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Posted: Wed Dec 02, 2009 7:29 pm
{With regards to what Cobra said in the previous post, I think that both of you need to try to understand better what is being said in each other's post. Clearly both of you don't seem to understand what the other is trying to say, that or you're clearly not reading each others post except the last line. If you guys have trouble understanding each other, pm/comment to each other or post in OOC, don't just go ahead and post what you believe is being said.
Another thing, Hiro, you can't just go and assume your attack hits someone. Hiro Devoncroix of Antov As the blizzard continued little blades begin to cut you causing bleeding all over your body. Hiro's voice could be heard but he could not be seen as he said "You think i have a choice against this curse...I was born with this and with it comes power but at a price...I go day after day in horrible pain more then you could imagine....and with that i bid you adue." as he finished the blizzard pciked up speed as did the blades at least until he gave up or if he could somehow stop the blizzard. By writing it like this, it doesn't give your opponent a chance to dodge the attack but in Narkosa's case, he had several confused shadow clones out? Lastly, you can't just go and claim the win without discussing it with your opponent, that or they give in to the fight. Cause otherwise, it wouldn't be fair.}
{Okay, enought about Hiro, Narkosa's turn. First off, I've read over the post and I really don't recall you ever mentioning taking your fan off. The following post was the first I've heard of it and well, it just made me think 'when did he mention anything about a fan?'
Narkosa2512 A shadow pass over Narkosa as Hiro appeared and disappeared suddenly. He watched as the blizzard formed creating Hiro's jutsu "Oh well you rely too heavily on that Drakengan I don't need to be faster just smarter," he said getting into position. Narkosa knew he wasn't going to be able to dodge whatever was coming, but he wasn't weighed down as much now that his fan was gone he would fight at full speed.
Over all both of you just need to double check your posts before posting because when I was reading over it, some words were missing therefore causing the whole post to sound a bit off. And lastly, you guys just need to remember to clearly explain things in order to avoid confusion.}
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Posted: Thu Dec 03, 2009 3:07 am
Ok listen he could have avoided this whole thing with a little fire style anything because I am using snow it would melt...Second I claim win because 1 he isnt here 2 because he didnt dodge or counter my attack correctly.
Next to Cobra's post one can be a genin and powerful because look at Naruto who hadnt been changed into chunin yet he kicks everyones a** including able to use justsu's Sanin level poeple would use as well as other powerful ones So dont go around saying Genin can tbe that powerful because obviously they can.
I can understand how he didnt lose because of the fan yes and thats a good arguement the only real good argument thatwas said yet because it was clear that there were no clouds and he didnt read the post.
About the disappering its called being faster then the weapon and or other person. Being so fast it makes it seem like you disappear.
And about the whole stopping the skurikan. The reason that is possible is because my demonic aura is on it so when i say heat seaking its basically because im controling it through the not seeable ties that still exist through my own demonic aura or Chakra which someone cant control through some technique such as that.
I will say that i to would or might have got hit from the ink explosion but rather then that it would have continued me having to wipe the ink of my face. meening that was unneeded.
And about the godmodding sure i forgot a few key points but rather then that you simply are a idiot to not realize that genins can do that and that it is possible for someone of low social rank to be as powerful as someone with a high social rank simply you have nothing to prove rather then me missing a few things so -golf claps- nice try but you have failed.
Now enough about the failure. Lilly when i posted that it was because I wondered where the fan came from and what clouds was he jumping over so since he messed up the proper Rp response to the attack would be a hit and that is exactly what the blizzard would have done. (Also do you really think im gonna give all my moves to you Metagamers....I think not) but anyway You are right we both messed up but mine wasnt life threating to my character while Narkrosa's was. -nods- Next time Cobra think before you speak and Lilly good observaition at least you didnt fail in this as Cobra had.
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Posted: Thu Dec 03, 2009 5:08 am
((OKay thank you. You twoYes I did make some screw ups and I am sorry for that. I will try and Hiro you should have asked me what i mean about cloud which is stated
1. Any collection of particles (e.g., smoke or dust) or gases that is visible.
All in alll it doesn't really matter what happen alll I know is that I learn something, and that will make me a better RPer))
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Posted: Thu Dec 03, 2009 8:53 am
Hiro Devoncroix of Antov Ok listen he could have avoided this whole thing with a little fire style anything because I am using snow it would melt...Second I claim win because 1 he isnt here 2 because he didnt dodge or counter my attack correctly. You can't just claim wins. I don't know what gives you the idea that you can, it's a ridiculous concept. One misstep means they fail? I dare you to RP me and not make a single mistake, or misread a step here or there. If he made a mistake, point it out to him and then respond to his edit.Hiro Devoncroix of Antov Next to Cobra's post one can be a genin and powerful because look at Naruto who hadnt been changed into chunin yet he kicks everyones a** including able to use justsu's Sanin level poeple would use as well as other powerful ones So dont go around saying Genin can tbe that powerful because obviously they can. You're not Naruto. Also, Naruto uses two ninjutsu total. Kage Bunshin no Jutsu, and Rasengan w/ offshoots of Rasengan. Both are abilities only possibly through his immensely large chakra reserves. He's the most boring ninja ever. Also, power level of a character is one thing, but the power level of the RPer is another. A genin can beat a sannin in an RP, I agree, HOWEVER, they have to roleplay it well and impress people. In this case, I was more impressed with Narkosa's posts then yours as his showed genuine counter-action and reaction with specific tactics. Hiro Devoncroix of Antov About the disappering its called being faster then the weapon and or other person. Being so fast it makes it seem like you disappear. People misuse this type of movement far too often. It's unfair. A technique that allows for high speed movement should involve a seal or a jutsu of some kind. (or otherwise a special ability that is noted in a profile through bloodline or otherwise.) There is such a thing as fair play in a ninja RP and just disappearing and reappearing all the time is a lazy way of being wherever you want and looking badass without the RP responsibility of describing what you are doing.Hiro Devoncroix of Antov And about the whole stopping the skurikan. The reason that is possible is because my demonic aura is on it so when i say heat seaking its basically because im controling it through the not seeable ties that still exist through my own demonic aura or Chakra which someone cant control through some technique such as that. Totally not in your profile that you can even do this, or that you can make the demon shurikan from regular shuriken. I know that you don't like us "metagamers" knowing your techniques, but I'm sorry you need to follow the rules just like everyone else...just like in every other responsible RP...and tell us what you can do. If you don't trust us to RP responsibly, that's your problem, not ours, and I won't have you running around using whatever techniques you want just because your character has a demon in them.. Hiro Devoncroix of Antov I will say that i to would or might have got hit from the ink explosion but rather then that it would have continued me having to wipe the ink of my face. meening that was unneeded. I have a hard time faulting you here, as the description wasn't precisely clear. HOWEVER, It was very clear that the explosion was an exploding tag, not exploding ink (though im sure the tag was written with Narkosa's living ink). You simply did not respond to it. By your earlier theory, this means Narkosa should have "claimed the win" as an explosion is a rather deadly thing which you ignored.Hiro Devoncroix of Antov And about the godmodding sure i forgot a few key points but rather then that you simply are a idiot to not realize that genins can do that and that it is possible for someone of low social rank to be as powerful as someone with a high social rank simply you have nothing to prove rather then me missing a few things so -golf claps- nice try but you have failed. Nonono, it's not what you missed that made you godmodding, it was your actions and your ASSUMPTION that you are stronger then Narkosa in every way. In every post, no matter what Narkosa did, you dodged it, or halted what he was doing like it was child's play. You thread your fingers through the holes in his shuriken...you laughed whenever he attacked you as if it was nothing...you dodged his attacks 'with great ease' at all turns. In the scope of the fight, THIS IS MODDING. Your nonchalant attitude towards a fight from someone at your same rank is testament to this.Hiro Devoncroix of Antov (Also do you really think im gonna give all my moves to you Metagamers....I think not) Well I'm sorry sir. Those are the rules. For a jutsu as complex as the blizzard one...we need a description. MY profile, which I believe Death referred you to for a model of how to make a previously powerful character weaker, details every aspect of my character's abilities. Full Bloodline information, Jutsu, backstory, and the sword I use...INCLUDING forms and abilities I CAN'T EVEN USE YET, w/ descriptions of WHEN they can be used and what is required to use them. I made it like that purposefully and I trust that people won't metagame, and they don't. You need to employ the same trust.Hiro Devoncroix of Antov but anyway You are right we both messed up but mine wasnt life threating to my character while Narkrosa's was. He saw clouds when indeed there were no clouds...I don't consider that "life-threatening". The point remains that you saw a mistake and TOOK a win, and that's just not acceptable.
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Posted: Thu Dec 10, 2009 1:47 pm
(( Wow, where do I start? Umm... I think I should go right out and say that it was easier to see through the snow in this training ground than it was to see through the God-Modding. Actually, hold up a minute, I need to find another facepalm.... Now that that's out of my system, let's start! Hiro, shut up. This is not Naruto, we are only loosely based on Naruto's world (does not include the characters). This means we follow their ideas of "magic" (powers), the time period, government, and military set up. We even make adjustments on those things. Everything else is out-of-bounds. Also, if you were as powerful as Naruto, you'd still be God-Modding... a lot. So stop it. As for you Narkosa!!!! I'm proud to have you as a member of this village. A great ninja is made by using simple techniques in smart ways to defeat powerful and complex attacks. You did just that by using genin level moves to get around Hiro's God-Modding. (It kind of reminds me of myself.) Yes, you did have some mistakes and you have plenty to improve on, but your realization of that fact is what separates you from Hiro. You realize that you should learn from every battle and you don't try to argue with the moderators when we point out your mistakes; you take it as a learning opportunity, as everyone should. Good for you! And that's what I got to say 'bout that!))
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Posted: Sun Jan 10, 2010 1:45 pm
Ryoku ran on to the training grounds "Haruko sensei,I guess I beat her here great now i have to wait for her and its freezing here, wait a minute"ryoku said as he started to make a fire thyat immediately went out"oh yea its snowing,censored"
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Posted: Sun Jan 10, 2010 3:39 pm
{Sorry I took so long to reply, I was working on something. Anyways not bad for a first responce. You've remembered to capitalized mostly everything that required capitalization. You've misused/forgot several puncuations and mispelled several things as well. Don't forget to read over your post before posting it and use spell check for words you're uncertain of. I've used red to mark the mistakes so that you could compare it.
true bboy Ryoku ran on to the training grounds "Haruko sensei ,?I guess I beat ed her here . Ggreat now Ii have to wait for her and its freezing here ,. Wwwait a minute ," Rryoku said as he started to make a fire th yat immediately went out , " Ooh yea its snowing, censored ." }
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Posted: Sun Jan 10, 2010 4:47 pm
Ryoku turned his head"Hhhharuko sensei your here" ryoku said standing and bowing(finally i thought i was going tofrezze to death crying )
(Yea I dont no how I missed all of those mistakes but I know I didnt say beated stare xp )
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Posted: Sun Jan 10, 2010 5:01 pm
Haruko entered the snow training field and smiled at her student. "It's cold in here isn't it Ryoku-san. Best we get started right away to warm up our bodies. You can have the first move by the way." Haruko pulled her scarf tighter around her neck in an attempt to get warmer while shifting into a defensive stance.
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Posted: Sun Jan 10, 2010 5:08 pm
"Ok this should be fun"Ryoku said charging at Haruko with a high powered punch
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Posted: Sun Jan 10, 2010 5:25 pm
Haruko watched as Ryoku started off the fight with a powering pounch, digging her feet deeper into the snow, Haruko waited till the last possible moment and sidestepped. Haruko had planned to sidestep around Ryoku's attack and then elbow him in the stomach but as soon as her left feet touched the snow to the right, she felt her footing falter and slid. So instead of sidestepping, it looked as if Haruko simply did part of the splits in order to lower her self under his attack. Quickly recomposing herself, Haruko placed chakra on her hands for a grib before leaning over to her right and placing both hands down on the ground as support. Once she got a good solid grip, Haruko swept her left leg towards Ryoku hoping to catch his legs in a sweap kick.
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Posted: Sun Jan 10, 2010 5:44 pm
As soon as she hit Ryoku's leg he vanished in puff of smoke"perfect distraction"she heard ryoku say coming at her with a kick from where the clone had just vanished
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Posted: Tue Jan 12, 2010 1:56 pm
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Posted: Thu Jan 14, 2010 1:46 pm
(um hello water lilly confused )
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Posted: Thu Jan 14, 2010 2:28 pm
{Sorry about not replying for awhile, I was busy with the village acdemy stuff and I also have exams to study for so sorry. Anyways you need to be a bit more descriptive in your posts or some stuff won't make sense. In your post you didn't mention anything about handsigns instead your character just vanished upon contact. Then there's also the incoming attack, from what I can tell, your character made a clone at the last second to block my sweepkick and then your character just aims a kick at me? Remember that my character is still lying close to the ground so how does your kick work? Are you aiming a downward kick towards my stomach? Stuff like that is vital information.}
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