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 Posted: Sat Nov 20, 2004 1:45 pm
Child Prey OMFGackt. XDXDXD It takes one chapter in to kill Gackt. that's ******** hilarious. ::just read the first chapter:: I'm gonna go finish this. he dies a lot >.>
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Posted: Sat Nov 20, 2004 1:57 pm
Buyo-chan Child Prey OMFGackt. XDXDXD It takes one chapter in to kill Gackt. that's ******** hilarious. ::just read the first chapter:: I'm gonna go finish this. he dies a lot >.> ALOT. ^_^;;
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O Blue Sky Complex Vice Captain
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Posted: Sat Nov 20, 2004 2:50 pm
Kaoru Valentine Buyo-chan Child Prey OMFGackt. XDXDXD It takes one chapter in to kill Gackt. that's ******** hilarious. ::just read the first chapter:: I'm gonna go finish this. he dies a lot >.> ALOT. ^_^;; XD Emphasize much? I'mma go read the rest. again. ::read about half:: XD
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Posted: Sun Nov 21, 2004 8:47 am
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Posted: Sun Nov 21, 2004 4:12 pm
Very cool, Buyo. I heart the composition of songs at the bottom. Very good job, I luff it ^_^
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Posted: Sun Nov 21, 2004 4:56 pm
Buyo-chan K-9wolf Buyo-chan Kaoru Valentine What the heck?! You mean advance planning for chapters?! surprised Anyway. Chapter 20 ish soooo close to being completed ^o^ Awesome xd indeed XD cant wait till 22 then =D (*coughhitcough*) bwahar =3 *coughhitcough?* o.o? actually... now that i look at that again... i havnt a clue >.>;
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Posted: Sun Nov 21, 2004 4:57 pm
w007! =D i'll get readin tomorrow or later t'night... whene'er i finish my exam project =3
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Posted: Mon Nov 22, 2004 12:25 pm
yay for track 20 XD lol i got honorable mention heart domokun lol twas funny =3 teehee *likes buyo's way of planning* i use it for hw projects all the time =3 *mm...pixistix >;]* now to read mode of eve.... *gets on that*
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Posted: Mon Nov 22, 2004 1:22 pm
"She never once trusted him, and never did"-
a bit repetative?
" as she began dumber and dumber"
as she /became/?
"One his fifth visit, she "
on?
uhmm... sry- i couldnt help but correct the typos ^^;
as far as the actual story goes-
wow o.o
wonderful idea to base a story off of so many songs ^-^
so sad though ;-; (not that its a bad thing, stories with so much emotion to them are really neat to read)
good job overall to u =3
feedback enough for u buyo? XD
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Posted: Mon Nov 22, 2004 7:05 pm
K-9wolf "She never once trusted him, and never did"- a bit repetative? " as she began dumber and dumber" as she /became/? "One his fifth visit, she " on? uhmm... sry- i couldnt help but correct the typos ^^; as far as the actual story goes- wow o.o wonderful idea to base a story off of so many songs ^-^ so sad though ;-; (not that its a bad thing, stories with so much emotion to them are really neat to read) good job overall to u =3 feedback enough for u buyo? XD XD yeah, thanks. Bleh >.< Well... I have no problem with typo correction XD I'm just too lazy to go and change it. Plus, I wrote it at 11 o'clock PM >< not a fun time to write stories XD
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Posted: Tue Nov 23, 2004 9:30 am
Buyo-chan K-9wolf "She never once trusted him, and never did"- a bit repetative? " as she began dumber and dumber" as she /became/? "One his fifth visit, she " on? uhmm... sry- i couldnt help but correct the typos ^^; as far as the actual story goes- wow o.o wonderful idea to base a story off of so many songs ^-^ so sad though ;-; (not that its a bad thing, stories with so much emotion to them are really neat to read) good job overall to u =3 feedback enough for u buyo? XD XD yeah, thanks. Bleh >.< Well... I have no problem with typo correction XD I'm just too lazy to go and change it. Plus, I wrote it at 11 o'clock PM >< not a fun time to write stories XD yw XD an 11? thats early `-` >.>
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Posted: Fri Dec 03, 2004 12:47 pm
Track 20 was odd... o.o XD
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Posted: Fri Dec 03, 2004 1:51 pm
Child Prey Track 20 was odd... o.o XD It's what happens when I don't have any idea's for a chapter. Oh weeeeeeeell =D I'm almost done chapter 22, Buyo needs to finish chapter 21. =D
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Posted: Fri Dec 03, 2004 9:37 pm
Kaoru Valentine Child Prey Track 20 was odd... o.o XD It's what happens when I don't have any idea's for a chapter. Oh weeeeeeeell =D I'm almost done chapter 22, Buyo needs to finish chapter 21. =D yes.... yes she does twisted
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Posted: Thu Dec 09, 2004 7:36 am
K-9wolf Kaoru Valentine Child Prey Track 20 was odd... o.o XD It's what happens when I don't have any idea's for a chapter. Oh weeeeeeeell =D I'm almost done chapter 22, Buyo needs to finish chapter 21. =D yes.... yes she does twisted O_O *scoots away from k-9* er... Im working on it >.< but I've been SOOO busy this week. Its like... Autobiography to write, lab report to work on, test to study for, MID TERMS to study for, and a poem to write for some guy I don't even like... but its the "secret santa" thing in my english class =D >.< I'll finish it, I promise! (but some of it got deleted when my compu froze >.
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