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 Posted: Sat Mar 20, 2010 5:58 pm
Sara screamed:"NO!!!" a small flash comes from Max's necklace and he opens his eyes. He appears behind Exlong and jabs the back of his neck. "SCREW THAT!" He jumps and does a spinning kick at the back of Exlongs head, then fires a punch at his face.
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Posted: Sat Mar 20, 2010 6:00 pm
"No!"
Exlong's neck splats as black liquid splats all over Max's face and body. The liquid starts to go inside his body as Exlong sinks into the ground. He then comes out where the girl is and has a black flame in his palm.
"You are a neusance..."
He blasts her with the flame as she starts to dicenegrates.
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Exlong L Aligheri Captain
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Posted: Sat Mar 20, 2010 6:04 pm
The flame simply burns out as the shadow comes off of Sara's body and she steps away from Exlong, giving him a dark look. Max stepped infront of Sara. "I'll give you flame Exlong." Max whispers as he clenches his teeth and blood starts to poor from his eye.
AMERETSU!!! The fire burns onto Exlong.
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Posted: Sat Mar 20, 2010 6:08 pm
"Two can play at that game... I may not be on the Ameratsu side of the Uchiha family, but I am the creator of the sharingan!"
Exlong's Izanagi Sharingan activates as his "Ameratsu"
SHIDAO
The black flames start to twist and turn as they rip apart. He then stares at Sara once again as her skin and body starts to lose shape and the images starts to twist and turn.
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Exlong L Aligheri Captain
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Posted: Sat Mar 20, 2010 6:10 pm
Sara's body starts to glow, and the sharingan has no affect on her. Max started to run at Exlong. "STOP ATTACKING HER!!!" Max shoots a fiery fist at exlongs face.
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Posted: Sat Mar 20, 2010 6:12 pm
Exlong's eyes quickly concentrate on Max's fist as it starts to lose shape quickkly. BEcause it is a small part of a body, it easily gets ripped as blood splats on Exlong's face and on the ground. Exlong then activates a sinking jutsu as Max's hand sinks into the dark abyss that is the underworld.
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Exlong L Aligheri Captain
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Posted: Sat Mar 20, 2010 6:16 pm
Max looks at his dissfigured metal arm. (It wasn't blood that splashed on your face, it was blue stuff. XD) "....I'm sick of you Exlong..." Max raises a hand and grabs Exlongs arm(the one with the eyes of danzo on it) A scroll falls out of Max's pouch and a new arm appears on Max's metallic one. Max uses his fingers to start squeezing out one of the eyes. "Sorry Exlong..."
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Posted: Sat Mar 20, 2010 6:20 pm
"... b*****d..."
Exlong's first Danzo eye rips out as the blood splats everywhere. He laughs in pain as the other eyes stare at Max. Max starts to get disfigured as all the eyes concentrate on him.
"You think you can take em all before 8 eyes tare you to shreds? Maybe it will be 10 including my eyes..."
Exlong concentrates his eyes on Max as well as Max's last breathe gets taken in. He cant breathe anymore because the misfiguring of his body misfigured his lungs. Soon he will die if he doesnt flee from Exlong's arm.
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Exlong L Aligheri Captain
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Posted: Sat Mar 20, 2010 6:22 pm
Max dissapears and reappears next to Sara with the bloody eye in his hand. His body turns back to normal and he coughs. He puts the eye in his pouch and looks at the blood on his hands... He had never had the blood of someone else on them...
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Posted: Sat Mar 20, 2010 6:26 pm
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Exlong L Aligheri Captain
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Posted: Sat Mar 20, 2010 6:32 pm
Max looked back up at Exlong with his eternal sharingan and smiled. "I'm done here...and your curse mark is going to be gone in a few hours..."Max said as he wiped his bloody hands on the ground and Sara locked hands with his. "But first...I can't let you kill anymore people... I'm going to have to kill you Exlong..." Max said as he started walking towards Exlong with blood dripping down his mouth, but then he stopped. He looked back to be Sara pulling on his hand. He closed hsi eyes, "another time..." Sara and Max locked hands and they started to walk back to Shintogakure.
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Posted: Sat Mar 20, 2010 6:32 pm
Stares closely into the empty eye socket as Exlong raps it in bandaged. He then looks at Max in anger as he smiles, remember when you jabbed me and that liquid went into your body?
KABON!
Max starts to choke as a liquid starts to fill his lung as makes it hard for him to breathe more and more.
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Exlong L Aligheri Captain
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Posted: Sat Mar 20, 2010 6:35 pm
The shadow clone poofs away, and Max walks over and picks up the pouch, again locking hands with Sara. "I'm over protective." Max said looking back and smiling with his eyes. ^_^ They started walking again towards shintogakure.
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Posted: Sat Mar 20, 2010 6:40 pm
Exlong then slams his hands into the ground and a large black bubble covers the perimeters and Max and Sara are trapped inside.'
"I believe you have something that came off of me..."
Exlong then laughs as he says to Max:
"Heh... The liquid is inside of your real body as well... that shadowclone had complete chakra of yours.
KABON!
Max's lungs start getting filled as it lowers his breathe.
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Exlong L Aligheri Captain
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Posted: Sat Mar 20, 2010 6:41 pm
Max looks back at Exlong and asks: "Are you done yet?" Max opens his mouth and breaths out a puff of shadowy smoke. Max smiles.
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