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 Posted: Sat Jul 15, 2006 6:59 pm
Why, thank you, angel. Though I don't really understand what is so lovely about Auel, Sting and Kira knocking each other out...
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Posted: Sat Aug 19, 2006 1:43 pm
Uh, yeah. The Play, Act Six is up!
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Posted: Sun Aug 20, 2006 7:50 pm
Read it and love the chapter Kal. Yzak is hilarious as ever though. However, I wish you explained that scene where Cagalli saw Athrun talking with them a bit better. It was like they saw eachother and that was it. You'd think Cagalli would have asked Athrun something about it and vice versa.
The Miriallia and Tolle part was sad though. Also that was so sweet of Athrun to care for Cagalli during the assasination attempt even though its just a plot to get close to her though. Grrr....
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Posted: Mon Aug 21, 2006 3:36 pm
lol, lovely wasn't the right word ^^" but i hope you understand what i mean!
yay! ACT SIX. heehee Yzak was so FUNNY. i loved it...though there were some bittersweet parts.
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Posted: Tue Aug 29, 2006 10:58 am
Lol.
Yeah, I should have done something about that, Mishu, but since I figured Cagalli would nearly get stabbed by a knife next I really shouldn't drag it out.
Glad you guys liked Yzak.
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Posted: Wed Aug 30, 2006 1:28 pm
seriously, you make him so funny, Kali =3
that makes sense. that part got me nervous ^^" and you are right. dragging it out would have made it less intense.
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Posted: Sat Sep 02, 2006 1:38 pm
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Posted: Mon Jul 30, 2007 6:31 pm
Well, now that you finally posted it....I'd just like to say that I already read the new chapter like an hour or so ago. I just didn't leave a reply. ^_^;
Well, I have to say that your writing has improved immensely Kali. I was impressed by how well you did Kira and Lacus's escape scene and the brief fight with the extendeds. I even enjoyed Cagalli's brief talk with Nicol. In ways, it actually extended his character a bit because normally you would associate Nicol only talking to Athrun, Yzak, and Dearka...and a few ZAFT officers and commanders. I don't think ever have I've seen someone have a conversation between Nicol and Cagalli. Well, anyway I can't wait until the next chapter because I'd like to know what actually happened to the ZAFT Sky Kingdom Base.
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Posted: Tue Jul 31, 2007 2:07 pm
^.^ fantastic work as usual! i love the new Kira and Lacus scenes, and the short talk between Nicol and Cagalli as well! Poor Stellar, she's still scared of the word "die".
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Posted: Thu Aug 02, 2007 1:41 pm
haven't read fanfiction in a long time. had to read everything XD
but you're a good writer Kal. great work.
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Posted: Fri Aug 10, 2007 4:16 pm
i finally had some time to read the new chapter! it's brilliant Kali! i love how well you were able to transition between viewpoints!
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Posted: Wed Aug 22, 2007 8:47 pm
It took me a while to realize you guys had posted responses.
But I'm glad the view is positive. ^^
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Posted: Thu Aug 23, 2007 3:21 pm
XD just keep writing some good stuff and we'll keep reading it
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Posted: Thu Aug 23, 2007 4:06 pm
yes! i'm going to go and read the new works right now =3
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