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 Posted: Tue Aug 31, 2004 2:58 pm
I don't know! I think after school started no one has much time to post or critique. I'll try and critique more after I have time. X.x
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Posted: Wed Sep 01, 2004 8:54 am
DarkishStar I don't know! I think after school started no one has much time to post or critique. I'll try and critique more after I have time. X.x Yeah probobly....and I realized no one has time to draw for me in my art contest either. :/ And I can't have it open for a year can I? *sigh* I'll have to host in in spring or something. cry *badly wants to start it right now* I've got the banners and prizes worth 2 million and and I really want some good art...
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Posted: Wed Sep 01, 2004 10:22 am
Chemie DarkishStar I don't know! I think after school started no one has much time to post or critique. I'll try and critique more after I have time. X.x Yeah probobly....and I realized no one has time to draw for me in my art contest either. :/ And I can't have it open for a year can I? *sigh* I'll have to host in in spring or something. cry *badly wants to start it right now* I've got the banners and prizes worth 2 million and and I really want some good art... ^_^ Think of it this way, if you do it now, you won't get much entries, so if you do it later, you could have a great contest and have even more money for prizes! biggrin
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Posted: Sat Sep 04, 2004 1:39 pm
DarkishStar Chemie DarkishStar I don't know! I think after school started no one has much time to post or critique. I'll try and critique more after I have time. X.x Yeah probobly....and I realized no one has time to draw for me in my art contest either. :/ And I can't have it open for a year can I? *sigh* I'll have to host in in spring or something. cry *badly wants to start it right now* I've got the banners and prizes worth 2 million and and I really want some good art... ^_^ Think of it this way, if you do it now, you won't get much entries, so if you do it later, you could have a great contest and have even more money for prizes! biggrin Yeah I know. Now. ^_^ And my donation letters and items would have risen in value. O.o But then my banners must be changed... :/ I had a banner contest and got lots of nice entries. 3nodding Oh this is not for the peer art critiqe! sweatdrop I'll post a my latest picture that everyone has seen already! blaugh Vector as always... Lines took forever, cell shading did not. sweatdrop It's a portrait of emmi taking her first breath when she comes up from a lake. Someone stole the late thou... ninja Note that she has got an angelic pendant, lip piercing and devil horns.  Click for NON CENSURED version. WARNING! ADULT NATURE! Yeah she do got nipples! O.o OMG! *faints* wink
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Posted: Wed Sep 15, 2004 3:31 pm
you guys are real good better than ill ever be
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Posted: Wed Sep 15, 2004 3:55 pm
Sorry to nitpick, but if you post here, could you please make an effort to give a helpful critique to one of the artists here?
We're working on getting a Picture Post thread going for the general "You're a talented artist", "I love your work." kind of comments.
Thanks.
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Posted: Fri Sep 24, 2004 5:08 pm
Hello! I am here to revive this thread in hope to get some useful hints and critiques... I am currently doing this picture: Male avatarI am not particularly good at males... Any help is highly appreciated.
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Posted: Wed Sep 29, 2004 9:27 pm
ok I've been working on my cg skill a bit. everyone said it was to blury so i tried something different. what do you think now? I love his face, but i hate his damn feet!!!! *bits his feet off* gggrrrrrr..... 
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Posted: Thu Sep 30, 2004 9:35 am
Chibi Nakoruru ok I've been working on my cg skill a bit. everyone said it was to blury so i tried something different. what do you think now? I love his face, but i hate his damn feet!!!! *bits his feet off* gggrrrrrr..... He's so cute! But I think it would look better if you vary the line weight a little bit though to make the hair strands and everything else look more crisp and lively. Or that could just be my preference. Anyway, there's a helpful tutorial on inking in general. I just linked to the area with line variation. http://artcorner.org/tutorials/lessons/inking/maina/01-3.shtml I hope it helps. And I really like the way you did the headband and the ears. They seem to add to the perkiness that is appropriate to this character 3nodding
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Posted: Thu Sep 30, 2004 9:45 am
Deuxia Devonair Hello! I am here to revive this thread in hope to get some useful hints and critiques... I am currently doing this picture: Male avatarI am not particularly good at males... Any help is highly appreciated. I apologize for double-posting if it proves to be very troublesome. Just tell me to stick all my critiques on one post and I shall for next time. sweatdrop Well, Deuxia, it looks like you have a good hold on human anatomy. 3nodding The muscles on this male are very well portrayed, especially on his arms (lol. I have problems with drawing manly muscles myself, so I admire you for that.) The details on his arm wraps look nice as well. One thing that bothers me is his right shoulder (our left.) It looks kinda uneven in comparison to his left shoulder. I think that his left shoulder looks more natural than the right, so maybe you could change the his right shoulder to reflect the left. That's all I could think of. I hope that helps you somehow. I like the way you drew his eyes btw.
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Posted: Thu Oct 07, 2004 7:37 pm
Any observations I could get on this piece before I ink/color it would be appreciated. Suggestions for accessories would be loverly if you have 'em. 3nodding 
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Posted: Thu Oct 07, 2004 10:14 pm
Songjewel: I like your pic, but the legs bother me for some reason. confused Maybe if they where a bit longer, or just wherent so plain. Id add maybe a bandana wrapped around her thigh, or maybe a few belts? The boots are a bit plain too, try adding laces to them if you like. I dont critique too well, so if this doesnt help, dont be surprised. sweatdrop
Hope it helped anyways. xp
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Posted: Fri Oct 08, 2004 4:57 am
Songjewel:
I don't critique too well, but I'll try and give it my best shot.
Her fingers grabbing the net, they look a little too...pudgy? confused
And maybe some folds to her pants, because her boots and shirt has it. Remember, even skin tight pants do have folds...even if they were small ones.
And for some reason her thighs gonk I dunno, I guess I'm too used to skinny anime girls xp
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Posted: Fri Oct 08, 2004 8:23 pm
3nodding Some good suggestions. ^^ Thankees, guys.
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Posted: Tue Oct 12, 2004 7:20 pm
Okay, I actually got something up. surprised Both need cleaning up, but I wanted to show everyone before I did anything. This one is for a mod:  This ones for a contest:  I know theres something wrong, HELP ME. Unless they arent too bad, but still tell me something.
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