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Okiedoke. I'll change the Light Clan thing and the Death Clan thing. But I tried to write the Malesc clan as if it doesn't have any extra abilities, if you could be more specific I'll get rid of that part. And please can I keep the Mals. Even if there not monsters, just some magic particle or whatever. I kinda really want to keep them.

Well, I posted it again in his PMs. Editted, yet again. But I do believe this will be the last time. (Also, I think I cut some things out of the profile I didn't mean to, Kuja.) But, just incase his PMs aren't working still, and also for the above reason I stated in parenthesis, here it is for the public.


(If you received my first one, then I will re-submit this. I was rather vague on his history my first attempt. This will be much better. Plus, I changed his appearance and armor. His first pick was more protection, and less functionality. This should fix that.)

Name: Apathy

Gender: Male

Clan: Death

Class: Dark Knight

Element: Pain

Personality and History: Cold, uncaring. He keeps to himself. Not one to really talk to others. Thus, not much of his history is know. He is a competant warrior, having both strength and a good sense of strategy. On the battlefield, he uses logic. He does have a problem with taking orders, though. The lone wolf of the clan. His true motivations are to do what is best for the clan, but on his own. He will work with others, when he absolutely must. Other than that, he spends most of his time reading in a corner somewhere, or training his element.

As stated before, he keeps to himself so not much is known about him. Truth be told, he comes from a rather wealthy family. Why, may you ask, has a noble joined the ranks of Death? Why not Sky? Or Earth? Or even Sky? Simple. Just like his personality, his path in life goes against the grain. He was sick of being told what he should be, and what he -could- amount to. Now, he is doing what -he- wants.

(As I thought, I forgot his personality. Bah! Here, this is what you didn't recieve in PM, Kuja.)

Apathy is a loner of the clan. Prefering to do things on his own, or not at all. He will, on occasion, work with others. But, he finds it much easier to just do things all 'lone-wolf'-like. He also has a bad case of 'defy authority' syndrome. Not afraid to stare a Clans Leader, even his own, in the face and tell him what he would do better. As ruthless as Kuja may be, Apathy lives true to his name. Unfeeling and uncaring. Meaning he is also immune to most fear-tactics.

When not doing things for his clan, he is usually found in some dark corner. Reading one of his books out of his plentiful collection. Or, he is training. Making himself better, stronger, ready for anything.

Appearance: Standing at 6' even, he dons a long, black, high-collared trenchcoat, riddled with steel plates sewn in around the collar, chest, shoulders, waist and down the rest of the way until it ends at the bottom. Underneith this is worn a simple white shirt, as well sewn throughout with steel plates across his pecs and along his abs. Made in an overlapping fashion to ensure mobility. On each hand, crimson gloves with a strong band of steel across the back of his knuckles. His pants are black, with steel overlapping plates sewn throughout the outside of each leg, over his knees and a stronger, thicker one upon each thigh. Ending with externally steel-toed boots.

Long raven hair hangs about his face, falling to around shoulder length. Streaked through it are white and red. Deep blue-crystal eyes stare out from underneith.

Lastly, upon his face is worn a crimson mask with black etchings upon it. Two long, broad lines down through the eyes, and around the mouth is painted the teeth and open maw of a demon. No one alive today has ever seen his face, except for his family. And who they are, only Apathy knows.

Other: Weapon. The Shippo No Ryu 2. Or Dragon's Tail 2, a variation of the weapon I first submitted. Its a sectioned sword. Breaks into many pieces, in which all are connected together by a thin but strong chain. Basically, converting the sword into a rather crude whip. Though, even with the chain, the sword can only reach up to 10 feet in length. So, it can be used for both swinging and stabbing, like a normal sword, or broken and a ranged weapon, for up to 10'.

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I've used that pole-arm for three years and it has never failed me ^_^. Always use it with my best characters. However, yes it would be difficult to sneak up on someone, so I'll probably either just get rid of the chainmail and redo something else. As for the class I knew something a bit more heavy would do better for the Sky clan considering, as you said most classes are light fighters. And good defense is a great offense, so I thought I'd just make a heavyarms character. I'll make one last tweak and then it should be finished. Hope to get into battle soon ^_^.

EDIT: Simply tweak really...just cut out some stuff and added a little. Just go back to the link I had above to get to it.

Thanx for the entry. about the katanas, only the cutting edges are diamond. What if i wrote that the katanas were past down through generations? Could i have them then. i'll edit the cuttng through wall thing and is there any strong metal in the storyline that i can replace the titanium with .

Woot. Thanks.