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 Posted: Mon Jul 17, 2006 11:31 am
arrow Draco moaned and panted. "yes... dear gods yes..." He smiled and stroked Harry's cheek. "I'm ready to get you your pleasure too..." Draco smiled as he got up and bent over presenting his tight rose bud to Harry.
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Posted: Mon Jul 17, 2006 6:02 pm
(( 4laugh *sings* the roof, the roof, the roof is on fire!..... blaugh ))
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Posted: Mon Jul 17, 2006 8:54 pm
4laugh
arrow Harry moaned as he felt himself harden again. He gently took two fingers and pressed them into Draco, "feel good?"
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Posted: Tue Jul 18, 2006 1:28 pm
rofl 4laugh ninja
arrow Draco arched his back and moaned. Good, there weren't words to describe how wonderous it felt. With one movement, Harry had HIT his prostate. There was little Draco could do to stop the moans that escaped his throat or the hardening member between his thighs.
"GODS YES I LOVE IT! DON'T STOP" Draco began to ******** back on Harry's fingers, not carrying if it was the degnified thing to do or not. He was in heaven right now. "MORE!"
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Posted: Tue Jul 18, 2006 2:13 pm
4laugh !!!! Jeez...this is getting "worse" with every post!
arrow He felt a slight moan escape his throat and he felt his member harden more. He posistioned himself and roughly pushed himself into the blond, "God you..you're so tight..feels bloody fantastic."
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Posted: Tue Jul 18, 2006 3:36 pm
sweatdrop blaugh my gods we're a filthy lot.
arrow "Only for you" Draco moaned.
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Posted: Tue Jul 18, 2006 8:50 pm
If you think this is bad look at the plotline my friends came up with for a Naruto fanfic that they want me to help them write. They said they can't handle writing the 'juicy' scenes and gave me the job of doing it sweatdrop
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- Naruto loves Hinata (vice versa) ,
- Sasuke finds out about their love and is jealous because he wants Naruto to himself.
- Sasuke tricks hinata into going to a secluded area and freezes her thus leading to SasuNaru,
- But Sasuke cant resist his older brother, so Naruto must share (whether he knows or not)..
- But behind Sasuke's back Naruto is also seeing Itachi because he grew kinky side for bdsm
- Sasuke and Naruto decide to go clubbing
- Sasuke loses Naruto in the large mass of people only to run into Ino and Sakura
- Driven with lust for their idol they gangbang Sasuke in the alley behind the club
- The two girls leaved him there barely covered and battered. They go back to their dates (Choji and Rock) from their "bathroom break" and say that they are feeling a little "wild;" choji and rock know what that means (they are getting some) so they quickly leave
- While all of this was happening Naruto was in search of Sasuke...he finds him...a LOT of him....and this gets Naruto...angry, enraged, and slightly turned on
- Naruto feels frisky seeing Sasuke looking so much like the uke...and his for the taking
- Itachi appears out of nowhere (he was taking a late night walk after some intense night training)
- Seeing his two "lovers" together gets him pretty hot, so he decides to join in the fun, unfortunately, though Sasuke is spent by the time Itachi gets there, and Naruto being the caring person he is decides enough is enough, and chooses to take Sasuke home
- Thus Itachi gets none
- Unbknowst to all three Jiriya saw their little happenings in the alley (he was at the club too) and took a ton of pictures and a lot of notes, so he can start work on his new set of icha ichas: yaoi style (inspired by the three boys before him)
- Jiriya quietly sneaks away so as not to get caught by the three
- After making a few calls Jiriya has two main models in the works for him....Kakashi and Iruka...
- Secretly...Kakashi has been letting Jiriya watch/listen to what went on between Iruka and himself when they got...hot and heavy...even the light stuff...so it would be more climactic in the books...
- Iruka remained oblivious to the fact of Kakashi's and Jiriya's little plan. Occansionally he came close to finding out but it usually gives Kakashi the push to try stuff new on Iruka to keep his attention towards him...and Iruka is always glad for something new
- Backing up back to the alley Itachi is pissed he was denied a ******** by both his lovers and decided to to take out his frustration on the next living human being who turns out to be none other than Kiba who was sulking at the lost of Hinata (he had a crush on her)
- They have a hot and heavy one night stand where after Itachi to spite Sasuke and Naruto spills to Kiba that it was Sasuke who was responsible for putting Hinata in a frozen state
- Kiba in a fit of mad rage storms out to find Sasuke but instead finds a sleeping Naruto slightly tossled, naked except for the thin bedsheet covering him in a delicious way
- Kiba kidnaps Naruto (who slept throughout the whole thing) and takes him back to his place
- Unable to contain his urges Kiba ravishes Naruto while he sleeps (he's a heavy sleeper)
- Sasuke being the possesive one he is finds out about Naruto (Kiba left a note about how he has taken Naruto cpative and where to meet him to get Naruto back) and goes to his rescue
Naruto POV: at first he is sleeping in sasuke's bed...woke to feeling immense pleasure he later finds out was from Kiba. Still feeling hazy he was bound and gagged hanging slightly in the air by chains from the ceiling. Not fully waking up until being penetrated by Itachi
- Upon reaching the destination Sasuke sees Naruto bound up hanging from the ceiling full and ready...recieveing from Itachi. Kiba at the moment indisposed....(Itachi unexpectedly went back to Kiba's to get a good screw and did Kiba infront of the slightly out of it Naruto)
- Itachi is doing the eye thing while Naruto has his fox eyes going on, they both looking very happy
- Sasuke thinking that this could be a good thing fro all three of them then notices what Itachi was doing, how he knew all of Naruto's favorite spots and how Naruto groans and moan like for Itachi in a way he never did when with Sasuke
- Like a train it hits Sasuke, Itachi has been speaking for a while "he is mine..i've had him..i've had you" or someting to this effect....it just keeps going over and over and over again in his head
- Sasuke runs out blindly until he hits a tree and blood from his left temple and back...what a huge gash it is...but it didn't hurt...everything feels numb
- Depressed and all angsty, Sasuke mulls over ending his life but right before he takes the plunge into the dark depths of the under world, someone stops him...it's Naruto...but it isnt Naruto... Kyuubi had some how got control of the boy's body (Itachi unconcious cause halfway with ravishing naruto Kyuubi took over and gave Itachi the ******** of a lifetime it actually knocked him out)
- Sasuke is angry with Naruto for being with Itachi, so blind with anger he lunges at him, unaware of the blood loss and the fact the its Kyuubi he's dealing with
- Kyuubi being his normal demon fox self in Naruto's body, easily subdues Sasuke, by pinning him to a tree, Sasuke still numb in the mind doesn't quite seem to get whats going on, but is vulnerables at this stage, so Kyuubi opts to make Sasuke his.
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Posted: Tue Jul 18, 2006 10:34 pm
Wow Jo....that's a detailed plot... 4laugh and yes Notsy! We ARE Flithy!
arrow He waited a moment for Draco to adjustand then pulled out only to slam himself back in. He took a tight hold on Draco's slim hips and picked up the pace.
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Posted: Wed Jul 19, 2006 12:12 am
yeah i know that's because they were making things up as they go during a chat on AIM...apparently they were bored and this was the outcome sweatdrop
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Posted: Wed Jul 19, 2006 4:52 pm
eek
arrow Draco writed and moaned as he began to spray his male goo from his swollen member. The tiles of the roof being made slick from his eruption.
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Posted: Wed Jul 19, 2006 10:41 pm
redface wow Nots...
arrow He pounded harder and harder, feeling Draco tighten around him was almost madening. He rufused to let himself go just yet, he wanted it to last as long as possible.
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Posted: Thu Jul 20, 2006 1:27 pm
eek Did i just... make you blush?
arrow Draco moaned. What was harry waiting for? Oh... right... the third orgasm. He always liked to hear the strangled cry. That mix of pleasure and pain as the line blured. Draco always loved how he'd be almost boneless after it and Harry would craddle him. Though wiht the amount of pre c** he was leaking onto the roof and the coppous amounts of c** he's just sprayed on the roof, he wasn't sure how a cuddle would go up here. But if Harry wanted to make him boneless for a while... he wasn't about to stop the man he loved.
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Posted: Thu Jul 20, 2006 9:01 pm
You did make me blush!! A lot! Part of me still can't believe that I'm writing this ninja
arrow He kept up the pace in pure bliss, it had been way to long since last time. After a few more moment he finally let him go and his seed shoot deep into the blond, "God...I love you Draco."
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Posted: Sat Jul 22, 2006 11:36 am
Gawd reading all this is making me want to edit your post and make it a little more 'intense' wink
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Posted: Sat Jul 22, 2006 9:23 pm
I'm not very good at writing these redface
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