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 Posted: Wed Sep 15, 2010 5:01 pm
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Posted: Thu Sep 16, 2010 1:31 am
Momma Mira It looks like you put his background into his description. Also, for this point in time, I would ask that the Akatsuki is kept OUT of the backgrounds, for this RP their purposes are slightly different. Even if I were doing a canon storyline, that makes no sense, why would the Akatsuki specifically target your clan? (people joining that organization still pm me for further information on that). That being said, bandits/outlaws/rogue nin/enemy nin could still have easily done the same thing, and you can even have a vendetta against Deidara. Also, bloody needles, you mention that you control your blood... how exactly? Mkay the blood thing i saw it on Soul Eater and i thought it was pretty cool and the Akastuki thing i just always wanted to see the Akastuki BURN! and i have the vendetta aganist Deidara because he killed GAARA! Well i supposed they targeted my clan is because um My father was the man who lead to the nearly the end of the Akastuki smile there all explained
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Posted: Thu Sep 16, 2010 6:43 am
Kenderu-Kun Momma Mira It looks like you put his background into his description. Also, for this point in time, I would ask that the Akatsuki is kept OUT of the backgrounds, for this RP their purposes are slightly different. Even if I were doing a canon storyline, that makes no sense, why would the Akatsuki specifically target your clan? (people joining that organization still pm me for further information on that). That being said, bandits/outlaws/rogue nin/enemy nin could still have easily done the same thing, and you can even have a vendetta against Deidara. Also, bloody needles, you mention that you control your blood... how exactly? Mkay the blood thing i saw it on Soul Eater and i thought it was pretty cool and the Akastuki thing i just always wanted to see the Akastuki BURN! and i have the vendetta aganist Deidara because he killed GAARA! Well i supposed they targeted my clan is because um My father was the man who lead to the nearly the end of the Akastuki smile there all explained Not approved.
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Posted: Thu Sep 16, 2010 4:32 pm
User Name: Kaze The Cursed Name: Hebimaru Soburin (Deceased) Age: 28 at time of death Description:  Orientation: Homosexual Personality: Cruel sadisitc and arrogant Hebimaru is a killer. He does however genuinely care about Kaze and was the first person to do so. As such Kaze manages to calm the warlord down and persuade him to express mercy. Background: Hebimaru was Kaze's owner and seme during a period of warfare in a time in which slavery was legal. He was a cruel sadistic warlord simelar to Orochimaru who experimented on captured slaves in an attempt to gain ultimate power. Hebimaru was the seventh son of a great warlord. As the youngest son his brothers inherited most of his fathers lands and powers. As the youngest son he was constantly teased by his brothers about his girly hair and wanting to wear kimonos instead of war armour. After meeting Kaze Hebimaru's brothers teased him mercilessly about his "boyfriend" Kaze murdered them instantly. Hebimaru died 4 years before present day under mysterious circumstances. Hebimaru told Kaze he was leaving for three days on a diplomatic mission and told him to look after his empire while he was gone. He never returned. Kaze is still in denial about Hebimaru dying (although there are three eyewitness acounts of Kaze killing him in a fit of blind rage) and whole heartedly believes Hebimaru will return if he is good. Crew: Scientist Element Affinity: Earth Fighting Style: Tell Kaze to attack. Weapons: None in particular although he will use a small dagger and scalpel with some precision. His main weapon in battle is that Kaze is completely loyal to him. Kekkei Genki: Hebimaru is not from a ninja clan and does not posess a Kekkai Genkai although he is shown to have a vast and terrifying chakra simelar to Orochimaru's which intimidates and supresses all those within it's radius. Meeting his acid yellow eyes causes paralysis through fear although this is not nessecarily a ninja skill. Other: Hebimaru has been taught a few minor jutsu by Kaze for use in escapes or experiments. Hebimaru's outfit of red gold and purple is sacred and anyone not of imperial blood attempting to wear them can be put to death. His red eye tattoos are a sign of his bloodline and his pride in it not ninja seals. Hebimaru is a sadist. However seeing as Kaze expresses machosit tendancies around him they have a fairly happy relationship. (I will not RP and Hebimaru except in flashbacks, genjutsu, hallusinations or drug induced stupors because of the aforesaid being dead but I think he deserves a profile biggrin )
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Posted: Thu Sep 16, 2010 4:58 pm
Oh NICE touch there. And I'm glad you did a profile for him, it really explains Kaze's character some.
And to tell the truth, I was getting curiouser and curiouser about this Hebimaru character that kept getting mentioned.
I really like the fact that he's not a ninja, that you chose to make him a warlord instead. Considering the world of Naruto and a few of the things I want to add in the Ninja Skies world, that makes PERFECT sense and adds to the chaotic structure of the universe.
Now I'm beginning to think that I should do a Phoe profile though. xd
LATER. I gotta go cook dinner now. But I will be adding this as soon as I get back.
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Posted: Thu Sep 16, 2010 7:15 pm
Momma Mira Oh NICE touch there. And I'm glad you did a profile for him, it really explains Kaze's character some. And to tell the truth, I was getting curiouser and curiouser about this Hebimaru character that kept getting mentioned. I really like the fact that he's not a ninja, that you chose to make him a warlord instead. Considering the world of Naruto and a few of the things I want to add in the Ninja Skies world, that makes PERFECT sense and adds to the chaotic structure of the universe. Now I'm beginning to think that I should do a Phoe profile though. xd LATER. I gotta go cook dinner now. But I will be adding this as soon as I get back. Can this avi be my new jutsu Mira?
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Official Sasuke Uchiha Crew
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Posted: Thu Sep 16, 2010 7:21 pm
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Posted: Fri Sep 17, 2010 12:55 am
Momma Mira Kenderu-Kun Momma Mira It looks like you put his background into his description. Also, for this point in time, I would ask that the Akatsuki is kept OUT of the backgrounds, for this RP their purposes are slightly different. Even if I were doing a canon storyline, that makes no sense, why would the Akatsuki specifically target your clan? (people joining that organization still pm me for further information on that). That being said, bandits/outlaws/rogue nin/enemy nin could still have easily done the same thing, and you can even have a vendetta against Deidara. Also, bloody needles, you mention that you control your blood... how exactly? Mkay the blood thing i saw it on Soul Eater and i thought it was pretty cool and the Akastuki thing i just always wanted to see the Akastuki BURN! and i have the vendetta aganist Deidara because he killed GAARA! Well i supposed they targeted my clan is because um My father was the man who lead to the nearly the end of the Akastuki smile there all explained Not approved. mkay i editeded it have a looksee
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Posted: Sun Sep 19, 2010 8:59 pm
Kenderu-Kun User Name: Kenderu-Kun Name: Kenny Touchdown Age: 18 Description: Kenny has always wanted to become an Assassin like his father Travis Touchdown and now the academy has made it come true I want a physical description here, not a goal. What color is his hair, about what is his build, etc. The tektek is a quick reference, but I want it written out as well.Orientation: Bisexual Personality: Cocky, but gets things done. Background: Kenny grew up with his Father Travis Touchdown in Santa Destroy. Travis has been training Kenny for the Assassin's life. So when he went to the academy, he was an ace at the stealth and assassinantions. After he became Rank #1 in the Santa destroy games, He left getting the same nickname that they gave his father, The Crownless King.  Please rewrite this to the Naruto-verse. This is bordering on the ridiculous.Crew: Keeping the peace Element Affinity: Fire and Red Lightning Fighting Style: Ninjutsu Middle Weapons: Katana and Dagger Kekkei Genki: "Bloody Needles" What happens is I can get control my blood and it comes out of me and then they surround my enemy and they turn into needles and stike Him or her Other: Nothing i think I have two main problems with this profile. The description and the background. I made notes there. And on that note... If you don't want to be in the RP, that's fine, there are other places in this guild to talk and hang out in. If you do actually want to RP, and I mean actually RP, not just troll for attention, then show me that. Because all I'm getting from a profile like this is "LOOKATMELOOKATME!" and I don't want that in my role-play. Now if I'm wrong in my interpretation, and this was a serious attempt, then please ask for help in those areas that need it.
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Posted: Sun Sep 19, 2010 9:42 pm
Momma Mira Kenderu-Kun User Name: Kenderu-Kun Name: Kenny Touchdown Age: 18 Description: Kenny has always wanted to become an Assassin like his father Travis Touchdown and now the academy has made it come true I want a physical description here, not a goal. What color is his hair, about what is his build, etc. The tektek is a quick reference, but I want it written out as well.Orientation: Bisexual Personality: Cocky, but gets things done. Background: Kenny grew up with his Father Travis Touchdown in Santa Destroy. Travis has been training Kenny for the Assassin's life. So when he went to the academy, he was an ace at the stealth and assassinantions. After he became Rank #1 in the Santa destroy games, He left getting the same nickname that they gave his father, The Crownless King. Please rewrite this to the Naruto-verse. This is bordering on the ridiculous.Crew: Keeping the peace Element Affinity: Fire and Red Lightning Fighting Style: Ninjutsu Middle Weapons: Katana and Dagger Kekkei Genki: "Bloody Needles" What happens is I can get control my blood and it comes out of me and then they surround my enemy and they turn into needles and stike Him or her Other: Nothing i think I have two main problems with this profile. The description and the background. I made notes there. And on that note... If you don't want to be in the RP, that's fine, there are other places in this guild to talk and hang out in. If you do actually want to RP, and I mean actually RP, not just troll for attention, then show me that. Because all I'm getting from a profile like this is "LOOKATMELOOKATME!" and I don't want that in my role-play. Now if I'm wrong in my interpretation, and this was a serious attempt, then please ask for help in those areas that need it. Its not a cry for attention its the proper one smile i've always wanted to be an assassian after i played No More Heroes 2 and i watched Soul Eater
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Posted: Sun Sep 19, 2010 9:59 pm
Momma Mira Kenderu-Kun User Name: Kenderu-Kun Name: Kenny Touchdown Age: 18 Description: Kenny has black hair, blue eyes (well one blue eye) He wears a black mask, a black vest and pants with chains. (Which makes no sense at all) and also a Black Katana Orientation: Bisexual Personality: Cocky, but gets things done. Background: Kenny grew up with his Father Travis Touchdown who moved to the village. Travis has been training Kenny for the Assassin's life. So when he went to the academy, he was an ace at the stealth and assassinantions. After he finished school he went to Santa Destroy to became Rank #1 in the Santa destroy Ranks, He left getting the same nickname that they gave his father, The Crownless King. Crew: Keeping the peace Element Affinity: Fire and Red Lightning Fighting Style: Ninjutsu Middle Weapons: Katana and Dagger Kekkei Genki: "Bloody Needles" What happens is I can get control my blood and it comes out of me and then they surround my enemy and they turn into needles and stike Him or her Other: Nothing i think I have two main problems with this profile. The description and the background. I made notes there. And on that note... If you don't want to be in the RP, that's fine, there are other places in this guild to talk and hang out in. If you do actually want to RP, and I mean actually RP, not just troll for attention, then show me that. Because all I'm getting from a profile like this is "LOOKATMELOOKATME!" and I don't want that in my role-play. Now if I'm wrong in my interpretation, and this was a serious attempt, then please ask for help in those areas that need it.
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