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GermanTemper1010 Vice Captain
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Posted: Sat Jun 03, 2006 10:22 pm
Free
I fell off the edge of the Earth today And down I went, past the grim and the grey. I dropped through the color spectrum--black, white, And reality gone; the world began. Kaleidoscopic simplicity shone A sepian lifetime; wordless memoirs, How quickly it seemed to all pass me by. Then I asked, "Where am I? Why did I fall?" And was answered in earnest, "You did not." A voice out of nowhere, perhaps my mind Jests, for surely Israfel has a form. "You jumped," the voice accused, "you've will to die." "No," I recalled, "I had to get away. Flying is freedom, and free I must stay."
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Posted: Wed Aug 02, 2006 10:13 am
He fled, he ran as fast as he could imagine, running on the legs his mind could provide him, he had to be free. He had resolved himself to be free forever. Here he was free, here he could be anything he wanted, do anything he wanted without worrying about repercussions. But there were those that wished to encroach on his freedom, limit him to only one world. There was always one that would chase him without effort, the man in the white coat, the one who would ruin his freedom.
He felt it the moment he was free, someone would come to ruin him and he came like a wraith from the shadows, tearing his dreams, ripping them to shreds of smoking memory just to disable him further. But there was one thing he could never rip and that was his escape. The escape that would allow him to be free forever, dream for eternity.
He stood there at the edge of his escape, the man in the white coat closing in as he tried to make his decision. Live in darkness, fleeing from this apparition like a scared child or plunge forth with no...turning...back.
Everything had gone black the only thing around him being the feel of sheets, an IV in his arm and the blaring light of the sun. The man in the white coat was there touching his forehead and a woman who looked familiar sat in a chair beside where he lay.
The doctor smiled "Welcome back." In his mind the man thought, "Damn."
Yanked right out of my a**. o.o;;
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GermanTemper1010 Vice Captain
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Posted: Wed Aug 02, 2006 1:35 pm
James moved across the room from his mistress explaining his plan as he went, "Only $10,000 and she'll never see it coming."
"I still think you should just let me do it," Veronica said, running her fingers playfully over a small vile she'd pulled from her pocket.
"A woman assassin!?" he exclaimed, "Who would hire a woman for an assassin?"
With a sick smile she replied, "Your wife."
68 words, but better than the last three novels I've read combined.
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Posted: Thu Aug 03, 2006 1:33 am
If I could do CGI movies I'd make that o.o;
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GermanTemper1010 Vice Captain
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Posted: Thu Aug 03, 2006 12:48 pm
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Posted: Thu Aug 10, 2006 10:30 am
I'm really awful at writing and interpretting poetry and song lyrics, but I'm still impressed and enjoying the amount of poetry and songs here ^_^ I really liked GermanTemper's Free and Chakira's Life Inside the Mind of the Insane is sweet. I'm much more of a novelist myself. I've written and started a few books but never completed some or finished editting the very few finished ones. Sometime I'll seek out some of my better samples of writing and post them here for you guys. Lately I've been in such a writing rut that the only thing I write is stuff for RPGs which is enough to drive me crazy because RPGs aren't always fast-paced and I've gone for several weeks without writing much of anything at times, including now gonk Now NaNoWriMo (National Novel Writing Month) is coming up and I've been playing with a lot of ideas for plots and characters. I encourage some of you to nano with me! It's going to be really hard since I'm going to be starting college and all, but check out the website if you have a chance - http://www.nanowrimo.org/
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GermanTemper1010 Vice Captain
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Posted: Thu Aug 10, 2006 10:41 pm
I did that last year! It was fun, but it kinda made me crazy cause the story really sucked... it had like 5 major plot holes.
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Posted: Sat Aug 12, 2006 1:29 am
I'd do it but I dunno if I have the drive, story and writing ability.
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GermanTemper1010 Vice Captain
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Posted: Sat Aug 12, 2006 11:23 pm
It doesn't really matter.
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Posted: Mon Aug 21, 2006 9:30 pm
Here's one I did recently. I call it being pissed off.
I am pissed, I am afraid, What lion am I? What lion fears, His own rage? What mane, Have I the right, To own?
What use, Be my claws? What use, Be my fangs? What use, Be my hunting mind? What use, Be my knowledge of my prey?
Who in the right, State of their minds, Fears hurting his prey, And ending their lives?
I want to destroy, Not create! I want to obliterate, Not manipulate! I want to topple, Not steady!
I want to feel, My prey's blood! I want to squeeze, My prey's still throbbing heart. I want to watch the life, Fade from their eyes. I want to see them understand, Who they so despised.
I don't like this feeling, The urge to destroy, To cause discord, To obliterate all around me.
I hate it, I hate this feeling, But I love it, I'd hate to see it leave.
But it must go, I've trapped it in a prison, Made of my venomous words.
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GermanTemper1010 Vice Captain
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Posted: Sat Aug 26, 2006 10:10 am
Not really my style, but I was asked to right something like this for a tournament and this is what I came up with in 4 minutes. sweatdrop
Be me...
You say my life's fine It's a great life I lead, But I don't see you dwelling in me. How would you know? Are you within, Hidden from view? Wishing you're me As I'm wishing I'm you?
What makes you so right And makes me so wrong? Why is my life like a Sad country song?
Give me a reason Why you'd understand What I've been through. How could you and Why would you bother? I'm no fool. I see what you're doing You think you're so cool.
You think you could handle the life that I lead? Tell you what, then, hun, You be me.
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Posted: Tue Nov 07, 2006 7:06 pm
*Alright this is spur of the moment so here goes nothing*
My Last Sanctuary
I thought i could be free, be rid of you and escape your gaze, that hold it has on me The wounds it caused The love it evoked The tears that flooded the rivers on my face Gone i went to my last Sanctuary In the corners of my mind Where there are no maps to find me and i am a nomad No home to return to in any other heart No smile in the doorway i left behind Just my own two feet following the viens leaving my heart Pathways away from my heart Taking me away From you To my last Sanctuary My last stand The outlet of my hope I exhaled relief I am lost enough to never be found, even by myself and i ly down to sleep Close my eyes swollen shut with pain My Last Sanctuary My Dreams Carry me away And... You... Your face, Those Icey Blue Eyes They are there too Invading my last Sanctuary Haunting me You embrace me You hold me close We breathe one breath Our lips cross roads Your warmth keeps me alive as my frigid air releases fog into the night
but you're not there
It all goes dark It was never to be And i wake up alone as always drowning in my own tears
My last Sanctuary My own mind I can not control I can not escape you
The love i have for you
And i fall to my knees For i have no ground of my own to stand on In the ashes of my last Sanctuary.
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GermanTemper1010 Vice Captain
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Posted: Wed Nov 08, 2006 2:58 pm
Not bad. It could use a little polishing, but it's pretty good.
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Posted: Thu Nov 09, 2006 7:45 pm
thanks, I appreciate it. It was actually based on a real dream thingado but whatev. Wherever the inspiration comes form work with it, right?
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GermanTemper1010 Vice Captain
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Posted: Mon Nov 13, 2006 4:00 pm
Precisely... unless your inspiration is mud colored paper mache, in which case, run.
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