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 Posted: Tue Nov 28, 2006 11:39 pm
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*applauds* Dang... your poems were fantabulous, Kyuseisha! surprised xd 4laugh heart
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Posted: Wed Nov 29, 2006 4:12 am
Woot~! I'm flattered! I wrote them last year, and I'm not really as pleased with the first one as I am with the second, but I already said that. ^^ Thank you!
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Posted: Fri Dec 01, 2006 2:00 pm
I love them both!
I wrote 2 poems during Bio class about a month ago....guess I might as well post them.
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Posted: Fri Dec 01, 2006 2:25 pm
Yay! Thank you--I'd love to see your poems, too! ^^
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Posted: Sat Dec 16, 2006 1:26 pm
Kyu's poems were awesome! i like how you made krad envious... 3nodding
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Posted: Sat Dec 16, 2006 1:27 pm
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Posted: Sun Dec 17, 2006 10:24 am
Thank you all! It's so nice to hear that you like them. I really don't want to be a poet, though, I want to write! But I can't ever decide on what I want to write...too many ideas, you know?
I'm seeing a lot of pictures of Garret Hedlund as Murtagh...^^ and I'm not complaining, though...he's one of those guys that looks better frowning. His face really lights up when he smiles, though... whee
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Posted: Fri Dec 22, 2006 9:44 am
Both of my poems are about Krad. ^_^ I was in a Krad mood when I wrote them, and was thinking about how sad and lonely Krad's life must be like, and then those thought's actually ended up in writing. The first poem is a haiku and the second has a very.....different.....rhyme scheme. It takes a while to get used to the pattern so be warned! lol. Oh, and the second one is sort of Krad's thoughts toward Satoshi....sort of...ok, let's get to it.
Hidden Soul
Lonely existance
Suffocating in darkness
My light diminished
My One Request
Released but never free
Unable to live
Unable to die
I'm here...but it's not me
Why must you keep me here?
You hate me
Detest me
You shrink from me in fear
You just don't understand
It hurts
This feeling
It happened by their hand
I never asked for this life
My creators
They're to blame!
This pain burns like a knife
A knife fixed firmly between my shoulders
Betrayal
Broken trust
Denial finally dies; enlightened now, I'm older
I was never meant to be alive
To be free
Trapped forever
I have one request: If you survive
I beg you...let me die.
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Posted: Sun Dec 24, 2006 10:39 am
Oh, intersting. ^^ Very well written, if I may say.
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Posted: Tue Dec 26, 2006 2:30 pm
Woot! Angst! xd heart Lurve it.
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Posted: Tue Dec 26, 2006 5:50 pm
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Posted: Thu Dec 28, 2006 1:00 pm
Without angst, there can only be fluff.
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Posted: Thu Dec 28, 2006 5:08 pm
Omigawd! Lireal, really, you're going to have to take Murtagh out of your signature...Evertime I see it I get all mushy in my gut. Agh! What's wrong with me! XD
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Posted: Sat Dec 30, 2006 3:03 pm
But I keep him there BECAUSE he makes me mushy in my gut. heart Don't worry, I'll replace his pic with something else...eventually. 3nodding
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Posted: Sat Dec 30, 2006 5:37 pm
Something hotter than Garret Hedlund? Not likely. But I'm not complaining about your signature....XD It's just...distracting.
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