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 Posted: Sat Apr 29, 2006 1:20 pm
karma has too much hw!!!!
this is song i wrote.
dead love
so it's dead love, but it's love all the same
and i'm not saying that you are to blame
for making me feel this way.
but maybe some other day
you will find yourself to play
the foolish game of human pain.
whose lonly name
is love.
my love is dead cuz your sane head
there is instead of your love for me and
in your heart
cupid's dart
missed it's mark
and so hit me
first thing did see
was none but thee.
and now i pine
covered in grime
left by your words, my sould is in the clouds.
help me bring it down.
so it's dead love but it's love all the same
and i'm not saying that you are to blame
for my crushed heart in this cruel game.
whose lonly name
is love.
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Posted: Sat Apr 29, 2006 1:30 pm
Yay! I was hoping you'd post that! *applauds for 50 hours straight*
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Posted: Sat Apr 29, 2006 3:51 pm
holy crap vi. i posted that from memory! ^_^
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Posted: Sat Apr 29, 2006 4:44 pm
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Posted: Sat Apr 29, 2006 7:45 pm
Holy Frecking crap! I can't believe I haven't posted Bartender here! I know I posted it somewhere... wonder where. Hm.
Anyway, here it is...
Bartender
by Keri Noble
Bartender, another, and make it a double
I can't go home, I'm in some kind of trouble
What started so innocently turned to sin
And I can't get out, I am too deep in
Have you ever had everything you'd ever wanted-
A good life, good friends, and a loving companion?
Well, take a good look and pay real close attention
I threw it all away with reckless abandon
On a pair of caramel eyes
I found out how quickly I'd learned to lie
Don't judge me till you walk a mile in my shoes
Things aren't always as they seem
'Cause being with him was like falling asleep
Going home was like waking from some kind of dream
The kind that you hope never ends
But real life is not something I can suspend
Bartender, another, and make it a double
I can't go home, I'm in some kind of trouble
What started so innocently turned to sin
And I can't get out, I am too deep
Too deep
Too deep
In
Too deep in
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Posted: Sat Apr 29, 2006 7:54 pm
Here's another good one:
b***h
by Meredith Brooks
I hate the world today
You're so good to me, I know, but I can't change
Tried to tell you but you look at me like maybe
I'm an angel underneath
Innocent and sweet
Yesterday I cried
You must have been relieved to see a softer side
I can understand how you'd be so confused
I don't envy you
I'm a little bit of everything
All rolled into one
I'm a b***h, I'm a lover
I'm a child, I'm a mother
I'm a sinner, I'm a saint
I do not feel ashamed
I'm your hell, I'm your dream
I'm nothing in between
You know you wouldn't want it any other way
So take me as I am
This may mean you have to be a stronger man
Rest assured that when I start to make you nervous
And I'm going to extremes
Tomorrow I will change
And today won't mean a thing
I'm a b***h, I'm a lover
I'm a child, I'm a mother
I'm a sinner, I'm a saint
I do not feel ashamed
I'm your hell, I'm your dream
I'm nothing in between
You know you wouldn't want it any other way
Just when you think you've got me figured out
The season's already changing
I think it's cool, you do what you do
And don't try to save me
I'm a b***h, I'm a lover
I'm a child, I'm a mother
I'm a sinner, I'm a saint
I do not feel ashamed
I'm your hell, I'm your dream
I'm nothing in between
You know you wouldn't want it any other way
I'm a b***h, I'm a tease
I'm a goddess on my knees
When you hurt, when you suffer
I'm your angel undercover
I've been numbed, I'm revived
Can't say I'm not alive
You know I wouldn't want it any other way
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Posted: Sat Apr 29, 2006 7:56 pm
yay!!!! you sang me bartender!
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Posted: Sat Apr 29, 2006 7:59 pm
Yesh, me did! =U And you sang me Dead Love! =U
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Posted: Sat Apr 29, 2006 9:14 pm
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Posted: Sun May 14, 2006 8:31 pm
The current best poem I've ever written is in my journal.
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Posted: Wed May 17, 2006 5:46 pm
*holds out hand* give it.
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Posted: Thu May 18, 2006 7:42 am
Nonono! Not TLBNOE, although that IS where I first wrote it. It's in my GAIA journal.
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Posted: Mon May 22, 2006 6:06 am
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Posted: Mon May 22, 2006 6:08 am
here is one of mine - I have no idea what's it's about but feel free to try! seriosuly...isn't it weird, I'd love to know your opinions on it.
OdD (Odd)
A secret of hell
a whisper of heaven
a silence that speaks
with fear and terror
a life for a life
and death is what you receive
an eye for an eye
and no one can see
beauty and pain
freedom and detain
laughing through tears
smiling through beers
wondering silently
wishing
but hoping
still grasping and holding on to idea's
slipping away
falling slowly
dreaming until the moon
rises again.
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Posted: Mon May 22, 2006 6:56 pm
Wow, that's so good! Sounds to me like you were basically trying to describe what life is. Muy awesome. (Gotta love Spanglish. Yo no soy un pueblo.) Anyway, I think you captured a lot of it pretty well. 3nodding
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