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Name: Callie (number and Greek letter unknown)
Gender: F
Species: Human
Occupation: Counselor
Abilities/Specialties: Tracking, Hunting, People skills.
Rank: TBA
Status: Active.
Appearance: Long black hair clothes are worn. Has a wild look about her.
Personality: She can be somewhat eccentric. She hallucinates and though aware of it, often forgets the people she sees/talks to can't be seen by others.

((When one of her imagined people speak im going to keep the diolouge blue so you know not to respond.))

One of the things I mean by 'more content' is taking the time to describe the layout and setting of the action that's taking place.

We're on a desert planet, but Kara has described as both desert-like AND humid. You led us to a cave, but gave no description of the layout around it or how far it was. Then you led us to a crash site but gave no information about what the crashed ship looked like or how the team should react to it. The Tillians were described as reptillian, and that's it.

Consequently, I have no idea if the things I've put in my last post mesh with the mental image you had setting up this sequence or not. I've just had to make my own best guesses.

Putting more description into your posts is going to help flesh out the story and characters as well as give everyone posting a better idea of how to interact. We had a minor incident earlier where Brian described a man falling to his knees and weeping, and because he forgot to add description saying he was in his own room, Amara assumed he was in the middle of the hallway. lol Not a huge deal in that case, but if we can all take the time, especially this early in the rp, to make sure we're communicating the full scene, it's not only going to be easier to rp, it's going to make for better reading.

This is everyone else's reminder to post in Sci-Fi tonight so I have things to read when I get back from my date.

Im more then a little peeved right now since I made post. It was long and I worked hard in it, now its gone. I dont know ed. crying cheese_whine now I have to rewrite it but it won't be as good as the original. cry

My apologies if it seems I rushed things a bit here, but I wanted to get everyone in one place rather than deal with a lot of time on the trip down.

Shes an NPC, but she's featured a lot in my posts, so here is Melody's bio.

Name: Melody Eight Theta
Gender: Female
Species: Human
Occupation: Leader of security's Delta Squad
Abilities/Specialties: -Most intuitive security officer on the ship
-Weapons expert
-Hand to hand combat expert
-great cook
Rank: JG Lt.
Status: Active
Appearance:


Personality: Melody is scrappy and outgoing. She's good at thinking on her feet and her team trusts her judgment implicitly.

I really liked your post, Linda! heart

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