remember, not English-Japanese , but Japanese-Japanese!)
Age: 22
Birthday: January 21 1990

Eyes: blue
Hair: blonde
Skin: fair
Height: 5'9
Weight: 230
Build: medium build
Distinguishing Marks or Traits: blonde hair up in two pony tails, blue eyes ears pierced

Blood Type: AB
Sun Sign: Aquarius
Gemstone: garnet
Likes: reading novels writing stories and shopping for clothes and throwing parties
Dislikes: bad clothes and bad attitudes
Strongest Subject: history
Weakest Subject: math
Strong Points: very strong in opinions on what she believes in, and a good listener, a good friend helps everyone when she is needed.

Has Trouble With: math and concentrating
Dream: to be a nurse

Personality: upbeat and easygoing gets along with everyone.
very helpful and likes telling stories and swimming and tanning and has sloppy hand writing.

Personal History: I am Chibiusa's daughter. Usagi is my grandmother.
I look up to my mom.She is my hero i am sailor scout like she is.

i cant wait to make my mom proud and protect the world.
what we believe in peace.
Ive just ended up here looking around hoping I am in the right time to help and serve my grandmother. The kingdom i come from we believe can do anything i fwe believe in ourselves.
I was sent here from the future cause the past is yet again in danger.

I am here to train more as a sailor scout and to be more understanding of our world.
I am a only child rite now as far as i know currently right now I love my mother so much I would do anything for her and I know she loves me so much.


About the Senshi
Sailor Name: sailor moon star
Realm of Influence: light and purity

Transformation Phrase: moon star make up
Transformation Item: a star brooch with a heart around it

Symbol: moon
Colors: red and pink and lighter pink
Outfit: sailor outfit

Weapons: tiara and moon star wand
Items: time key, tranformation brooch pinned to my tank top

Fighting Style: close combat

First Attack Name: moon star super kick (Offensive/Defensive)
First Attack Apperance: kick the body to knock them down
First Attack Effect/Damage: doesnt do much damage but confuses them
First Attack Accuracy: depending on the range of how high i kick

Second Attack Name: moon star butterfly kiss ignited (Offensive)
Second Attack Effect/Damage: destroying or weakening the opponent
Second Attack Accuracy: depending on the level of power being used
Sailor History:
I was sent to the future to protect my grandma in this time.This evil is trying destroy the future i come from.
So I come back to this time to protect my moms future
And of us ever existing.
I was sent here and realized it was different I do remember waking up in the forest wondering how i got here.
Thinking i might of came to the wrong time till I sense the power of the moon filling the space of this forest.
so i ended up walking up to the mansion looking at it supprise,' its so big.

Ive just ended up here looking around hoping i am in the right time to help and serve.

The kingdom I come from i believe i can do anything if I believe in myself.
I was sent here from the future cause the past is yet again in danger.


I am here to train more as a sailor scout and to be more understanding of our world.


My Mission is to protect the kingdom of the white moon .

-sample- One minute I was saying goodbye to my mother next minute I was in the middle of the forest in front of a mansion. holding my bag and time key


Also:
in the middle of the forest



Also...

follow my profile skeleton here!

Name:
Name Meaning:
Birthday:
Appearance:
Likes:
Dislikes:
Strong Points:
Has Trouble With:
Dream:
Personality:
Personal History:

About the Senshi
Sailor Name:
Realm of Influence: ( sees people having trouble with this. um, to elaborate: A Realm of Influence is the element that your characters powers come from. Sometimes this is called your character's Element which is another name you could use for this stat. Examples of this stat include Sailor Moon's use of 'light' or 'purity,' Sailor Mars' use of 'fire,' and Sailor Mercury's use 'water,' and 'ice.' OK?)
Transformation:
Colors:
Outfit:

if villain, then replace the word senshi with villain
if civilian, replace the word senshi with civilian.

if you have no powers, realm of influence...etc, put nil.

Weapons:
Items:

[Attacks]

species:
how did you come to be in the forest?

-----

That website was to help you. You were not supposed to follow it to the T.


Higlighted= errors.

Please take note of my bold and underlined words!

chibiusabunny09


chibiusabunny09

PostPosted: Tue Apr 03, 2012 10:05 pm


Name: Amaterasu Hoshino
Name Meaning: Amaterasu= Japanese myth name of a sun goddess who ruled the heavens meaning "shining over heaven."
Hoshino= of the stars.
Age: 22
Birthday: January 21 1990
Eyes: blue
Hair: blonde
Skin: fair
Height: 5'9
Weight: 230
Build: medium build
Distinguishing Marks or Traits: fun loving full of energy

Blood Type: AB
Sun Sign: Aquarius
Gemstone: garnet
Likes: reading novels writing stories and shopping for clothes and throwing parties
Dislikes: bad clothes and bad attitudes
Strongest Subject: history
Weakest Subject: math
Strong Points: good reader is a dreamer

Has Trouble With: math and concentrating
Dream: to be a nurse

Personality: upbeat and easygoing gets along with everyone.

Personal History: I am Chibiusa's daughter. Usagi is my grandmother.
I am here to train more as a sailor scout and to be more understanding of our world.
I am a only child rite now as far as i know currently right now I love my mother so much I would do anything for her and I know she loves me so much.

About the Senshi
Sailor Name: sailor moon star
Realm of Influence: light and purity

Transformation Phrase: moon star make up
Transformation Item: a star brooch with a heart around it


Colors: red and pink and lighter pink
Outfit: sailor outfit

Weapons: tiara and moon star wand
Items: time key, transformation brooch pinned to my tank top

Fighting Style: close combat

First Attack Name: moon star super kick (Offensive/Defensive)
First Attack Apperance: kick the body to knock them down
First Attack Effect/Damage: doesnt do much damage but confuses them
First Attack Accuracy: depending on the range of how high i kick

Second Attack Name: moon star butterfly kiss ignited (Offensive)
Second Attack Effect/Damage: destroying or weakening the opponent
Second Attack Accuracy: depending on the level of power being used
Sailor History:
I was sent to the future to protect my grandma in this time.This evil is trying destroy the future i come from.
So I come back to this time to protect my moms future
And of us ever existing.
Thinking i might of came to the wrong time till I sense the power of the moon filling the space of this forest.

Ive just ended up here looking around hoping i am in the right time to help and serve.

The kingdom I come from I believe I can do anything if I believe in myself.
I was sent here from the future cause the past is yet again in danger.

I am here to train more as a sailor scout and to be more understanding of our world.


My Mission is to protect the kingdom of the white moon .

-sample- One minute I was saying goodbye to my mother next minute I was in the middle of the forest. Holding my bag and time key in the middle of the forest

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how I came to the forest I time traveled here to protect my grandmother
PostPosted: Tue Apr 03, 2012 11:24 pm


I am sorry, but you have not shown any improvement at all.

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PostPosted: Wed Apr 04, 2012 11:47 am


Name: Amaterasu Hoshino
Name Meaning: Amaterasu= Japanese myth name of a sun goddess who ruled the heavens meaning "shining over heaven."
Hoshino= of the stars.
Age: 22
Birthday: January 21 1990
Eyes: blue
Hair: blonde
Skin: fair
Height: 5'9
Blood Type: AB
Sun Sign: Aquarius
Gemstone: garnet
Strongest Subject: history
Weakest Subject: math
Has Trouble With: math and concentrating
Dream: to be a nurse
Personal History: I am Chibiusa's daughter. Usagi is my grandmother.
I am a only child rite now as far as i know currently right now I love my mother so much I would do anything for her and I know she loves me so much.

About the Senshi
Sailor Name: sailor moon star
Realm of Influence: light and purity

Transformation Phrase: moon star make up
Transformation Item: a star brooch


Colors: red and pink and lighter pink
Outfit: sailor outfit, a skirt and shirt and flats

Weapons: tiara and moon star wand
Items: time key, transformation brooch pinned to my tank top

Fighting Style: close combat

First Attack Name: moon star super kick (Offensive/Defensive)
First Attack Apperance: kick the body to knock them down
First Attack Effect/Damage: doesn't do much damage but confuses them
First Attack Accuracy: depending on the range of how high i kick

Second Attack Name: moon star butterfly kiss ignited (Offensive)
Second Attack Effect/Damage: destroying or weakening the opponent
Second Attack Accuracy: depending on the level of power being used

Sailor History: I was sent to the future to protect my grandma in this time.This evil is trying destroy the future i come from.
So I come back to this time to protect my moms future
And of us ever existing.
Thinking i might of came to the wrong time till I sense the power of the moon filling the space of this forest.

The kingdom I come from I believe I can do anything if I believe in myself.
I was sent here from the future cause the past is yet again in danger.
My Mission is to protect the kingdom of the white moon .

-sample- One minute I was saying goodbye to my mother next minute I was in the middle of the forest. Holding my bag and time key in the middle of the forest

Human with lunarian blood

how I came to the forest I time traveled here to protect my grandmother
PostPosted: Wed Apr 04, 2012 7:49 pm


Hilighted = problems that you have not corrected.
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Name: Amaterasu Hoshino
Name Meaning: Amaterasu= Japanese myth name of a sun goddess who ruled the heavens meaning "shining over heaven."
Hoshino= of the stars.
Age: 22
Birthday: January 21 1990
Eyes: blue
Hair: blonde
Skin: fair
Height: 5'9
Blood Type: AB
Sun Sign: Aquarius
Gemstone: garnet
Strongest Subject: history
Weakest Subject: math
Has Trouble With: math and concentrating
Dream: to be a nurse
Personal History: I am Chibiusa's daughter. Usagi is my grandmother.
I am a only child rite now as far as i know currently right now I love my mother so much I would do anything for her and I know she loves me so much.


About the Senshi
Sailor Name: sailor moon star
Realm of Influence: light and purity

Transformation Phrase: moon star make up
Transformation Item: a star brooch


Colors: red and pink and lighter pink
Outfit: sailor outfit, a skirt and shirt and flats

Weapons: tiara and moon star wand
Items: time key, transformation brooch pinned to my tank top

Fighting Style: close combat

First Attack Name: moon star super kick (Offensive/Defensive)
First Attack Apperance: kick the body to knock them down
First Attack Effect/Damage: doesn't do much damage but confuses them
First Attack Accuracy: depending on the range of how high i kick

Second Attack Name: moon star butterfly kiss ignited (Offensive)
Second Attack Effect/Damage: destroying or weakening the opponent
Second Attack Accuracy: depending on the level of power being used

Sailor History: I was sent to the future to protect my grandma in this time.This evil is trying destroy the future i come from.
So I come back to this time to protect my moms future
And of us ever existing.
Thinking i might of came to the wrong time till I sense the power of the moon filling the space of this forest.

The kingdom I come from I believe I can do anything if I believe in myself.
I was sent here from the future cause the past is yet again in danger.
My Mission is to protect the kingdom of the white moon .

-sample- One minute I was saying goodbye to my mother next minute I was in the middle of the forest. Holding my bag and time key in the middle of the forest

Human with lunarian blood

how I came to the forest I time traveled here to protect my grandmother


Also: use my profile skeleton. Is that so hard to comprehend?

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chibiusabunny09

PostPosted: Fri Apr 06, 2012 10:58 am


Name: Amaterasu Hoshino
Name Meaning: Amaterasu= Japanese myth name of a sun goddess who ruled the heavens meaning "shining over heaven."
Hoshino= of the stars.
Age: 22
Birthday: January 21 1990
Eyes: blue
Hair: blonde
Skin: fair
Height: 5'9
Blood Type: AB
Sun Sign: Aquarius
Gemstone: garnet
Strongest Subject: history
Weakest Subject: math
Has Trouble With: math and concentrating
Dream: to be a nurse
Personal History: I am Chibiusa's daughter. Usagi is my grandmother.
I am a only child right now I can be a cry baby sometimes I kno I have alot to fufill as a sailor scout and as a princess

About the Senshi
Sailor Name: sailor moon star
Realm of Influence: light and purity

Transformation Phrase: moon star make up
Transformation Item: a star brooch


Colors: red and pink and lighter pink
Outfit: sailor outfit, a skirt and shirt and flats

Weapons: tiara and moon star wand
Items: time key, transformation brooch pinned to my tank top

Fighting Style: close combat

First Attack Name: moon star super kick (Offensive/Defensive)
First Attack Apperance: kick the body to knock them down
First Attack Effect/Damage: doesn't do much damage but confuses them
First Attack Accuracy: depending on the range of how high i kick

Second Attack Name: moon star butterfly kiss ignited (Offensive)
Second Attack Effect/Damage: destroying or weakening the opponent
Second Attack Accuracy: depending on the level of power being used

Sailor History: I became a sailor scout when I was 16 I been fighting crime since than I am an only child currently I do hope to have a sister soon

Human with lunarian blood

-sample- One minute I was saying goodbye to my mother next minute I was in the middle of the forest. Holding my bag and time key in the middle of the forest



how I came to the forest I time traveled here to protect my grandmother
PostPosted: Fri Apr 27, 2012 8:22 pm


Not approved.

Reason: you are not following the profile skeleton in the original thread. Please follow that, and not the website .. that I gave you. The website was only a guide.

A guide, do you understand?

Also: not being mean, but I am telling you the truth.

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