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Seiya_Sailor Star Fighter
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 Posted: Thu Mar 10, 2011 5:47 pm
Just a question, what is the due date for this story?
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Posted: Thu Mar 10, 2011 5:50 pm
AWESOME! I am SO going to do this!
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Posted: Thu Mar 10, 2011 5:55 pm
When is the due date? I'll get started on it this weekend.
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Posted: Thu Mar 10, 2011 6:11 pm
The rain began to poor on the ground as a lightning bolt sailed through the sky. Nicolae was just closing up shop at "Back Alley Bargains". As he began to stroll home in the rain he noticed a fallen civilian. He immediately ran over to the fallen man...as he picked him up the man spoke about a great villain. Nicolae heard a loud bang come from the alley way. He then ran over to the alley way and as he looked in it and saw a great majestic unicorn looking down at him. He spoke to the unicorn, ''Are you the great beast that has beaten this innocent civilian?'' The man quivered as he spoke. Then the unicorn spoke,with great fluency, great speech as well as a man with 4 years of speech school. ''Now who would like to know. Let me tell you,ahead of time, I would NEVER''His voice boomed, ''EVER beat an innocent civilian.'' Nicolae started to argue, but the civilian pipped up saying, "This great,majestic unicorn is telling the sheer,honest, truth. A great beast has done this to me.AND HE IS RIGHT BEHIND YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" Nicolae turned,swift as the unicorn,and ran into Edward,the sexy vampire from twilight. He hissed and Nicolae turned to the civilian. "Has he.......AHHHHH!!!" Nicolae shrieked. The civilian was rising rapidly, making a small,hissing sound from the bottom of his mouth. "WEREWOLF!!!!!!" The unicorn shrieked. Edward took one look and ran off with Bella in his arms. "Where did Bella come from?" Nicolae asked as the werewolf (used to be the civilian) pounced. <<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<< >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
The civilian,unaware of this, (leg was numb) got bit by a giant,rabie infected squirrel. The werewolf is the only thing that can kill the unicorn. That is why the great,majestic unicorn got scared by a dog.Edward was the one that beat the "innocent" civilian because he was trying to pick pocket Bella.(civilian is a hobo.)Explained? Good.
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TO BE CONTINUED...........
I said to be continued because i need to go eat dinner. sweatdrop hope thats not against the rules. *wink* i think its pretty good.
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Posted: Thu Mar 10, 2011 6:23 pm
Seiya_Sailor Star Fighter Just a question, what is the due date for this story? end of march
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Posted: Thu Mar 10, 2011 6:32 pm
yep pm it to him at the end of the month!
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Dark-Velvet-Revolver Vice Captain
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--iiLickYuhGurlzOreoClean
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Posted: Thu Mar 10, 2011 6:35 pm
i.wuld.but.my.keybored.broke...as.u.kan.see.im.spasing.wit.periods.and.not.using.sertaint.letters...mabye.ill.try.wen.i.get.the.khanse.to.by.another.keybored
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Posted: Thu Mar 10, 2011 8:36 pm
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Posted: Thu Mar 10, 2011 9:24 pm
we needed a title??!!! gonk
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Posted: Thu Mar 10, 2011 9:27 pm
well iidk the rubric HERE IS A STORY I WROTS OFF THE TOP OF MY HEAD
he sat staring out the old 1920's window, were outside it was raining heavily. His back against the wall, he was sitting on the floor. One earphone in his ear his gaze fell into a heavy space out. He was thinking about her, how his hand felt in his, but it was gone now. Over. The earphone fell out, and with this signal he got up from the wall and walked across the dim room. he came to his closet and put his fore head against the closet. the old wood creaked as it bared the weight. He hated this old house. after closing his eyes and puting his palms against the wore wood, he opened the closet. He picked out the huge raincoat. he was leaving. he slipped it on in no hurry. wen he was dressed he slipped passed his parents room, petting his cat beside the door before he left. he looked at his phone, it read 2;21 am. he walked with the hood on and his head down.
he arrived at the park and observed its emptyness. he held his arms back and screamed 'WHYYY MEEEEE?????" the hood slipped back revealing his auburn hair. he left the hood down and broke into a run. he ran with his hair drenched to his face. he whispered to himself almost in a chant, "i can fix this, i can fix this" he ran untill he was across the street from her house. not thinking he ran into the busy street, the bright lights blinded him as he held out his hands in front of his face. the semi' s horn blarred temparilly deafining him. he turned towards her house with his seablue eyes. all the comotion brought her out side in her white robe she screamed "FLETCHERRR NOO!!!!!" no way he would get out of the way int time. he heard a crack and every thing was black. he swear he could hear an angel crying..
TO BE CONTINUED........ if u want me too
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swiggityswootytootyfruity
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Posted: Fri Mar 11, 2011 12:05 am
Ooo This sounds intense. I'm really excited. ^^ When does it have to be done by?
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Posted: Fri Mar 11, 2011 3:01 am
going to join and take part and WIN! hehehehehehehehehehe... what is the topic and what/ where shall it take place? i need to know to make something that will make your very soul tremble at my writing skills...
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Posted: Fri Mar 11, 2011 4:25 am
3v3lyn w1ll0w well iidk the rubric HERE IS A STORY I WROTS OFF THE TOP OF MY HEAD he sat staring out the old 1920's window, were outside it was raining heavily. His back against the wall, he was sitting on the floor. One earphone in his ear his gaze fell into a heavy space out. He was thinking about her, how his hand felt in his, but it was gone now. Over. The earphone fell out, and with this signal he got up from the wall and walked across the dim room. he came to his closet and put his fore head against the closet. the old wood creaked as it bared the weight. He hated this old house. after closing his eyes and puting his palms against the wore wood, he opened the closet. He picked out the huge raincoat. he was leaving. he slipped it on in no hurry. wen he was dressed he slipped passed his parents room, petting his cat beside the door before he left. he looked at his phone, it read 2;21 am. he walked with the hood on and his head down. he arrived at the park and observed its emptyness. he held his arms back and screamed 'WHYYY MEEEEE?????" the hood slipped back revealing his auburn hair. he left the hood down and broke into a run. he ran with his hair drenched to his face. he whispered to himself almost in a chant, "i can fix this, i can fix this" he ran untill he was across the street from her house. not thinking he ran into the busy street, the bright lights blinded him as he held out his hands in front of his face. the semi' s horn blarred temparilly deafining him. he turned towards her house with his seablue eyes. all the comotion brought her out side in her white robe she screamed "FLETCHERRR NOO!!!!!" no way he would get out of the way int time. he heard a crack and every thing was black. he swear he could hear an angel crying.. TO BE CONTINUED........ if u want me too
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Posted: Fri Mar 11, 2011 9:01 am
3v3lyn w1ll0w well iidk the rubric HERE IS A STORY I WROTS OFF THE TOP OF MY HEAD he sat staring out the old 1920's window, were outside it was raining heavily. His back against the wall, he was sitting on the floor. One earphone in his ear his gaze fell into a heavy space out. He was thinking about her, how his hand felt in his, but it was gone now. Over. The earphone fell out, and with this signal he got up from the wall and walked across the dim room. he came to his closet and put his fore head against the closet. the old wood creaked as it bared the weight. He hated this old house. after closing his eyes and puting his palms against the wore wood, he opened the closet. He picked out the huge raincoat. he was leaving. he slipped it on in no hurry. wen he was dressed he slipped passed his parents room, petting his cat beside the door before he left. he looked at his phone, it read 2;21 am. he walked with the hood on and his head down. he arrived at the park and observed its emptyness. he held his arms back and screamed 'WHYYY MEEEEE?????" the hood slipped back revealing his auburn hair. he left the hood down and broke into a run. he ran with his hair drenched to his face. he whispered to himself almost in a chant, "i can fix this, i can fix this" he ran untill he was across the street from her house. not thinking he ran into the busy street, the bright lights blinded him as he held out his hands in front of his face. the semi' s horn blarred temparilly deafining him. he turned towards her house with his seablue eyes. all the comotion brought her out side in her white robe she screamed "FLETCHERRR NOO!!!!!" no way he would get out of the way int time. he heard a crack and every thing was black. he swear he could hear an angel crying.. TO BE CONTINUED........ if u want me too Read the first post he said to PM it to him...
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Dark-Velvet-Revolver Vice Captain
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Posted: Fri Mar 11, 2011 11:56 am
i have to give this a go! biggrin
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