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Posted: Mon Oct 19, 2009 6:29 pm
((It's not a super-secret forbidden technique, it's built in to every human being. If Gai developed it then he wouldn't know about the effects of the Gate of Death without having experienced them himself, something that is self-evidently false.))
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Posted: Mon Oct 19, 2009 6:44 pm
((illink: Because Hirose knows how to activate all 8 gates as well. twisted
Doc: I gotta take a moment to admire you man. I thought you were the type to run or dodge for a moment there. Unfortunately this is where the show ends. Hirose's clan is the Fuuton Masters, a clan that gives him almost complete control and immunity to wind at his rank. This is why he was able to manipulate wind to drive smoke at you without moving, and why he can use wind to move at superspeed. As for the Cody thing, well I thought his ability to block pretty much a demon fire nuclear bomb was kinda unbelievable. He didn't want his character to die just for trying to help you out, and I don't feel honorable killing him this way but I can't stand BS excuses for getting out of something this powerful without reason. The byakugan spin can block away a lot of stuff, I'm sure, but I'm pretty sure it can't stop an explosion of this magnitude. So, I told him that I'd let him get away so long as he had his character quit the akatsuki. I never ordered him to join Cloud. I said that if he didn't have a village to go back to, then I'd take him in if nobody else would. Lastly, you said you were intangible to the elements, and this is true, but you can't be intangible if you never posted going into that state now can you? This is what this is. That last post, the one where I dove headfirst at you, that was my attack. By rule, because the defense you put up against that attack will do nothing to stop or even hinder me, the attack goes through (if I'm not mistaken), and in this case you die. ))
A sudden explosion of wind jumped off of Hirose as he muttered, "Seventh Gate: Gate of Shock, open!" This explosion of power would help Hirose not only increase his speed and power even further, but confront the winds Zattenai sent at him, weakening them. The rest of the wind mysteriously died away as soon as it got even close to Hirose, and with Zattenai showing no signs of stopping Hirose completed his head-first dive and instantly shot his smoky form into Zattenai's mouth and down his throat. Hirose's voice would then whisper into Zattenai's head, "Go to him." Suddenly Hirose took pysical form inside Zattenai's body, exploding him from the inside out, and making the sky rain with his blood and body parts as a gore-drenched Hirose stood in the rain.
( Name: Kemuri Splicer Translation: "Smoke" Splicer Type: (nin, gen, tai, etc.) Taijutsu Element(s): Smoke Effect: User shifts into smoke form and leaps into the target's mouth (or let's them inhale him). Then, from inside the enemy's body, the user shifts back into the physical them, exploding the enemy from the inside out in the process! A very gruesome deathblow that instantly kills the target and leaves them drenched in their blood and guts. Other: Jounin Ranked )
((One last word: FATALITY lol))
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Posted: Mon Oct 19, 2009 7:24 pm
((Uh... the reason I never posted him entering that state is because he never left it. Intangibility is his ground state of existence, like with Skin in the X-Men comics: He has to concentrate to stay corporeal. And you seem to forget that Cody is also a Kage-rank shinobi. He can block it because he is of that rank and using that jutsu. Though I agree that it's a line of bullshit, it's still authentic bullshit. And Zattenai is moving now at an appreciable fraction of the speed of light. His last post will be him using something that no-one really remembers him having: Hyoton chakra.))
Zattenai could feel the Raikage inside him, the inhuman mist covering his vision as he bunched his legs for one final attack. His death was preordained from this point, and so he would take the spectre attacking him to the grave with him. He had shied away from using his chakra for offensive purposes for many centuries, but now it would make no difference. He collected the last of his power inside of him as he felt Hirose begin to solidify. Concentrating his chakra, his last thought as the life began to flee from him was of his descendant, now dead, and what would happen to the world in later years...
In one last burst of power and chakra to equal and surpass even the Nine-tails, Zattenai Sibadaki died, freezing himself and the Lord Raikage inside a glacier of ice as dense as steel.
((And if you can get out of that then I'm calling Uber-foul.))
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Posted: Tue Oct 20, 2009 9:24 am
((This was a fast but epic fight guys, i enjoyed reading it, but yea Hirose cant get out of that, that was a good move by Zattenai. It was a good fight guys, thanks! whee ))
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Posted: Tue Oct 20, 2009 5:06 pm
Inside the glacier, the flowing power from Hirose continued to burn.A woman's voice echoed in his head, "I wonder, is this going to be your first encounter with death, dear child?" A long pause came from the frozen Hirose before it answered back, "Of course not." His eyes suddenly open and his body erupted with demonic nibi flames, burning a large hole around him within the glacier. This wasn't the end though. A second tail sprouted out from his backside and his skin started shredding away. He shook his head in rage and the hood came off, revealing a long mane of crimson red hair. Suddenly his body exploded with blue/black demonic fire and the fully transformed two-tailed Nibi blasted out of the glacier, his unnatural flames melting the hyoton ice in seconds. Hirose, still conscious of his being, growled through the cloud of steam that erected itself around him as his fire melted the ice on his fur. He glanced around at the empty wasteland and gave a lion's roar in victory. "Unburnable by fire, unfreezable by ice, I am that which cannot be explained, only feared. The Reaper of Cloud, HIROSE KEMURI CANNOT DIE!"
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Posted: Tue Oct 20, 2009 5:23 pm
A dark hooded figure was seen walking up the hill, His black and red cloak flapped in the wind as he approached the demon. Zero was now a good 100 feet away from it now as he came to a stop. He had set his eyes on this one before, but luck was in the demons favor as Zero was told to let him go. This time it was over, he had killed the old man and Zero did not like it one bit. He knew the demon would spot him, his only hope was that his first fight did not slow it down. Zero hated to end fights like that. His now eternal eyes that scarred his face for the rest of time called for the killing of the beast, but Zero had other plans for it
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Posted: Tue Oct 20, 2009 5:33 pm
Fenrir Graveheart Inside the glacier, the flowing power from Hirose continued to burn.A woman's voice echoed in his head, "I wonder, is this going to be your first encounter with death, dear child?" A long pause came from the frozen Hirose before it answered back, "Of course not." His eyes suddenly open and his body erupted with demonic nibi flames, burning a large hole around him within the glacier. This wasn't the end though. A second tail sprouted out from his backside and his skin started shredding away. He shook his head in rage and the hood came off, revealing a long mane of crimson red hair. Suddenly his body exploded with blue/black demonic fire and the fully transformed two-tailed Nibi blasted out of the glacier, his unnatural flames melting the hyoton ice in seconds. Hirose, still conscious of his being, growled through the cloud of steam that erected itself around him as his fire melted the ice on his fur. He glanced around at the empty wasteland and gave a lion's roar in victory. "Unburnable by fire, unfreezable by ice, I am that which cannot be explained, only feared. The Reaper of Cloud, HIROSE KEMURI CANNOT DIE!" ((ya one thing....how did you use fire if you don't have a air supply? demon or not it is still fire...but i don't care...just post))
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Posted: Tue Oct 20, 2009 5:39 pm
((dude... that is bullshit. Complete. Utter. Bullshit. You're in your smoke form, which means you're separated into trillions of tiny particles, and you're sealed within a mountain of ice as dense as diamond. You cannot possibly escape that, especially since the jutsu was cast by a shinobi that was as of that moment several hundred times the strength of a regular Kage. Gate of Death makes a Genin equal to a Kage. It can make a Kage equal to a god. You cannot possibly escape that ice mountain. Hirose Kemuri can die, and is dead. If I have to I'll take it up with Huntur.))
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Posted: Tue Oct 20, 2009 5:42 pm
Cody Hyuuga walked up.'Wow zattenai put up a fight" he said as he walked up to Zattenais Sword and grabbed it "Near might want this" he said as he put the sword on his back. "Well well Looks like Zattenai did not kill him' he said to Zero as he walked up to Zero.
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Posted: Tue Oct 20, 2009 5:43 pm
Doctor_Whiteface ((dude... that is bullshit. Complete. Utter. Bullshit. You're in your smoke form, which means you're separated into trillions of tiny particles, and you're sealed within a mountain of ice as dense as diamond. You cannot possibly escape that, especially since the jutsu was cast by a shinobi that was as of that moment several hundred times the strength of a regular Kage. Gate of Death makes a Genin equal to a Kage. It can make a Kage equal to a god. You cannot possibly escape that ice mountain. Hirose Kemuri can die, and is dead. If I have to I'll take it up with Huntur.)) ((take img frames.....he will go in and try to change stuff)) past experience sweatdrop
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Posted: Tue Oct 20, 2009 5:43 pm
(( Doctor is right. You are in smoke form you cant take on a Demon from in Smoke.))
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Posted: Tue Oct 20, 2009 5:45 pm
xX Death Soldier Xx Cody Hyuuga walked up.'Wow zattenai put up a fight" he said as he walked up to Zattenais Sword and grabbed it "Near might want this" he said as he put the sword on his back. "Well well Looks like Zattenai did not kill him' he said to Zero as he walked up to Zero. ((hold up cody...this can be bs so just hold out.....))
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Posted: Tue Oct 20, 2009 5:47 pm
((I know but I can edit it in a second to fit the Stuff.))
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Posted: Tue Oct 20, 2009 5:47 pm
xX Death Soldier Xx (( Doctor is right. You are in smoke form you cant take on a Demon from in Smoke.)) ((if he was smoke he killed his a**.....when he runs out of chakra his body will like implode in the ice XD...ouch......so how do we get him out without killing him? and so we don't set him free?))
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