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 Posted: Thu Sep 10, 2009 3:05 pm
Just as Falcrim takes the last step he vanishes... it was a clone! In the distance Zane can hear KA... MEEEE... HA... MEEEEE... HAAAAAAAA!!!!!! All of a sudden a giant chackra blast comes towards Zane and hits him directly. Struggling to get up he sees a figure running towards him and it seems to be Falcrim! Falcrim screams "Hey Zane did you like my clone!" and preforms ice style: white whale and a humongous narwhal comes screaming towards Zane and next preforms puppet control jutsu in his narwhal and a it's coming at Zane the narwhal preforms Fire Release: Dragon Fire Technique along it's horn into Zane.
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Posted: Thu Sep 10, 2009 3:18 pm
"don't be follish"he mocked and he was gone.he preformed one of his clan's sacred jutsu,he preformed it as he was gone.sacred technique:ying-yang palm seal.andh he appered in front of flacrim .he struck his stomachwith both palm's togther and twisted the ying-yang seal appers on his stomach.then a blast from the attakc goes through is stomach thos ravealing the seal from the hole in his shirt.Then he jumped away from falcrim.
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Posted: Fri Sep 11, 2009 5:34 am
"Um yeah speak for yourself"said Falcrim as he began to dissipate... yet another clone and Falcrim appears behind Zane and with Astmalion cut's both his hands off," now you can't preform any jutsu" said Falcrim triumphantly and then uses ninja art: frozen shockwave to mortally wound Zane. The battle is over and the victor is Falcrim or should I say *poof* Falcrim's clones.
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Posted: Fri Sep 11, 2009 1:49 pm
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Posted: Fri Sep 11, 2009 1:50 pm
very well selyob and remeber i am 2 seat and i am your supiorer
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Posted: Fri Sep 11, 2009 1:58 pm
i actually was yours but i had tae kwon do and and i use Aka Higi: Hyakki no Soen (Red Secret Technique: Performance of a Hundred Puppets)
and i summon four clones
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Posted: Fri Sep 11, 2009 2:05 pm
very well,with out preforming a hand sign zane make's all the puppet's and clone's get pushed to the ground.with emennce force they can't get up.then the puppet's ar detroyed by an unkown force.and the clone's are gone.he Zane look's up at kiden"don't be so confident".he said and know the dojo was riddled with junk from all the puppet's. heraised his hand and the puppet junk rose and then he launched them at kiden "gravity palm" zane murmured as the debri hit kiden.
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Posted: Fri Sep 11, 2009 2:13 pm
All of a sudden Zane hears a familiar voice scream "I'M BACK!!!!!!!!!!!!!"... Falcrim. A massive Narwhal comes screaming at Zane and on top are 5 clones of Falcrim and Falcrim himself. The back three jump on the front 3's shoulders and in unison scream "KAAAA... MEEEE... HAAAA... MEEEE... HAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!" and a 6 prong energy blast comes at Zane at light speed and hits Zane directly, shortly after the white whale (Narwhal) impales Zane with it's horn mortally wounding Zane.
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Posted: Fri Sep 11, 2009 2:18 pm
good ur here sound village 4 secret technique grand fire wall as all but one clone performs
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Posted: Fri Sep 11, 2009 2:22 pm
Zane look's up at the incoming attack and smikres,he get's hit by the attack's but as the smoke clear's from both attack's.sane is still standing unharmed and he is not injured.the attack's are both heading at falcrim and the clones are gone. falcrim get's hit by the kamehameha and then he narwal' strikes his body. launching him into a tree and blasting him out of zane's way as he look's at kiden with a smile and he lift's his palm up and make's it a fist as it crush's kiden in the puppet junk.he mumbles"gravity palm" and smile's an evil smile.
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Posted: Fri Sep 11, 2009 2:33 pm
Hyoton: Roga Nadare no Jutsu (Ice Release: Wolf Fang Avalanche) and all of a sudden a giant pack of ice wolves appear from the remains of the white whale and come charging at Zane and behind a clone comes Zane is ripped to shreds by the wolves and stabbed 37 times in the chest with the naginata and every time he hits Zane he leaves sand in his body in every crevice imaginable and it starts to absorb Zane's chackra and the real Falcrim uses... Hyoro no Jutsu (Ice Prison Technique)
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Posted: Fri Sep 11, 2009 2:42 pm
zane look's at falcrim's bad attempt's at attacking him. he put up his and and all the attack's get blasted back at him, the clone was blasted back to and he was unharmed.he looked at falcrim,"don't even try"he said with a bored tone.
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Posted: Fri Sep 11, 2009 2:43 pm
Falcrim quickly uses the Hiraishin no Jutsu (Flying Thunder God Technique) to go behind Kiden's shield before he attacks again. When Falcrim is behind the shield he creates another clone. Umm 1 I already hit you 2 "gravity palm:the weilder mainly can control gravity and inhance it those mening it is just like the force in starwar's but i can push people down and inhance gravity on them" so you can only inhance gravity 3 you're a terrible speller and 4 Falcrim's clone uses his sharingan to to copy gravity palm and enhances gravity on Zane to a point where he brings Zane to his knees and Zane can't get up.
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Posted: Fri Sep 11, 2009 2:52 pm
ha that cant touch me as the pile of puppets burn by the sheilds touch
as he used chakra black hole to suck all of the enemys even the real and clones and using rasengan chadori earth blast techniqe to amazingly hurt him with massive force
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Posted: Fri Sep 11, 2009 3:58 pm
(nick you can't copy a clan jutsu and you can't weild that jutsu unless you are in my clan so it dosent work and plus u don't know how to control it)
he look's at the weak kiden and falcrim trying to kill him.he smirked he was still unharmed and not suprised by there attack's he was a speacalist at hie clan knowledge and strenght he can't be deafted by copy cat's or power hungry people.he was still untouched and not even hurt, he looked atr the pathetic peole in front of him. he point'd his finger at the wall of fire and a hole formed in the middle of it and the hole eventually grew bigger and bigger and destroyed the wall.Then he picked up thee two with gravity and then started to choke them.
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